SWASAN OS: LANE OF MEMORIES.

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rithika2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: mridulakrishnan
nice story...dear ,, i loved it...😊

thank u for the comment dear

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi
Fantastic update

thank u dear😊

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swethalovely

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Awesome OS ...

Thanks for the pm

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Smilelicious
Rithika what an amazing OS 👏
Very well described 😳 Especiallt the part where Swara is left alone, but then Sanskar comes there. His support 😳 The way he explained her that he did this only for her, he wanted to save her from the one who did all this, who is none other than Ragini 😕
The last part was really lovely Swara & Sanskar's child, symbol of their love aww so cute ❤️
Keep writing 😃

thank u for the lovely comment dear..😊

u comment means alot to me..

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
You left me baffled..
You left me in haze..
You left me speechless..
With the dazzling power of your grace..

This is what I feeling right now.. Is there any need of another word?

hi easha 🤗

thank u sooo much for such a lovely comment dear..

ur comment made my day really and it made me more confident and happy.

ur few words explained me everything and u doesnt need any more words to say it.

thank u soo much dear..

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950660

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

That was awsm

Loved it !!!

Edited by Shikha022 - 9 years ago

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Superb memory line...and the place u described was so awesome. ...

Tat place become their favourite spot...

Loved it so much dear...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Rithika dear...

Such a lovely, feel good OS, though of course the initial part showed Swara's pain, her turmoil as well. The ending was pure, pure bliss. 😊

These lines conveyed so much romance ""I had the chance to live the life of a girlfriend to my husband in that one month. It was strange but it was quiet sweet and romantic to meet my own hubby in all chupke chupke mode.""

That is just so romantic yaar. ☺️ I mean, commitment is there, the "marriage" is there, since they anyway got legally married owing to Rags and Lucky's tamasha. But still this slow falling in love, this "ishq ka ehsaas" between them...

I am gonna be in SwaSan dreamland for a looong time now. 😉

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Shree1005
Awesomely written... Loved reading it

thank u dear

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
Awesome OS. Loved the way you wrote Swara's emotions. Swara's pregnant? Yippee! Write more on SwaSan pls

thank u dear for the lovely comment

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rithika2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: swethalovely
Awesome OS ...
Thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: ketty84
like it

Originally posted by: Swasan
Awesome

thank u dears for the comments

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Rithika dear...

Such a lovely, feel good OS, though of course the initial part showed Swara's pain, her turmoil as well. The ending was pure, pure bliss. 😊

These lines conveyed so much romance ""I had the chance to live the life of a girlfriend to my husband in that one month. It was strange but it was quiet sweet and romantic to meet my own hubby in all chupke chupke mode.""

That is just so romantic yaar. ☺️ I mean, commitment is there, the "marriage" is there, since they anyway got legally married owing to Rags and Lucky's tamasha. But still this slow falling in love, this "ishq ka ehsaas" between them...

I am gonna be in SwaSan dreamland for a looong time now. 😉

hi viji,

thank u for the lovely comment..

i was literally waiting for ur reviews on this os..

im really happy that u liked those lines and even those are my favourite lines too..