PART 14 Updt Pg 82 -PYAAR HOTA HAIN DEEWAANA SANAM--SWASAN SS

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Naina,awesome dear👏👏
Superb update,loved it a lot😊😊
Do continue soon😛

Thank you sooo much Jenni dear🤗

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#192

Originally posted by: CarpedeimRose

Naina,awesome dear👏👏
Superb update,loved it a lot😊😊
Do continue soon😛

Thank you sooo much dear..
I am glad you enjoyed it Jenni😃😃😳

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Awesum dear... Lvd it naina..
Swasan moments r awesum...
I thnk dis samar s d villian in swasan's lyf...l
Lvd d update vry much dear... Thnks 4 d pm also...

Thank you sooo much Sreeja dear😃😃
Samar is a villain..😉
I am glad you loved the Swasan scenes😳😳

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: anju10

woww lovely ss dear
all the updates were awesome
wonderfully written
waitng for next update
thanxx for the pm
😊😛😛😊

I am glad anju dear that you enjoyed all the updates🤗
I am going to update now 😃😃

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: Anglaise

super cool ff..
awesome...
update soon

Thanks dear..😳
thank you so much for reading and commenting😃😃

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naina

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Posted: 9 years ago

#196

PART 5

In the evening after class, Swara,Ragini and Parineeta were walking down the stairs.
Ra: The boys would be in the football ground, they are having their football team selection na...
Pa: (irritated tone) And I will have to wait for Adarsh till 4 o clock..
Sw: (smiles)No problem..we will also sit with you...
Ragini and Parineeta looked at each other and smiled, knowingly.
Pa:We know why you are saying that..
Ra:To wait for Sanskaar na...(laughs) (Parineeta also laughs)
Sw:(blushing) No..No..Nothing like that...(smiles)
After sometime they reached the football ground. They saw Adarsh,Sanskaar and Lakshya standing outside the ground waiting for their team selection. They went to them.
Pa:Why are you waiting here...Your selection didn't start...?
Ad:(looking at the ground) That Samar hasn't finished yet with your department's football team...
Swara looked at the ground. Samar Modi was there in the ground with her first year classmates, doing the final round of selection. At that time a girl came to them. She came to Sanskaar.
Girl :(excitedly)Hiii Sanskaar...
Sa:Hi Sonia...
So:(blushes and continues in a nervous tone)I...I..I just came to wish you "All the best" for the selection...(smiles shyly at Sanskaar)...
Sa:Oh...thank you...(smiles pleasantly)
Swara was noticing the girl. She didn't like the way, she was staring at Sanskaar, or the way she talked with him.
La: Arre Sonia.."Best of Luck" wish sirf Sanskaar ke liye...?
So:(suddenly, smiles) No...all of you...All the best guys..(goes away, hurriedly..)
Ad:She is our classmate...Seems like she has a crush on our Sanskaar...(laughs)
Sa:(nervously looking at Swara)(to Adarsh) Kya Adarsh...Tum bhi...!!(to everyone)Aisa kuch bhi nahin hain...hain na Lakshya..?
La:(smiling) Kya pata...?(laughs)
Samar had finished with the selection and they were moving out of the ground. When he saw Swara with her friends, he stood there and stared at her. Just then he saw Sanskaar moving close to her, and saying something to her. But he couldn't hear them.
Sa:Come with me Swara...I've got to talk to you...(walks away)
Swara went with him and Samar was getting angry noticing all this. He thought, "Chakkar kya hain...?". But Swara and Sanskaar didn't see Samar watching them from a distance.
Sw:Kya baat hai Sanskaar..?
Sa:Swara...Don't take Adarsh seriously..She is just my friend..
Sw:But Sanskaar...Even I agree with Adarsh...(feeling irritated)She is trying to flirt with you and I didn't like that...(looks away from Sanskaar)
Sa:(holds her shoulder and turns her towards him) Aisa kuch bhi nahin hai Swara..
Samar understood that there was something between Sanskaar and Swara. At that time, one of his friends called him and he went away with them.
It was time for their Sanskaar's team selection. Their team Captain Abhir Mishra was ready for them.
Ad:Hey Sanskaar...Come on..
Sw:Adarsh is calling you, Sanskaar...
Sa:Oh...I will talk to you later...Lets go...
They went to the others. Swara,Ragini and Parineeta sat in the stands around the play ground to watch the selection. The boys were about to go for the trials.
Sa:(gives his bag to Swara)Swara..Keep this with you...
Sw:(smiles)All the best Sanskaar..
Sa:(pinches her cheeks)Thank you sweetheart..(and then he went with Adarsh and Lakshya)
Swara gently touched her cheek were Sanskaar had pinched and she smiled. Thankfully, Parineeta and Ragini didn't notice this. Swara looked at them and she saw Sonia and her friends sitting a little bit away from them on the stands. Sonia was staring at Sanskaar and was whispering something to her friend and they both giggled. Swara felt irritated and she looked at the playground instead.
The selection had started. In the first round, each participant was called in the alphabetical order of names and they were made to score goals from a certain distance from the goalpost, while the goal keeper tried to block them. Each player was given 3 chances. Team Captain Abhir was noting down their performance. All of them didn't score at their first chance. A few people scored 2 goals whereas some didn't even score once. Soon it was Sanskaar's turn.
