SwaSan SS: Naino Ki Bhasha Samjhe Na [DISCONTINUED] - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Amrtina

Its very interesting

thank you dear.. glad you liked it.. (=
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Superb
loved it
love the way u've used colors for dialogues
wondering how will story continue from now..as both r far away from each other..
don't need pms cz i've BooKmaRkeD!
Edited by -damon- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -damon-

BtW Loved the Title too !

Aww! thanks a lot.. 😊🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -damon-

Superb
loved it
love the way u've used colors for dialogues
wondering how will story continue from now..as both r far away from each other..
don't need pms cz i've BooKmaRkeD!

hey! thank you so much yaar..
i'm so glad you liked the update.. will update soon..
will try to do that tonight itself. (=

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Hey guys.. sorry for late update.. i was not well so was a bit inactive..
now updating the second chapter..i hope you will like it..

In Kolkata
it's been 1 week that Sanskar left for UK, one day maid din't clean his room as he wasn't here for a year or so..She was cleaning Swara's room..when Swara asked her if she has cleaned Sanskar's room or not..and she said that it's not required as he is not here..Swara burst out on her..and said "what do you mean by it's not required..so what if he is not here..you should clean his room too..stop this work..go and clean his room first..n dare you give any excuse next time..his stuffs should be as they were when he was here..."
maid left from there..

She was very surprised on her behaviour because Swara never talked to her in such a way..she never shouts at anybody..then what happened to her...

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when Sanskar came to know about this..he couldn't stop laughing...he could understand why she did that...that moment was still fresh in front of his eyes...he couldn't forget those eyes of Swara..when she left his room crying..

A few months have been passed, Sanskar was busy in his studies..He used to talk to his family once or twice a week..but to his surprise..Swara never talked to him..

Sanskar's POV..

"I know she was hurt very badly..she din't want me to go...but why..?"
"course yaar because she loves me...does she?? wowww"..he smiled thinking of that she loves him..
"then why she doesn't talk to me..idiot!!" he patted on his head..."she is angry with me..that i left her alone..
c'mon..she is not alone..whole family is there...then??"

he touched his neck and he could still feel that kiss..."pagal hai wo..."
"does she even know that she kissed me..." he smiled again..."wait..!! I am blushing...Sanskar..you have gone mad dude..."
" why i pulled her out from that hug...GOD!! i can still feel her heartbeat...right here.." he put his hand on his heart...
Sanskar was restless more because of Swara din't talk him since he left..he wanted to hear her voice..he wanted to tell her that he missed her too...
"but seriously.. may be she doesn't remembered it at all..she was so upset that she just hugged me..may be she does..yes!! she does remember everything..n now she must be feeling shy n that's why she is not talking to me...
wowww...Shona...let me come back once..n then i'll teach you how to confess your love properly." .he smiled again and went to bed...
dreaming that moment was his habit now...he used to dream her running towards him..hugging and kissing him..and whenever she says.."suniye"..he smiles in his dreams too...with each passing day he was falling in love with her..


Swara's POV...

"he is such a...umm..Devil...yes..!!
He is a devil..he left me even though i told him not to go.."
"you're an idiot Swara..why would he stop..he doesn't know that you love him.."

"really??? not even now?? i hugged him...oh no..!! omggg...what if he knew it that i kissed him..??"
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"shut up u Swara..'course he knew that..u kissed him 4 times...but does he remember that...no no..m sure he doesn't...
then why every time he talks to mom he asks for me..
no i won't talk him...he wants to tease me..right..!!!"

"n he did hurt me so much..he left even when i was crying..he doesn't care about me..otherwise he could have stopped..i would never talk to him...

and what if he got someone in UK...what if he started liking some other girl over there...oh no..!!!"
and that's it..she started crying...

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after more than a year...

Lakshya and Ragini were talking to Sanskar on Skype..
"c'mon man..u don't have time for 2 days?? please come na...
our marriage is pending because of you..."

"guys i know..if i'll come..then i'll have to come for 10 days at least..
just wait for two months..my MS will be completed..n then i'll be there for ever...sorry guys..."

after a few minutes of talk..Sanskar asked.."hows Swara btw"..??
she is good..."is she here..let me talk to her too"..
"she is not here..she has joined a job..her office was quite far from the house..so she is living in some PG near by her office...it's been more than a month..." Ragini told him..
"WHAT???? n guys allowed her...??"
"no..we din't..she wanted to leave...
we tried a lot..but she left...
she was little bit angry and quite upset..".. Lakshya told Sanskar

"she comes home 2-3 times in a month... we have no idea what's wrong with her..."- Ragini said
"Awesome..!! fine..!! i mean c'mon guys..n no one told me about this...".. Sanskar said in anger

they hung the call after a few minutes of talk...n Sanskar was very upset this time..
"c'mon Shona how can you do that..i know you're angry with me..
but why have you left the home..."

