PART 14 Updt Pg 82 -PYAAR HOTA HAIN DEEWAANA SANAM--SWASAN SS

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My dear readers,

I am really very sorry for the very very late update.. Actually this story was getting a low amount of response than my other two fics, so I became somewhat lazy to update..But then some of my readers started to ask me to update this story too.. I felt that I ought to fulfill my responsibility of being a writer, that I should complete the story I had started once..

So here I am with the next update 😃 Sorry friends I am not replying to all your comments individually, the reason being my slow net connection.. I wanted to thank you one and all who have posted their opinions, comments and likes too, I love you all my dears 🤗

PART 13

Later all of them walked down towards the beach. Sanskaar was wearing a Denim bermuda shorts and a black t-shirt. Samar was wearing a red colour t-shirt and jeans. Adarsh was wearing a striped black and grey t-shirt and jeans. Ragini was wearing a green kurta and jeans where as Swara was wearing a black jeans and navy blue shirt. Parineeta was wearing a white summer frock and Sonia was wearing a yellow colour tank top beige palazzo pants. Every one of them had their goggles on since they had to go down on to the beach. Swara approached Sanskaar and pulled him away from the others.
Sw: Sanskaar..Main kuch poonchloon tumse..?
Sa: (smiles) Arre Swara..Tum kabse permission maangne lagi mujhse..Poonchlo..
Sw: Waise tum aur Sonia baahar kahan chale gaye the..?
Sa: Err..Woh..Hum bas..
Swara didn't let him complete his words, and she posed the next question which was troubling her.
Sw: Aur haan...Why was she whispering into your ear..? I mean..What did she tell you..?
Sa: (tries to laugh) Swaraa..Kahin tumhein jalan toh nahin ho rahi..? (winks)
Sw: (angrily) Baat ko ghumaao mat Sanskaar..Sach sach batao..
Sa: Ok baaba bataata hoon.. She just wanted my help with something..!
Sw: What kind of help..?! (doubtful look)
Sa: (irritatedly) Offo.. Stop questioning me like this Swara..Don't you trust me..?!
Sw: Pata nahin Sanskaar..(looks away) Lekin Lakshya ke uss harkat ke baad, I am afraid to trust anyone..!
Sanskaar felt fury bubbling inside him, and he glared at Swara.
Sa: Tum mujhpe shaq kar rahi ho, Swara..?!!
Sw: (looks at him defiantly) Toh tum sach kyun nahin bata sakte..?
Sa: (sighs) You know what Swara..Tumhein jaise sochna hain, tum soch sakti ho..Main nahin bataaoonga..!
And he walked away, towards Adarsh and Samar without a backward glance. Swara watched him go with an unbelievable expression.
Ragini was noticing all this from a distance and she at once knew that they just had a fight.
Ra: (to Pari) Parineeta..Main abhi aayi..
She walked towards Swara with a frown on her lovely face.
Ra: Swara..Did you just fight with him..?
Sw: (nods with a sad face) Haan Ragini..I was just asking him about what that Sonia was whispering into his ears..(then angrily) And you know what, he didn't give me a clear answer..! (looks away impatiently) and I asked him again and again and he felt that I don't trust him..
Ra: Offo Swara..Tum abhi bhi woh baat leke baithi ho..(places her arm around Swara's shoulder)
Just then Swara looked at Sanskaar and she was shocked to see that Sanskaar was again talking with Sonia.
Sw: Dekho Ragini..He is again talking to her..(angrily) Main jaa rahi hoon andar..Tum logon ko enjoy karna hain to karo..Mujhe nahin karna..
Swara walked back into the private beach house and Samar was watching her with a victorious smile. Everything was happening just the way he had anticipated. He glanced towards his sister Sonia, and saw her smiling at him. She was with Sanskaar, but Sanskaar was looking at the sea. Samar smiled back and gave her a thumbs up secretly, to which she nodded pointedly.