Sanskaar walked to the ball in order to kick it. Swara saw that he was nervous. She wanted to cheer him up. But then,
So:(stood up and yelled)COME ON SANSKAAARRR...JUST DO IT...
She and her friends began to clap their hands and screamed together "SANSKAAR..SANSKAAR.."
Swara glared at Sonia, but Sanskaar wasn't noticing any of these. He was concentrating on the goalpost as he kicked the ball. And then he scored a goal. He scored a goal each in his next two turns too. Abhir became so happy and he ran to Sanskaar and congratulated him.
Ab: Great Sanskaar...You are awesome!! 3 goals together...!!You are in the team...That's decided..
Sa:(feeling so happy)But the result...The result will be known only after the selection is over na..
Ab:(excitedly)Dude..You don't have to wait till that..You are selected..I have never seen such a great player..!
The first round was over after some time. All of those who had scored at least one goal were selected for the next round. Adarsh and Lakshya had both scored two goals each. Sanskaar, Adarsh and Lakshya were standing with the group of the first years who were ready for the second round. There were 9 of them. Abhir came to them.
Ab:Now the second round is a trial game. The game will be between our old team members and you guys. There are 9 members left of our old team of which 2 were substitute players. The remaining members have passed out of our college. So we need 4 more team members and two more substitutes. So after the game the best six players from you will be selected.(smiles at Sanskaar)No...Five. I mean Sanskaar has been already selected.
Then the trial football game was played. After the second round Sanskaar,Adarsh,Lakshya and another boy were selected into the main team. Two others were also selected as the substitutes. After talking with their team captain, Adarsh,Lakshya and Sanskaar came running to the girls.
Sa:(comes to Swara)Hey Swara...We three are in the team...
Sw:(smiling)I know..I know...I am very happy for you Sanskaar...You made it in the first round itself na...(to Adarsh and Lakshya)And congrats to both of you too..
Ragini and Parineeta also congratulated them. The boys thanked them.
Sa:Swara, please take my bottle from the bag..
Swara took the bottle from his bag and gave it to him. He drank from it as if he was very thirsty, and Swara watched the Adam's apple in his throat moving up and down. She stared at him and thought "He is so handsome..!!". Then Sanskaar poured the water over his face and head, and shook his head. The water sprinkled all over Swara, she suddenly came to her senses.
Sw:Hey...Stop it Sanskaar..You are wetting my clothes...
Sa:Oh...Is it..?Sorry Swara (then smiling, comes closer to Swara and sprays more water on Swara by shaking his head more)
Sw:What is this Sanskaar..?(And she moves away from Sanskaar)
Sanskaar followed her. She went and hid behind Parineeta and Ragini. They were laughing. Suddenly Adarsh caught hold of Sanskaar from behind and took the bottle from him.
Ad:Yahan aajao Swara..Take this bottle and pour the entire water over him...
Sw:(comes forward)Thank you Adarsh...(takes the bottle and looks into Sanskaar's eyes)..Main abhi paani daaloongi tumhare upar, Sanskaar..(giggles sweetly)
Sa: Swara..Nahin..
Sonia and her friends were passing by, but when she saw the scene, she came to them.
So:(laughing)Kya ho raha hain yahan..?(she held out a hand to Sanskaar)anyways Sanskaar..You played wonderfully...You were awesome..I am totally impressed...
Adarsh released Sanskaar and he shook hands with Sonia.
Sa: Thank you, and by the way you saved me Sonia ..
He naughtily smiled at Adarsh and moved away from him.
So: Really..(giggles)
Swara was looking at Sanskaar and Sonia as they were talking. She saw a longing look on Sonia's face as she was looking at Sanskaar. Swara couldn't stand it for long and she turned her head away. Sonia walked away after congratulating Adarsh and Lakshya too.
But Swara didn't see Sanskaar approaching her from behind. He began to pour water over her head and then only she realized.
Sw:Nooo Sanskaaar...(she runs away from him)
Sa:(runs after her)Tum abhi thodi der pehle yehi toh karne jaa rahi thi na, Swara?...You will pour water on me,huh? I will show you..Ruko Swara(laughs)
Swara didn't look back as she ran to the garden where there was no one at that time. She went and hid behind a large bush. When she again looked for Sanskaar, she didn't find him. She stood there panting after running. Suddenly someone caught her from behind and she had a shock.
Sa:(whispers in her ear)Tum ne kya socha, Swara..?Main zaroor tumahari upar yeh pani daaloonga..
Sw:(struggles in Sanskaar's grasp whose hands were around her waist)Chodo na Sanskaar..Please...
He then poured the water over her body and she was all wet. She stopped struggling when he released her. She turned to face him, and he was looking at her wet face with a blazing look in his eyes. She couldn't meet his gaze and she looked down. He took her chin and raised her head to face him. He moved her face towards his, her heartbeats were racing. His lips were closer to her lips...and more close...closer...
Suddenly Swara pushed Sanskaar and ran. But she couldn't run, he had held her hand.
