Letter from Ragini to Swara - Page 4

Originally posted by: Purbishona

Beautifully written Medha.. Seriously Laksh is not worth of Ragini.. I loved it very much.. Do write more.. You didn't PMd me.! Plz do PM..

Originally posted by: Sunandabhowmik

Beautiful letter.

Medha. Why are you doing this to me?
Every letter, stories of yours is mindblowing. Simply mindblowing 👏
I already said that the previous letter from Ragini to Laksh has to be one of my favorite works of yours, but this was even better. You are outstanding.
You captured Ragini's feelings so well. And you know what? I started liking Ragini's character now. I mean i always loved Swara, even though sometimes she annoyes me with her mahaan jaaps and all.
Ragini suffered a lot, i can't even think about the pain she has gone through when Laksh refused to marry her twice
The initial description where Ragini says that she was a shy girl and never joined Swara and her friends was penned down so well 👏
She was shy, she had never got the courage to speak up for herself.
I still believe she deserves someone better than Laksh. And Swara was lucky enough to find a gem of an husband. I guess Karma bites you in your ass huh? I have everything...and its hollow within. And look at you. I, the devil, snatched Lakshya from you...and God immediately replenished your empty hands with your soulmate. Its like freaking losing a rupee and finding a hundred. See how fortunate you are?
This line said it all ! 👏 Perfect.
Another masterpiece of yours 😳

Originally posted by: medhasankar

geetha,

My God, you seemed to have understood her better than i did in some ways.👏

swara's incesstant need to play happy families annoys me to death. seriously, if her ma-baba were that mazboot a couple why would they need swara to apply fevicol?😕

Swara has been out of the cage of stupid fetters of traditions mercifully, which ragini has not. count your blessings gal.

Yes, swara did find a way better guy.😳😃

and ragini after all she did...found the end was not worth the means. Nobody is more tragic than the villain.

I am glad you became happy to be stuck in a traffic jam...I hate them. takes a freaking hour to reach office.🤢

Thanks.😃

Originally posted by: misaki

@ Bold - Exactly! So very annoying. I cannot stand Shekar . I hate him as much or even more than "you-know-who" LOL I hope I'm not banned because of this.😆 Seriously can't even be honest out here now. -_-

Loved it! I mean I am blown away. Did I get the vibe of 'I love you but really really hate you' from Ragini correct? Blending something so contrasting takes talent!! This emotion portrayal is just absolutely fantastic and your writing style, wow!

Please keep writing and thank for the PM. :)

-V

Originally posted by: bwvianna

Loved it! I mean I am blown away. Did I get the vibe of 'I love you but really really hate you' from Ragini correct? Blending something so contrasting takes talent!! This emotion portrayal is just absolutely fantastic and your writing style, wow!

Please keep writing and thank for the PM. :)

-V

"The proper definition of a man is
an animal that writes letters.
Lewis Carroll"
I sort of agree lol
Writing a letter needs a in-depth knowledge of thought process of the character from Wose perspective u r writing...Story is our imagination but for writing a letter is completely an another thing...u nailed it...
medha absolutely brilliant
A letter that gives us insight of why ragini is what she is
Her envy for swara turned into jealousy...and she didn't even comprehend when it all started
For her swara represented the ideal life she always wished for
She subconsciouly always wanted to b swara and have everything that she had...confidence freedom n loved by one and all ...Perhaps this can also be the reason why she wanted laksh ...she wanted all that swara had...Had it been someone else who laksh was interested in...maybe she didn't go to such lengths.
You have analysised her character thoroughly...I liked to read all the happenings from ragini's perspective
Thanks for such a nice presentation of ragini's thought process
Just loved it...amazing wonderful
do write more
love
Samiya

Originally posted by: samiya.059

"The proper definition of a man is
an animal that writes letters.
Lewis Carroll"
I sort of agree lol
Writing a letter needs a in-depth knowledge of thought process of the character from Wose perspective u r writing...Story is our imagination but for writing a letter is completely an another thing...u nailed it...
medha absolutely brilliant
A letter that gives us insight of why ragini is what she is
Her envy for swara turned into jealousy...and she didn't even comprehend when it all started
For her swara represented the ideal life she always wished for
She subconsciouly always wanted to b swara and have everything that she had...confidence freedom n loved by one and all ...Perhaps this can also be the reason why she wanted laksh ...she wanted all that swara had...Had it been someone else who laksh was interested in...maybe she didn't go to such lengths.
You have analysised her character thoroughly...I liked to read all the happenings from ragini's perspective
Thanks for such a nice presentation of ragini's thought process
Just loved it...amazing wonderful
do write more
love
Samiya

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Suhasini...😊

thanks re. glad u liked it. and thanks for understanding ragini.