Sonia casually placed her hand on his shoulder.
So: (excitedly) Chalo na, Sanskaar..Lets go to the water's edge..
Adarsh, Parineeta and Ragini already had their feet in the water. He suddenly wondered were Swara was. He looked around and didn't see her anywhere.
Sa: (frowns) Mera mood nahin hain, Sonia..Tum chale jaao na..Main abhi aata hoon..
Sonia suddenly realized that he wanted to go looking for Swara. So, in order to stop him, she knew just the right thing to say.
So: Ruko Sanskaar..Ek minute..Mere paas ek plan hain..!
Sa: (looks at her ) Kya matlab..?
So: Offo Sanskaar, we had planned to give a surprise to Swara na.. Lets go to a nearby town and buy the things needed for her surprise.
Sanskaar thought, " I know Swara is angry with me..I couldn't talk to her about the surprise we have planned for her, and so I was not able to give her a straight answer, when she asked about my conversation with Sonia..Why can't she trust me..And she is comparing me with that Lakshya..", he gritted his teeth with fury. Sonia guessed what he was thinking about.
So: (softly) Soch kya rahe ho, Sanskaar..Aao na..
Sa: Ok Sonia..Let's go..!
Sanskaar thought that this surprise idea was important to make Swara happy again, and he followed Sonia, towards Samar's car.
Swara was sitting in the living room couch, trying to read a magazine, but the only thing was that her mind was not in it.
Just then she heard the sound of a car starting, and she went over to the glass windows to see who it was. Her heart twisted with agony as she witnessed Sanskaar and Sonia going out somewhere together.
Fresh tears sprang up in her beautiful eyes and she wept silently. Just then she felt a hand on her shoulder and she turned to see its owner. It was none other than Samar, his eyes full of concern for Swara. Swara hastily wiped off her tears and tried to smile at him.
Sw: Hi..
Sm: Arre Swara..Tum yahan kyun khadi ho..? Sab log bahar hain na..Tum bhi aao na..
Sw: Nahin, Samar..Sorry, I am not feeling well..Head ache..(smiles feebly)
Sm: Acha..Oh..That is why you came back..Ok, so I will stay with you..Till the others come back..Kuch chahiye tumhein.. strong tea or coffee..
Sw: (shakes her head, then politely) Arre nahin nahin..Kuch nahin chahiye Samar..thank you..(smiles)
Sm: (smiles) Acha, teek hain..
Swara's eyes kept darting towards the glass window, through which the main gates were visible.
Sm: Tum baar baar gate ki taraf kyun dekh rahi ho..?
But he knew why, she was badly waiting for Sanskaar and Sonia to return.
Sw:(shakes her head) Nahin toh..I was just..
Sm: (acts as if he is hurt) Do you want to go back to Pune, Swara..Are you feeling bored here..? Are you not able to enjoy here, at our beach house.. Didn't you like coming with me..?
Sw: (politely) Aisi koi baat nahin hain, Samar..Your family beach house is really beautiful..And I love Mumbai and its beaches..And yours is a private beach na..Its so calm and cozy here..I really love this place..
Sm: (smiles) Thanks Swara..In fact, Main tumse maafi maangna chaahta tha..
Sw: (frowns) Woh kyun..?
Sm: Maine tumhe bahut tang kiya tha na, starting mein..Tumse dance karwaya..tumhein daraaya dhamkaya..I know that you used to hate me then..!
Sw: (giggles ) Aisa kuch nahin hain, Samar..Main aapse darti toh thi..Par nafrat nahin karti thi..(smiles wide)
Sm: (places his hands over his heart) Thank god..! Tum teekh se hansi toh sahi..!
Sw: (giggles even more) Stop it Samar..!
Sm: Teek hain..I think you are feeling better now..
Sw: (smiles ) A little bit..
Sm: (gets up) Ok then chalo..Beach pe jaake enjoy karte hain..Sab ke saath..
Sw: (shrugs) Ok, Samar..Chalo..
