Against All Odds- A SwaSan Four Shot - Page 19

Originally posted by: rithika2015

hi dear,

read all the parts in one go in the mid of my tuition class where i myself is the teacher. could not control the excitement after reading one chapter..😆

such a wonderful fs. just loved and enjoyed it thoroughly. loved swara and sanskaar to the core in it. no words to describe ragini and laksh. finally laksh got a reality check from DP. this is what really needs to happen in the show. i guess laksh will not set till he gets one from DP or swara. just waiting for it in show and thanks u filled my dream here.😊

coming to swara's confession in the hospital was just perfect and the reaction of sanskaar was even justifiable. i really loved DP in this as he is smart and clever who can't be manipulated so easily and he is little same in the show but is never given the required role he needs to get.

last but not least swasan romance in the room was 😳 the last dialogues of sansku were so romantic and naughty. hayee.. our sanskaari sankaar can be so naughty too..😉

thank u so much for this wonderful piece and do write more and thanks for the pm..

Originally posted by: anu91

Hey dear...

Always u left me speechless with ur update...

Read all full parts in one go...

Sry took little long time to read but read it completely...

Wt an update dear...

U should be in CVs place...

In first part...Their park scene of sanskar and swara awe...so awesome...

And sanskar character u described was so nice...The protectiveness of him awe...I want a husband like...let's c hw my fate will be...😉

And the swara confession part in front of everyone was fabulous...and the much awaited slap...I expect that from sanskar or swara...but dp took tat chance...koi problem nahi...anu happy for tat slap...

Totally it was a sweetest update dear...

Originally posted by: bwvianna

An absolutely fantastic finale to a fantastic fanfic! Absolutely loved it!

Ragini's psychoticness, Lakshya's desperation and Durga Prasad's reaction! That slap ❤️ (DP is the man!) and a fitting end with SwaSan moment! Thank you for such a fantastic finale! :D

Looking forward to some more writing from you.

-V

P.S.: A very happy and wonderful Diwali to you. :)

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Nityah 🤗

First of all the emoticoms are just awesome ❤️. I keep looking at them!

Thank you for your lovely detailed comments and the things you said- made me feel really good!

Oh no, you suffer from traumatophobia- not a good bit to read then?! Strangely, I don't like fire at all, my Dad's factory burnt to the ground when I was in my late teens and it was a horrific experience, luckily we had to fatalities but it was terrible and it really affected me so I still don't like the thought of fire. Strange I can still write it! Glad you liked this piece. Yes, Swara had to see sense at some point. We don't seem to get that on the show so made it happen here. And most seem to like Swara not getting instant gratification from Sanskaar after her confession 😆. DP was the man of the match huh?!

I like naughty Sanskaar- he is so much fun na?! 😉 Thank you again hon. x

Originally posted by: Lavender_Love

Shruti... first of all Happy diwali to you... 🤗🤗
I feel quasy reading about wounds but over the years I have gotten better... Its like a therapy to conquer the fear... I still cant listen about or watch a wound but I can read. And yours was not too much. I got this when I was kid... I had gotten a gash in my left knee by a mirror... And the doc had stitched it without making the wound numb. so you see i got traumatized by it. I feel so sorry hearing about your experience. and no thanks remember... apni baatein khud bhool jate ho.. 😛😆
With loads of love and kisses
Nityah..

hmmm it seems that I have kinda perfected the habbit of being one of the last ones to comment......but nevertheless there's a saying " der aaye par durust aayee"...😉

Originally posted by: kaku17

hmmm it seems that I have kinda perfected the habbit of being one of the last ones to comment......but nevertheless there's a saying " der aaye par durust aayee"...😉

what a phenomenal story shruti...am speechless...what I most liked about in your story is that swara seemed to get her brains back quite early to my utter shock and happiness...after getting a reality check from sanskaar, the way she simply told ragini that she's pretending amnesia was so wow...I think I can safely say that I like your swara, though I dislike the show's one......

swara's realisation involving the sindoor episode was epic...and sanskaar getting his hand burnt in the process of saving swara ...boo hoo hoo 😭...it sure did hurt me and swara's mindless fear seeing that was awesome, though I was so hurt seeing sanskaar hurt...( you have such a descriptive style of writing that I could actually see the whole incident happening in front of me while I read...)..

then came swara's epic confession...I do love dramatic stuff and swara's declaration was dramatic to say the least...and yea sanskaar deserved that public confession so yes I was rooting for swara 😃...I will again say that I love your swara. 😛...but the best part was sanskaar kind of dismissing her confession stating her heightened nerves and swara's on tenterhooks and her introspection regarding the same was the cheery on the cake...she deserved that for putting my sansku through so much pain... 😡

I love DP 😃and I was glad that DP played a stellar role in the revelation and putting things in order...oh how I love that man...from him coming to the hospital without telling anyone to hear swasan part of the story and then doing his own Sherlock giri and coming to conclusion was wow...DP you rock...⭐️.

and the finale was just as I hoped...Ragini was declared senile...and the Kodak moment for me was the resounding slap lakshya got from DP 👏...hayee I was over the moon, though if swara would have also joined in slapping it would have been great...but chalo koi nahi...one does not get everything in life...how I wish they show something like this in the show ( minus the fire cracker part though )...but am sure they would not declare Ragini a mental patient...poor me...and somewhere I feel ragini's redemption has already started in a very twisted way...😲.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this fic shurti and I hope you will keep writing more...

wishing you and your family a very happy and prosperous Diwali...enjoy, ...have lots of sweets and have fun bursting crackers,...be safe...

cheers

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Anu, what nice words again from you, you are too nice to me. I am glad you like reading the various things I write, it keeps me going to know people enjoy it as much as I like to write it. Haha- I certainly shouldn't be in the cvs place, the other melodrama would all end. Your fate will be perfect- I will pray and wish you a Sanskaar type hubby:). I have one so you should too:). Thanks again Anu and keep reading and commenting xoxo

Originally posted by: anu91

Thank u so much dear...

Wen will b u writing ur next story...😉

Happy Diwali dear...