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Posted: 9 years ago
This chapter was kind of refreshing for me as it gives a glimpse of the metaphorical Kurukshetra.

The strings are in good control by the Shakuni of this Mahabharata. Ragini has started her latest hunt - the destruction of enemy in familiar grounds where they start losing their attentiveness. This reminds me of Pandavas returning to Hastinapur after the Lakshagraha and Draupadi's Swayamvar. Sanskar and Swara likewise "married" will return back to home to face new challenges of Shakuni a.k.a. Ragini, aided by hotheadedness of Duryodhan a.k.a. Lakshya.

RP is a Vidur all the way. Often in the background just like Vidur was in comparison to Pandu and Dhritarashtra, he essentially sees the real picture. His eyes do not miss the grey edges of truth nor do they miss Shakuni's "good intentions" and Duryodhan's blind hunger.

Your new character, I dunno if u thought of it but it made me reminisce Jarasandha. Bhism's enemy and supreme king of Magadh. He is powerful and wise and most importantly knows how to reach his ends.

This chapter's Sanskar reminded me of Karn and his stand against Jarasandha. Is that an inkling for the future?

The King and the Queen return back to their kingdom just like Yuvraj Yudhisthir and Yuvrani Draupadi. In ur fic they are already king and queen. Is it going to be a dice game again? Will Draupadi suffer again??

PS - Thanks for the scrap. And I went into Mahabharata again. It seems I cannot type any comment without bringing the epic in context😕

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sakura the update was phenomenal
I am loving it
Why I feel this Agarwal is related to Kavita
Any ways loved the update
Specially the part where Sanskar and Ram discuss Swara
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Saku,
You hold your cards very close to your chest huh?

did not see that coming.
loved RP and Sanky's memories and RP's characterisation.

I also adore how SwaSan relationship has not gone for a toss here.

very well done.

For me the star of your story is not SwaSan. Its been firmly claimed by Rags.,

Loved the Mahabharata and Little Red Riding hood reference.

Love--

medha.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting update. Looking forward to your next one.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

This chapter was kind of refreshing for me as it gives a glimpse of the metaphorical Kurukshetra.

The strings are in good control by the Shakuni of this Mahabharata. Ragini has started her latest hunt - the destruction of enemy in familiar grounds where they start losing their attentiveness. This reminds me of Pandavas returning to Hastinapur after the Lakshagraha and Draupadi's Swayamvar. Sanskar and Swara likewise "married" will return back to home to face new challenges of Shakuni a.k.a. Ragini, aided by hotheadedness of Duryodhan a.k.a. Lakshya.

RP is a Vidur all the way. Often in the background just like Vidur was in comparison to Pandu and Dhritarashtra, he essentially sees the real picture. His eyes do not miss the grey edges of truth nor do they miss Shakuni's "good intentions" and Duryodhan's blind hunger.

Your new character, I dunno if u thought of it but it made me reminisce Jarasandha. Bhism's enemy and supreme king of Magadh. He is powerful and wise and most importantly knows how to reach his ends.

This chapter's Sanskar reminded me of Karn and his stand against Jarasandha. Is that an inkling for the future?

The King and the Queen return back to their kingdom just like Yuvraj Yudhisthir and Yuvrani Draupadi. In ur fic they are already king and queen. Is it going to be a dice game again? Will Draupadi suffer again??

PS - Thanks for the scrap. And I went into Mahabharata again. It seems I cannot type any comment without bringing the epic in context😕

Hi Niki,
Thanks😊
It sort of reminded me of Mahabharata too, when it comes to SwaSan's return home, married and ready to claim the throne. Agrawal is not Jarasand though...he will be more or less a Kans I guess. Yes there are links and interlinks. I hope you will continue to enjoy this way.
PS: You're welcome. I'm glad for the Mahabharata analogies, they're a treat to read.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Princess_Mansi

Sakura the update was phenomenal

I am loving it
Why I feel this Agarwal is related to Kavita
Any ways loved the update
Specially the part where Sanskar and Ram discuss Swara
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon

Thanks dear😊
Yes Agrawal is related to Kavita in a strange way😉
I'll continue soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: medhasankar

Saku,

You hold your cards very close to your chest huh?

did not see that coming.
loved RP and Sanky's memories and RP's characterisation.

I also adore how SwaSan relationship has not gone for a toss here.

very well done.

For me the star of your story is not SwaSan. Its been firmly claimed by Rags.,

Loved the Mahabharata and Little Red Riding hood reference.

Love--

medha.

I tend to keep my cards in my pocket Medha, where they are safe until I make a move😆
I'm glad RP is making fans here.
Well this is Snow Queen after all, had to give Rags her place😳
Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Very interesting update. Looking forward to your next one.

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
This story is going so good that I want to know how you resolve all the suspense but at the same time I do not want this story/series to end .Go figure.😛

But after reading these three parts I will say this that I liked how you incorporated RP and RP /sanskaar dynamics.Impressed.

I will say this, Ragini did the same mistake that duryodhana did..both chose the army.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks😊

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