Samar and Swara came out of the house and were now walking towards the beach. Swara was watching Adarsh, Parineeta and Ragini who were playing by splashing the sea water at each other and she didn't notice a big stone in her way. Swara was about to hit her foot on the sharp edge of the stone, but Samar caught hold of her arm and slighly pulled her away even before she hit herself.
Sw: (shocked) Why are you..
Sm: (concerned voice) Swaraa..be careful..you didn't see that stone..you could have been hurt..
Sw: (realizes her mistake) Oohh..Thanks, Samar..!
Sm: Now don't start thanking me..I just want you to be more careful..(smiles)
Sw: (smiles) Phir bhi..thank you, Samar..
Sm: Ok.. mujhe thanks nahin chahiye..Kuch aur chahiye..
Sw: (funny expression) Acha..? Kya..?
Samar just caught hold of her hand and broke into a run, tugging Swara along with him.
Sm: Bhaaagooo...! (laughs)
Sw: (laughs) Hey just stop it please..I
Sm: (still running)No way..!! Its fun, isn't it..!
Sw: (runs with him, and pants for breath) Ohh Myyy God..!! Okk...
Both of them reached the others and Ragini was happy to see Swara back. She smiled wide and hugged Swara.
Ra: Swara..thank god, at least you are smiling now..
Sw: (hugs her back) I am ok Ragini..
Ra: Waise Sanskaar kahan hain..? Was he there in the house with you..?
Sw: (slumps her shoulders with a frustrated sigh, and then ) Dekho Ragini..Please..Lets not talk about him..! (looks away with a forlorn face)
Ra: (concerned) Kya baat hain Swara..Sab kuch teek nahin hain kya..?
Sw: (sighs impatiently and looks at her, in a sad tone) Kuch teek nahin hain Ragini..Tumhein pata hain..Sanskaar uss Sonia ke saath kahin baahar chala gaya..Kya, woh dono kisi se kuch bataa ke nahin jaa sakte the..?
Ra: (softly) Swaraa..Mujhe lagta hain ke tum kuch zyaada soch rahi ho..Kuch important kaam aa gaya hoga..Bataane ka time nahin milaa hoga..Tum Sanskaar ko jaanti ho na..He loves you so much..Jab woh aayega na, tum usse poonch lena..
Sw: (irritated tone) Main nahin poonch ne waali...Usse bataana ho to bataaye..I am really angry with him right now..!
Ra: (sighs) Ok Swara..(and then excitedly) Ab chalo na.. paani mein chalte hain..
Ragini pulled Swara towards the sea area and joined the others who were having fun in the water.
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When Sanskaar and Sonia returned from the town, the car's back seat was filled with paper bags full of decoration items. Before getting out of the car, Sonia turned to him.
So: Sanskaar.. We need to hide these packets somewhere inside the house.. Nahin toh, Swara will know that you are planning for this beach side dinner date..
Sa: You are right, Sonia..
So: Ok, so we will keep these items in one of the bedrooms for the time being..Tum bhi aajao..I cant hold all the packets alone..
Sa: (nods) Of course, Sonia..Kyaa baat kar rahi ho..Main tumhein yeh sab akele karne deti kya..?
Sanskaar and Sonia walked into the house with the packets and then they went upstairs to one of the bed rooms. Once they reached the bedroom, Sonia send a text message to Samar, secretly.
When Samar received the message, he turned to Swara.
Sm: Swara..I need your help..
Sw: Haan..Bolo na..
Sm: Can you please come with me to the house..Lets bring some cold drinks and refreshments for every one..
Sw: Ya..Sure..
Samar was so happy that his master plan was going to work. He messaged back to Sonia, saying that they are coming into the house.
When Swara and Samar reached inside the house, Samar turned towards Swara.
Sm: Hey Swara..Upstairs, in that bedroom, (indicates a door) there are some towels.. I guess they will be needed once everyone comes out of the water..Could you please go and get them..? Tab tak mein sab kuch arrange kar leta hoon..
Sw: (smiles with a nod) Why not..? I will be back now..
Swara walked upstairs and Samar dialled Sonia's number, to give a missed call, as they had planned earlier.
