SwaSan OS: SONG - Page 9

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Jesi,

thank you thank you thank you. 😃😃😃

and I am so glad you liked it...super happy.

You know when anybody writes ..they write for some people. You are one of them for me on this forum.😛

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

So Sanskaar came, but not for Swara. Muhahaha. Good. But the sweet part is that he came because of Kavita😳 Usually I hate these past romantic interests interfering in my ship's current life but for some reason I like Kavita, and I like that he hasnt forgotten her. He remembers her in the best of ways😳

I love these small touches you add which portray their companionship...like Sanskaar giving her the chips packet but then taking it back seeing there is almost nothing left😆 and those late night talks😳It is these things which truly make your writing so different from others. There is no hawt hawt scenes🤪 just simple daily life & hence it is all the more beautiful.

It was only after meeting Sanskaar that Swara found the song which was in her heart. How totally romantic is that

I loved the song. I had read the OS yesterday but was waiting to get back home & listen to the song before commenting. Lovely lyrics, it is custom made for SwaSan

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Medha 🤗 I feel so good after reading SwaSan's stories 😳
And as i always said it's always a treat to read your stories. You manage so well to capture the emotions 👏 I never heard about the song neither i know bengali. But i listened to it (thank you for posting the link 😳) and i loved it ❤️ It fit perfectly for SwaSan <3
Swara and Sanskar's conversation are always beautiful. The chips's eating scene was a delight
And then the night scene. How beautifully you have penned it down 👏 The lyrics's translation ❤️ I love this song now 😳 And this line:
"Its my favourite song Sanskaar. Yet I did not understand it at all before you entered and are now trying to exit my life. I miss you" ❤️
They kept talking all the night without even realizing that it was morning aww This two ❤️
Keep writing Medha 😳

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Thank you Shruti😃

Sanskaar does not have to pine for his old love every day. People don't. It hurts and then they get back to their old life..with the pain becoming a memory.But they did love them...and what better way to respect them than help others in their remembrance?

and yes, he came for Kavita. He would always come for Kavita. After all, in that case--both returned ech other's love. Not like this one, where one side is apparently so confused she needs a bomb blast to penetrate that thick skull of hers.😡

@bold...thats the loveliest thing anybody has ever said about my writing. 😳

I'm glad you found the song lovely and apt. Its one of my favourites. Used to train in Rabindrasangeet when i was younger..and then what with dance, music and studies...music took a backseat.

Sanskaar gave swara everything he had...and took it back...just because she was going on taking and giving nothing back.😳.But his last chip was still reserved for her.😊

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Preet🤗🤗,

How were your exams? Went well I hope.

Thank you...and i wanted sadistically to make swara realise

how much she misses him when he is not there. She has had access to him without even trying...and not realised his worth, because she awayi got him.😕

I am happy that you liked the song..its one of my favourites.

Your reply made my day.🤗🤗

Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Exams were good, just a last exam on monday and then i can enjoy my holidays 😆
Really? I'm so glad that my comment made your day 🤗

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

@red: how do u manage this every single time?!!! u understand him so well.

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Thanks. I do not know your name. Tell me.😃

Exactly, she wanted him there...not anyone else..because he has that special place in her heart. You know like we want to show off to people we really wanna impress...and who are really close to us..like mom dad..and significant others.

and yes, Laksh is out of the picture for me. he makes any swasanlicious picture go dull.🤢

Originally posted by: .Regal.

My name is Isha, and I assume your is Medha 😛

A no Laksh scene or story is what I want always now😆. He is always messing up Swasan's vibe. 😡Staring through windows like a stalker. 🤢