Sa:(in a romantic tone)..
Sw:(pleads) Jaane do na Sanskaar...
Sa:Tum apna waada bhool gayi kya?
Sw:(turns her face to him)Kaunsa waada..?
Sa:Wohi..Kiss dene ka...
Sw:Woh phone pe kiss dene ki baat thi naa...
Sa:(releases her hand)Nahin...Mujhe abhi chahiye...
Sw:(coming closer)(in a romantic tone)Kiss chahiye na tumhe...?
Sa:(excited)Haan...
Sw:(whispers)Close your eyes...
Sa:(closes his eyes and smiles)Hmmm...
Swara gave a sweet kiss on his cheek and ran away. Sanskaar stood there smiling looking at Swara...
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Saturday morning, Swara,Parineeta and Ragini was waiting in front of the film theatres, at the mall. It was 10 am..There was a huge poster of the film was hanging there.
Pa:(looking at the poster)Oooh...Salman looks so handsome in this one...I just love him...
Sw:(looking outside)Where are they? The film will start at 10:30...
Pa:I had told Adarsh to make it early...The tickets are with him...
Ra:Hey Swara...Wahan dekho na...She is Sonia na...Sanskaar's classmate..
Swara looked at where Ragini was pointing. Sonia was there with her two friends and Swara didn't like the sight of her.
Ra:Hey there they are...Swara...Here comes your Sanskaar...
Sw:Where?
Sanskaar, Adarsh and Lakshya came towards the girls.
They all walked in to the theatre. They had all got six nearby seats at the center of the back row booked. They went towards the back row through the aisle. Sonia was sitting with her friends in the back row corner seats. She and her friends came to them, as they were occupying the central seats.
So: Guys, you didn't tell us you were coming to watch this film, today...We could have booked our seats together...hain na, Sanskaar?
Sa:(smiling at her, partly looking at Swara, nervously)Haan...that's right...But you people also didn't tell...
So:Its ok..No problem..At least we are all sitting in the same row...
Swara: Sanskaar..Let's all sit down in our seats..Otherwise the lights will go off now...
La:Haan...You are right Swara...Adarsh you sit there,Parineeta you sit near him,Sanskaar beside her,Swara you sit next,then Ragini,Then I will sit here, next to Ragini...Is that Ok with all...?
They all agreed and sat as Lakshya had suggested. Sonia was sitting with her friends sitting three seats away from Lakshya. Soon the lights went off and the show started.
Sanskaar placed his hand around Swara's shoulder. Swara looked at Sanskaar and he looked at her with loving eyes. Swara bent a little forward to allow him to keep his hand comfortably around her shoulders. Then she placed her head on his shoulders as they watched the film.
After sometime Swara felt his hands sliding up towards her neck and he began to caress her cheek, gently. Swara squirmed and she looked at him, but he was acting as if he didn't do anything.
Sw:(whispers) Sanskaar..
Sa:Kya..?
Sw: (whispers) Please aisa mat karo,Sanskaar..
But Ragini heard her and decided to tease them.
Ra:Kya baat hai Swara?
Sw:(shrugs)Kuch bhi toh nahin...
Ra:(looking at Sanskaar and smiling)Sanskaar tumhe ched raha hai kya..?
Sw:Nahin toh(shrugs with a smile)
When Ragini turned to watch the film, Swara took off his arms from around her shoulder and leant firmly to the back rest, so that he couldn't hold her shoulders any more. Getting angry, Sanskaar bent forward and began to watch the film by resting his head on his palm.
Swara felt bad and it was then she saw it. Sonia was staring at Sanskaar from her seat. Swara got more irritated and she bent forward purposefully blocking Sonia's view of Sanskaar. Then she looked at Sonia through the corner of her eyes and saw her leaning back to her seat and watch the film. Swara became satisfied on what she had done and felt happy. She pulled Sanskaar's arm and made him lean back to his seat.
Sa:(irritatedly)Kya baat hai?
Sw:(smiling sweetly)Mujhse naaraaz ho?
Sa:(looks at her unbelievably)Haan..
Sw:Sorry baba...(puts her arm around his arm and leans to his shoulder)Ab khush..?
Sa:(smiles) Haan..
Soon it was interval time. Sanskaar and Swara agreed that they will go and get popcorn for everyone. They got up to go out, but at the same time Sonia caught up with them.
So:Main bhi aaoongi...Tum log popcorn lene jaa rahe hain na..?
Sw:(irritatedly, lied to her)Jee nahin...Hum icecreams lene jaa rahe hain...
So:Koi baat nahi...Main bhi baahar chaloongi tum logon ke saath...Mujhe popcorn lene hain...
Sw:(whispers angrily to herself)Oh God...!!This girl...I will kill her...!!
The three of them moved out and walked towards the popcorn store.
So:Sanskaar,Three popcorns please...Here is the money(gives the money to him)
Sw:Then buy popcorns for us too...ice creams nahin chahiye...
Sanskaar moved to the counter. Since there was so much rush at the counter, Swara and Sonia stood back. Sanskaar got the popcorn packets and handed some packets out to Swara and Sonia since he couldn't hold all of them. They moved inside and handed out the popcorn to the others.
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The film got over and everybody was moving out of the theatre.
La:I'm feeling really hungry...Let's go to some restaurant..
Ra:That's right...Mujhe bhi bahut bhuk lagi hain...
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End of PART 5
Hope you all enjoyed this update..
Do let me know your views..
Love,
Naina😊