As Swara neared the threshold of the bedroom, she could hear a high pitched giggling voice from the room. Feeling intrigued, she walked towards the door and the scene she saw in front her eyes was unbelievable. Sanskaar was lying on top of Sonia and his face was buried into the curve of Sonia's neck.
So: (giggles) Mujhe gudgudi ho rahi hain..Oh God..!!
Sa: Sonia..tum bhi na..
Sw: (shouts) SANSKAARRR...!!!!
Sanskaar sprang up from the bed hearing her voice and he was looking at her with a shocked face.
Sa:(tensed) Swara..main..(holds out his hand) listen, waisa kuch bhi nahin hain jaisa tum soch rahi ho, Swara..!
Sw: (nods with tearful eyes) Haan..Of course..I know, Sanskaar..( laughs mockingly)
Sanskaar hastily walked towards Swara and tried to place his hands upon his shoulders. But Swara stepped back in panic.
Sw: (strained tone) No..don't, Sanskaar..! Don't you dare..!! (glares at him angrily)
Sanskaar was alarmed when he saw the look on her face. He again tried to grab he shoulders, this time, rather forcefully.
Sa: Swara..Listen to me, once..will you..?
But Swara was possessed with some strong force of energy and she just pushed him away with all her might. Sanskaar fell down to the floor with a thud.
And then she turned towards Sonia, pointing a finger at her, Swara was shivering all over.
Sw: (cries out angrily) How could you, Sonia..!!! How could you do this to me..! I thought that you have become a good friend of mine..But no..! you were still after him..I didn't know you were so cheap..! (looks away with contempt)
Sa: (gets up from the floor) For god's sake Swara, will you stop this non sense..Iss mein Sonia ki koi galti nahin hain..!
Sw: (heaves agonizing breaths) Haan haan..Sorry, Sanskaar...main bhool gayi thi Sonia, ki tum kitni achi ladki ho...Mujhe maaf kardo..(joins her palms in a mock namaste)
So: (comes close to her) Nahin Swara..Tum mujhe galat samjh rahi ho..
Sw: (holds out her hand in a stop signal) Bas Sonia..Tumhein toh humesha se Sanskaar chaahiye thi na..Bas main hi paagal thi..Jo maine tum pe trust ki, yeh soch ke ke tum meri ek achi dosth ho..(then with hurtful contempt) Par nahin..Now I realize, ke woh sab bas ek naatak tha..Tum toh sirf Sanskaar ko mujhse cheen na chaahti thi..Aur dekho..(looks at Sanskaar with contempt) tum aaj successful bhi ho gayi..
Sanskaar couldn't believe what he was hearing, till now he let Swara talk, as he was in a state of semi shock.
Sa: (shouts) Shut up Swara..Tumhein pata nahin ke tum kya kya bakwaas keh rahi ho..
Sw: (smirks) Main andhi nahin hoon Sanskaar, aur naa hi bewakoof hoon..! Samjhe tum..! Main jaa rahi hoon..Ab tumhein iss Sonia ke saath jo bhi karna ho karo..
Saying so, Swara just turned around and walked off from there. Swara was walking down the stairs when Sanskaar came running out from the room and standing at the top of the stairs, he called out to her, aloud.
Sa: (desperate, loud voice) HAAAN HAAN..JAAAO..! JAB TUM MUJHPE TRUST HI NAHIN KAR SAKTI TOH, KYA FAAYDA ISS RISHTE KA..IT'S MEANINGLESS WITHOUT TRUST..SAMJHI TUM..!!
Swara was running down the last few steps of the staircase. Her eyes were filled with tears and she yelled at him in shivering voice.
Sw: (without turning back) Jaao tum Sanskaar..(sobs)
And when she ran out into the drawing room, she collided with Ragini who had come in search of her. Swara just hugged Ragini and began to weep uncontrollably.
Ra: (in panic) Kya hua, Swara..Tum itni ro kyun rahi ho..?
Sw: (shakes her head, but not able to say anything, moans) Raginiii...(still sobs and weeps)
Ra: (concerned voice) Swara..Please, kuch toh kaho na..
Sw: Woh Sanskaar aur Sonia..(sobs wildly) I saw them together...(sobs) in the bed room..!!
Ragini was shocked when she heard her words.
