SwaSan Diwali OS 'The Lights of Love'

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#131

Originally posted by: -Prithi-
lovely OS

Thanks Prithi 😊

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#132

Originally posted by: anu91
It was so cute and awesome...The first start of story really fantastic dear...
Wish u a very happy diwali dr...

Thanks very much Anu. 🤗 Glad you liked it. I tried to make the beginning as humorous as possible, with the family understanding the double meaning to SwaSan's dialogue. 😛

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#133

Originally posted by: a_uma
beautiful OS... can never tire reading about swasan moments..

..its great that the dark clouds have gone away from swasan's life... ( Rag and Lux 😉) ...hope we get to see this on the show..

Thanks Uma. Yes, SwaSan certainly deserved a Happy Diwali. 😊 Without dark clouds and thunderstorms hanging over them. That's why in this OS, I packed off Lakshya to Mumbai and Ragini to Jaipur!! 😆

Very glad you liked it.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
It's a very well written and perfect os
Lovely Swasan chemistry depicted in this os
Great work keep it up
Happy Diwali in advance

Thanks Akanksha 😊 Very glad you liked it. Especially the SwaSan chemistry 😉 I am, as you know, a HUGE SwaSan fan, so for me, that is a very lovely compliment.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#135

Originally posted by: The-Heart
Awesome piece of writing with unique and romantic flavor😳
In the beginning conversation in room is awesome
I love to read your writings and waiting for your next OS

Happy Diwali

Thanks a ton. 😊 Yeah, I wanted to make the beginning dialogue with possible double meanings for the family to wonder about. 😉 Glad you liked it.

My next OS should be up tomorrow or latest the day after.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Sanavi
Wow.
A Diwali treat before the actual Diwali.
Thnx a lot. Loved the OS. It's really beautiful.

SwaSan r so cute together nd the conversation at the end. Fireworks to humare dimaag mein futenge woh scenes imagine kar ke. 😳

Happy Diwali to u. Aap aise hi Hume OS / TS ki daawat pesh kare yehi God se pray karte hain.

Thanks very much dear 😊. Very glad you liked it. I hope to have my next OS posted tomorrow. Shall PM you.

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-Ros-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#137

What a pleasant OS! Reading it has brought so much happiness. 😳

Their convo at the beginning... 😆😆 the way each family member behaved, all wonderfully penned down. I'm sitting here in the library chuckling at it, while looking like a total tard. 😳

I love father-daughter bonds and DP-Swara relationship is the cutest! The way he gives in to her innocent request is so lovely. ⭐️

Swasan mind-convo was adorable!

The way you wonderfully described how Swasan compliments each other- not only in dressing but in healing each other's wounds and restoring their souls. It was truly beautiful. 👏

And Sanskaar being naughty is ☺️

Thank you so much for the PM, loved this! 😃

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: ros_aavir
What a pleasant OS! Reading it has brought so much happiness. 😳
Their convo at the beginning... 😆😆 the way each family member behaved, all wonderfully penned down. I'm sitting here in the library chuckling at it, while looking like a total tard. 😳

I love father-daughter bonds and DP-Swara relationship is the cutest! The way he gives in to her innocent request is so lovely. ⭐️

Swasan mind-convo was adorable!

The way you wonderfully described how Swasan compliments each other- not only in dressing but in healing each other's wounds and restoring their souls. It was truly beautiful. 👏

And Sanskaar being naughty is ☺️
Thank you so much for the PM, loved this! 😃

Thanks Ros. 😊 Glad you liked it.

Yeah, I had a lot of fun writing that introductory dialogue between SwaSan, I was grinning as I thought of the double entendre and how the family would interpret an actually innocent conversation. 😉

Regarding DP, I do think that he feels very paternal towards both Sanskaar and Swara. And he definitely considers Swara as the daughter he never had.

SwaSan complete and complement each other--of course. They are a dream pair, just made for each other. 😊

Sanskaar being naughty and the way they were lost in each other---well I was in SwaSan dreamland when I wrote that. 😳 ☺️ Very glad you liked it.

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inlieu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#139

You made me fall in love with DP again! It never fails to amaze me how perceptive he is both in your works and on the show. His affection for his soul son and daughter is so touching and it's beginning to be explored more explicitly on the show, for which I am really grateful to our CVs. Thanks Vij for another great piece!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: inlieu

You made me fall in love with DP again! It never fails to amaze me how perceptive he is both in your works and on the show. His affection for his soul son and daughter is so touching and it's beginning to be explored more explicitly on the show, for which I am really grateful to our CVs. Thanks Vij for another great piece!

Thanks so much Jean. All well with you? You've been busy I guess, not seen you on the forum for a few days.

Hope you had a Wonderful Diwali 😊