Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Lovely update, Saku.
The way you have woven the Swara--Sanskaar--Lakshya--Ragini quadrangle, into a tale of corporate intrigue, with boardroom battles and strategic planning enough to rival the game theory 😊, is splendid. Just loved the role you have given to the supporting cast--AP, RP of course, and even Adarsh. Really wish the serial took time to flesh out these characters more.
Apart from the delicious Machiavellian machinations, this update was of particular interest to me, as it contained your lovely description of how Sanskaar & Swara are redicovering each other, in a sense. There is enough of their old selves still, for that odd sense of familiarity, but a lot has changed, and they do need to understand one another, inside out almost, to ultimately fall in love again. 😊 Very well done.
And before I forget, your last para was very, very moving.
""She cried in to his chest, and cried until the last drop of painful humiliation was squeezed and extracted away. Laksh could hurt her no more. There was one thing she discovered about Sanskar. He knew of pain more than she did and of cause, its remedies. Unknown to her one tiny piece of her broken heart was lost.""
Very evocative, indeed.
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