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Meanwhile in the room, when Sanskaar came back to the room after yelling at Swara, he saw that Sonia was weeping uncontrollably.
Sa: (yells with frustration) Arre at least tum toh rona bandh kardo..Tumhein pata hain na, ke hum ne koi galti nahin ki..Tum keh nahin sakti thi Swara se, ke sach kya hain..!!..that it all happened by mistake..That we both fell down on the bed because, you tried to hold me for support when you slipped and fell backwards on to the bed.
So: (weeps) Tum bhi toh keh sakte the na Sanskaar..!
Sa: (runs his palm along his hair in frustration) Maine koshish kiya tha sach kehne ke liye..Par Swara ne mauka hi nahin di..
So: (between sobs, she says angrily) Toh wahin mere saath bhi hua, Sanskaar..Main bhi explain karne waali thi par, Swara didn't even let me talk..(sobs hysterically)
Sa: Ab chalo..Lets go and tell her all the truth..Ab mujhe koi "surprise dinner date" nahin plan karna uske liye..This stupid idea created all the problems..
Sonia felt alarmed at his words, she knew that Samar's master plan will flop if Sanskaar revealed the entire truth to Swara. When Sanskaar turned around and started to walk, Sonia scrambled up from the bed and hastily followed him down the stairs.
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Ra: Kyaa.. keh kya rahi ho tum, Swara..?
Sw: (sobs) Main sach keh rahi hoon Ragini..believe me..please..!
Just at that moment, Samar came out of the kitchen with a tray filled with drinks and refreshments in his hands.
Sm: Swara tum yahan ho..you did not get the towels from the bedroom..? Par tum ro kyun rahi ho..? Kya hua..(concerned voice)
Sw: (wipes her tears) Kuch nahin Samar..Main jaa rahi hoon yahan se..I am sorry..
He placed the tray on a nearby table, and came towards her.
Sm: (frowns) Par..Par hua kya hain..?
Just then Sanskaar and Sonia entered into the living room. Samar watched them as if feeling shocked.
Sm: Tum dono, ek saath, ghar ke andar kya kar rahe the..? (frowns)
So: (sobs) Bhaiyya..Swara ne mujhe aur Sanskaar ko bed pe saath mein dekh li..aur..
Samar didn't wait for her to complete her sentence and he just went and slapped her hard on her face.
Sm: How dare you, Sonia..!! (slaps again) How could you even think about doing it..? (slaps again) Yeh sab karne se pehle apne Maa-Papa ke baare mein soch nahin sakti thi..
Sanskaar couldn't stand it anymore and he just pushed Samar away, holding to his collar.
Sa: (angrily) Stop it, youuu..At least listen to what she wants to say, Samar..
Sm: (struggles hard to push him away) You stay out of this, Sanskaar..Yeh mere aur meri behan ke beech ka maamla hain..
Samar was about to attack Sonia again, when Sanskaar just grabbed Sonia and made her stand behind him. Sanskaar stood in front of Sonia, as if to guard her.
Sa: (in a warning tone) Don't you dare touch her..!!!
Swara and Ragini couldn't believe their ears. Samar acted as if he was really overcome with shock and grief.
Sm: (nods with a heavily hurt expression) Sonia..Samajh lena ki tumhara bhaiyya mar gaya..Aaj se, matlab abhi se..hum dono ke beech ka saara rishta khatm..(turns to Swaragini) Swara..Ragini..Jaake gaadi mein baith jaao..Main Adarsh aur Parineeta ko leke aata hoon..Hum jaa rahe hain abhi yahan se..Unn dono ka wait mat karna..Woh log kaise bhi karke waapas aa jayenge..!
Swara and Ragini didn't wait anymore, and they went off and got into the car.
Sanskaar watched them go with a really hurt face and suddenly Sonia rushed into the kitchen, crying hysterically yelling " I don't want to live any more". Sanskaar hastily followed her in shock. There, he saw her holding a sharp knife and he realized that she was about to cut her wrist. Sanskaar grabbed the knife from her hand and after throwing it away,he caught hold of her shoulders forcefully.