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Silpa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#197

Superb update Naina...
Loved it vry much...

Samarum Soniayum SwaSante swargathile katturumbukalanalle... ??

But no one can seperate SwaSan...

awsm update...

I loved SwaSan moments vry much... They playing with water... Swara kissing Sanskar... ❤️ 😊

updt nxt pt soon...

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Sree

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Posted: 9 years ago

#198

Suprb update dear..
Ab yeh Soniya kon he? Samar ke baad ab yeh bhi..
Kitna Chipku he yeh...Sanskar ke peeche hi pada he..
Swara ko pakka bhut mehnat krni padgi is chudail se jeetne klye...😆😆
hhahahahaha😃

Bechara Lv birds..
Swasan scenes was awesum.. Especially theater scenes...
Lvd it naina dear..
Do continue.. Thnks 4 d pm dear...

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Anglaise

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Posted: 9 years ago

#199

naina superb one..
loved it!!
plz pm me next time.
continue soon

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gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Loved the update chechi. All the 3girls went to football ground to see the selection. There they went towards their trio and asked abt their selection. Sonia i too hate her. Y she s keeping her eye on sanskar. Swara didnt like the way she talked with sanskar. Adharsh and laksh teased sanskar and make swara to get angry. Samar noted swasan. Samar got angry on seeing their closeness. So he too very 1st itself having crush on swara. There sanskar tried to calm swara as ntng between sonia and she s just his friend, And then their selection started and our hero put goals in all 3chances and got selected. The trio got selected for their team. He asked water bottle from his bag and she too gave and he was admired by his beauty. He first unknowingly sprays water on her. Later adharsh helped her to spray water on him. Tat time sonia came😡. And at garden noone were there and he poured water on her n she was wet. they shared little very little romantic moments. At theater the six came and saw sonia there. Sanskar was sitting near swara and he put his hand around her shoulder😳. But later ragini teased swara and she took off his hand. She got angry on her and started to watch film. Tat time swara noted sonia was staring at him so she asked sorry to sanskar and both san hand in hand. 😳

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