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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

Read three part in one go...

It was fantastic update dear...
Loved it...

Thank you😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules

Nice update! Loved the rapport between Sanskaar and his father. Is there a reason why RP is the way he is? Will we get to read more about his story?

Loved the whole little read riding hood and wolf thing.
The Ragini in this fic is infinitely more chilling than the one in the show and I hope SwaSan are ready for her! This Chandraraj character is giving me bad vibes...
Is it bad that I am actually thankful for Ragini for making SwaSan live under one roof from the next part?
Eagerly waiting for the next part and I am hoping that you update soon!

Thanks dear😊
Yes, RP do have a back story, you'll be reading it when the time comes.
Ragini is after all one of the SNow Queens here so she has to be chilling. Chandraraj is supposed to give you bad vibs. I'll be updating soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago


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Posted: 9 years ago
OK, I'd please like some of my doubts cleared. The Masi who has died has given her shares to Sanskaar, right? Sanskaar is the new chairman, okay. And now Ragini is saying that she wants Sanskaar back home. To keep an eye on him? How will she?
Loved Swara and Sanskaar's growing attraction.
Please continue soon, story is really going very well.
As usual no words to describe.
Thankyou ❤️
PS the comment is for chap 3
Still to read part four 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, Saku. 😊 Amazing.

Loved the music references pervading this piece. I studied the violin for 5 years, and still play occasionally, though am very rusty now. I love classical music, though, go to concerts all the time.

So, as you can imagine, reading about Annapurna's singing, her thoughts about planning for battle while the raga kept her mind focused and clear---Wow! I was really blown away.

The interaction between Swara & Sanskaar--- the pull of an uncontrollable soul connection--they are soulmates after all, how can they keep apart for long?--contrasted with the push of all the pain Swara feels, at his betrayal. Well done!

But I am a little confused now. Who is the SQ re? It seemed to be Ragini all along...but the last chapter had plenty of icy & wintry references to Swara. Pray, tell. 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb...loved it. Thr interaction between Sanskaar and Swara was amazing. Looking forward to reading the next part of your story 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Ardhikian

OK, I'd please like some of my doubts cleared. The Masi who has died has given her shares to Sanskaar, right? Sanskaar is the new chairman, okay. And now Ragini is saying that she wants Sanskaar back home. To keep an eye on him? How will she?
Loved Swara and Sanskaar's growing attraction.
Please continue soon, story is really going very well.
As usual no words to describe.
Thankyou ❤️
PS the comment is for chap 3
Still to read part four 😳

You're right. Yashodara who died has left her shares for Sanskar. He is the new chairman. What Ragini tells Laksh is that if they live under the same roof they'll get to know what some of the business decisions are before hand, perhaps have a chance to influence them as well. What her true motive is to make it clear that SwaSan marriage is fake.
Thank you dear😊 I want a individual comment for the 4th chapter😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
This is brilliant. I have read the Ice king and Snow queen till here in one go and all I have is praises. Everything in this story is just too good... ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful! Amazing I dont have words to say! but this part was heart melting!
Swara can act as cold she wants but her heart will feel for her old bff Sanskaar!
And he last few sentences of your update made me go aaawww!!😳
Hats off Sakura!👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful, Saku. 😊 Amazing.

Loved the music references pervading this piece. I studied the violin for 5 years, and still play occasionally, though am very rusty now. I love classical music, though, go to concerts all the time.

So, as you can imagine, reading about Annapurna's singing, her thoughts about planning for battle while the raga kept her mind focused and clear---Wow! I was really blown away.

The interaction between Swara & Sanskaar--- the pull of an uncontrollable soul connection--they are soulmates after all, how can they keep apart for long?--contrasted with the push of all the pain Swara feels, at his betrayal. Well done!

But I am a little confused now. Who is the SQ re? It seemed to be Ragini all along...but the last chapter had plenty of icy & wintry references to Swara. Pray, tell. 😛

Awwwee Viji😳 Thanks dear.
I studied the violin too, but later went to guitar and western music, still play some times when time permits. I'm glad you liked the way their relationship is progressing.
SQ here isn't one person. It is a mask many wear throughout the story. Mainly it is Ragini, somewhat due to betrayals it is Swara and with all the misunderstandings and family pressure it can be Annapurna at a time as well. The oldest SQ is yet to come, she is the one who started all this winter stuff, you'll know about her soon😊
Edited by Sakura24 - 9 years ago

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