Sa: ARE YOU MADDD...!!
Sonia hugged him tightly and began weep harder.
So: (moans with real grief) Mujhe nahin jeena Sanskaar..Mujhe...nahinnn...jeeenaaa...
Sanskaar placed his arms around her and tried to console her.
Sa: Main sab kuch teek kar doonga, Sonia..Please don't cry..
Sonia pressed her cheek close to Sanskaar's chest and her lips broke into a wicked grin, she thought happily, " Thank you Samar bhaiyya..Our plan has worked.."
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Samar came back with Adarsh and Parineeta, and it was obvious that they didn't understand what had happened suddenly, that they were leaving so soon.
Adarsh looked inside the car and he found Sanskaar and Sonia missing.
Ad: Swara..Where is Sanskaar..?
Pa: Haan..Aur Sonia..Dono kitne time se gaayab hain..Kaha gaye woh dono..?
Sw: (sighs impatiently) Parineeta, Adarsh..Please gaadi mein baith jaao..Woh dono humaare saath nahin aa rahe hain..!
Adarsh got into the front passeneger seat and Parineeta joined the girls at the middle seat. Ragini whispered something into Parineeta's ears and she gazed at Ragini with a shocked face. Then she gazed at Swara with a sympathetic expression and looked out of the window with a sad face.
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PRECAP : Sanskaar was shocked to see Samar and Sonia together. He was even shocked when he heard their conversation.
So: (hugs him) I just love you bhaiyya..Aapke plan ke wajah se toh yeh sab hua hain..!
Sm: (hugs her back) Now I just can't wait to make Swara mine, completely..That night, at your birhday party, everything got spoilt because of that Lakshya..Agar woh uss time pe nahin aaya hota toh main Swara ke saath bahut kuch kar sakta tha..
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I know it was an update full of misunderstandings..But I hope, the precap made you all happy..Expect some good things to happen, in the next update.

END of PART 13
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SIMI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#553

Res...

Unres ...

Thank you naina for continuing it .

I was following this ff from starting and I like it.😊

But there is so much misunderstanding between swasan and friends.I hate Sonia and Samar...cheap ppl

Oh the precap is nice ... I hope swara will believe sanskar..

And laksh and friend's bond will be back again...

Waiting for the next update

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Edited by simsen23 - 9 years ago

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lekahravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#554

Read in one go...
Amazing story line...
But today update n previous was painful..
Swara angry was justified...
Nice update..
Request update this storysoon...
Waiting...
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Kashis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#555

very well done... it's amazing and teen age love story and insecurity bound to happen...

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sujay kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#556

Naina a super update 👏
Samar and sonia 😡 i just hate them
Poor swasan
Now i hope lakshya will be proved innocent
Update soon

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isha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#557

naina my darling
tonnes of thnx for updating it
plz don't make lucky n swara forgive ragsan easily...they broke their trust
swara ...possessed... pushed sanky ...he fell on ground... 🤣
I was laughing like maniac
but after reading full I was red due to anger
Samar and Sonia...arghhh ...hate u
naina jus update it and finish it...if u feel lazy about this one and give it a decent end...personal opinion only u do whatever u lyk