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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

oh God.. Ragini.. Y so competitive.. because I love Ragini so she is very much like me on that front

I believe.. Sanskar always wanted to b friends with Swara,Rather he likes her but he must have maintained distance coz of the gal who calls him,her Bestfriend n fails to see that Her bestfrn has his happiness in the same girl who she dsnt likes! I hope m right 😳


Aboout the rest even I don't know what I got in store for them😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: harshsriti

OMG. . continue soon. . I want to read it please continue. .. loved it a lot.. pls pm me..

glad you loved it so much
means a lot
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1.

Dear Diary,

I don't get it mom loves dad and dad loves mom but they fight all the time.

Dadi and Dida love Ragini . Mom and dad love Ragini. But she thinks she has no love.

Who loves Me? My mom and Dida but it's ok they love me more than the whole world.

Stupid Sansku(are Sanskaar) hates me for no reason. He loves Ragini I know it though he never said it to her or anyone. For her he is just an puppet to play with. I felt sorry for him yesterday.

Ragini I don't get it what is her problem in life. She instigates people then plays the victim. Sadly everyone believes her thanks to her innocent face.

Chalo i have to go right now talk to you later

Apni maa ki ladli,

Swara.

"A Swaru tu phirse apni diary leke beth gai. Chalo woh dekh mera damaad niche aagaya tuje bula raha hai" Dida called out to swara .

"Dida woh aapka koi damaad nahi hai. Ragini ne sun liya na toh udi baba"Swara whispered to her when she reached downstairs.

"Oi Laksh come in breakfast toh nai karke aaya hoga tu as usual aaja beth khaale" Swara called out to the guy who she befriended just to annoy Ms. Ragini's best friend Mr. Sansku.

"Hey Swara you ready?"Laksh asked getting inside.

"Nai hu toh ho jaungi kaunsa hume jaldi hai. Chill yaa, its new termmm" Swara said patting his back hard.As laksh went to breakfast table Swara went to get ready.

Laksh was waiting for Swara to come down but intead Ragini came down quickly hearing his voice.

"Laksh ji aap aagaye. Chalein?" Ragini was very happy to see him.

"Sanskar aa jayega wait for him" Laksh told him.

"But he just called me saying he can't pick me"Ragini lied.

"Then what about Swara?"Laksh asked her.

"Oh god Laksh she doesn't want to attend lectures anyway but I do. It won't matter if she comes by herself for a day. Please?"Ragini pouts at him.

"What do you mean it doesn't matter ofcourse it matters"Laksh told her annoyed.

"Are I mean it won't matter to herself but it will matter to me na..please drop me"

"Ugh you are stubborn. Chal ab. Dida tell Swara I left ok?"He told dida and left with Ragini making faces at her.

"Are dida where is Laksh?"Swara asked her Dida.

"Swaru meri baat maan Laksh ko Ragini se bacha kar rakh warna wo aaj ke jaise phur ho jayegi usko leke"Dida explained to her. Swara burst out laughing at her Dida's explaination.

"Don't worry dida agar use Laksh chaiya toh hum use Laksh de dete hai. Waise bhi hume Ragini ki choice ka kabhi kuch nahi lena chahiye naam bade darshan chote haina?"Swara asked her Dida.

"Chupkar badmash"Dida laughed with her.

There was a knock on the door. A handsome Sanskar stood at the door looking confused at the two women before him "Dida Ragini?"

"Are woh toh chali gayi Laksh ke saath use laga tum nahi aaoge aaj"Dida told him.

"Oh ok thik hai main chalta hu baadme aata hu. College ke liye late ho raha hai"He said and was about to leave when Dida stopped him.

"Are Sanskaar Swaru ko bhi saath le jao. College kitna door hai aur abhi auto bhi nahi milega use easily."Dida ordered Sanskaar.

"Ji Dida.Chalein Swara I'm getting very late as it is."He glared at swara.

"Yes sir" She bowed at him mockingly and they left.

"Dekho muje drop karneki koi zarurat nai hai. I'll manage"Swara told him.

"Dekho maine Dida se Keh diya hai ki mai tumhe drop kar dunga matlab mai kardunga Samjhi?"Sanskar glared at her.

"Phir mat kehna meri waja se Tumhare aur Ragini ke beech jhagda hogaya and all"

"You know what tumhaari wajase phirse mera aur Ragini ka jhagda hoga woh toh unavoidable hai. So you might want to shut up and sit in the car"He told her angrily.

"Hey bhagwan itna gussa ek kaam karo Sansku ye piyo" She forwarded him her bottle of cold water to drink. He snatches the bottle out of her hand and throws it in the back seat spilling some water. A surprised Swara squeals "Are you mad?"

"Shut up"Sanskar roars at her.

"I had told you I will manage but no you have to poke your nose everywhere and then get angry on me idiot Sansku "

"Shut up"

"Ulta chor kotwal ko daate"she muttered undered her breath. "Waise Sansku ek baat puchu?"

"Tum pagal ho kya? Illiterate ho? Don't you understand the meaning of shut up?"

"I know any way ek baat batao itni baar mujhpe chidte ho muje shut up bolte ho, par ek baar usse apni dil ki baat nahi bol sakte? kyu"she asked him. There was silence no one said anything.

After a while they reached college. "You know what Swara Kuch cheezein kahi nahi jaati feel ki jaati hai. Khair tum nahi samjhogi." He sighed.

"I understand Sanskaar" she said to herself,then turned to him"Lekin kuch log for eg. My sister is na samaj you need to make her understand. Chalo main chali warna tum toh gaye. Take care" she got out of the car and was soon surrounded by fiends

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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
Awesome update
Ragini is too much
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
hey its really cute.
I love your hindi re.
I'm bengali...although I can speak hindi well enough.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Very nice chapter 😳 Though i don't like Ragini 😕 And Sanskar's behaviour was very rude 😲
Continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Different take...loved the update, especially Sanskaar's portrayal...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Nice.
Ragini laksh se pyaar karte aur laksh swara se .swara sanskaar se.aur sanskaar ragini se.

Aur ragini kii wajah se sab dhukhi honge.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
Nice start 😊 I am intrigued though. Whom does Sanskaar really like? Is it Ragini, as Swara thinks? Or does he actually like Swara? 😉

Ragini is as usual here...😡 That lady will never improve... Truly a Gone Girl! And Lucky...he is Swara's best friend, but does he have feelings for her too?

Do update soon. Pm me.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
loved it dear... love swara a lot.. sanskar love with ragini? 😭 .. please make him fall for swara soon.. I don't like sanskar with ragini. . and this stupid ragini have no reason for hate swara. . laxji has no opinion on his own. . very good... continue soon dear. . loved this ff very much. . what is your name dear?..

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