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2 months have been passed..Sanskar was done with his studies..and finally he was coming back to India..he strictly told everyone to not to tell about this to Swara..and he excused that because she din't talk to me during this whole period...they all agreed...

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everybody was happy..firstly Sanskar is coming back..secondly..finally it's Ragini and Lakshya's wedding...
R-L- they both were on 9th cloud...
it's been an hour that Sanskar reached home..he came to his room and checked everything was on it's perfect place...he smiled and lay down on his bed..looking at the ceiling he thought about Swara...

he got up immediately.."Swara..where is she...it's her sister's wedding..she hasn't been home..."
he came downstairs as fast as he could..
"Shona.??.where is she??"

she had her office today..so she said..she will reach here late in night...she was only here since one wee..but she had some urgent meeting today so she left in morning...Sharmishtha replied..

Lakshya: Ragini let's go..
Sanskar: you guys going somewhere..
"yeah!! Ragini has some work at jewellery shop..so i'll take her..why??"
Sanskar asked Lakshya about the address and thought that Swara's place is on the way..
"hey Laksh..can u plz drop me at xyz place..i have some work over there..."
"sure..but we will be late in night..how will u come back..??""
"it's ok..i'll manage..."" said Sanskar

"ok sure..let's go...Ragini..hurry up.."

Sanskar reached at xyz place and walked for 10 minutes..he saw Swara's Activa outside of her small house..he knows that she is back by this time...

he rang the bell..Swara was inside and getting ready to leave for her home..she din't know that Sanskar is already back from UK..
she said.. "who is this..."..
Sanskar din't reply...Swara din't open the door as she din't get any response...
Sanskar rang the bell again.. and said.. "postman"

Swara opened the door..she din't look at the guy.."yes..??"
Sanskar: I have brought someone's answer for you..
Swara looked at his face and she was surprised..she was super duper happy she smiled and was about to hug him but she realised that she is still angry with him..

(guys, i am writing dialogues in english..but here Swara is saying aap instead of tum and Sanskar says tum..to Swara ke dialogues mein Sanskaar ko thoda izzat de kar padhna...:P :P)

Swara: you?? when did you come back..??
Sanskar: Just 2 h.hh...
Swara: wows..and no one bothered to tell me..good...
Sanskar: yeah!! i told them to not...
Swara:'course..why not..
Sanskar: would you at least let me come inside..?
Swara: why did you come here...and how do you know this address..
Sanskar: I told you..i have brought some one's answer for you...
he winked at her..
Swara: what?? you please go..i have to leave for home..or i'll be late..
she taunts him..

Sanskar knew that she spoke in same way as he said at that day...
Sa: i've come to take you...
Sw: I am not a kid...i can go by myself..
It was being very difficult for Sanskar to control his laughter.."GOSH!! she is so much angry with him..i'll hv to make a lots of efforts...""
"ok..np..then you take me with you..as i dunno the way to home..""
Sw: "then why did you come here..please go...she turned and left to pack her stuffs..""

Sanskar came inside and said: if you want me to leave then why did you let your door open...
Swara turned to him.."what do you mean..."
"I mean to say is..." he hugged Swara very tight "that i missed u a lot meri Shona.."
Sw: "I am not your Shona..and you...she tried to make free herself..leave me..." she tried to push him with his hands...
"no i won't..he tightened his grip on her and moved his one hand on her waist...""
"oye don't be so angry na..you have already not talked to me for 1.5 year..you have already punished me a lot for leaving you...""
Sw: HA HA HA...she laughed sarcastically...u left me???..who r u to leave me...still struggling in his arms..
Now it was being very difficult for Sanskar to hold her as she started to hit him...
"achchha.. wo msg to sun lo.. jo main laya tha tumhare liye..."he nuzzled in her hairs and whispered in her ears..
her knees starting melting feeling his hot breath on her skin...


"tere hothon ne jo aayat likhi thi meri gardan pe..

aaj bhi haath pherta hu to nishaan ubhar aate hai..."



her eyes widened with what he just whispered.. she couldn't believe it really was him saying this..
and before she could respond to his whispers...he bend a little and kissed on her neck..."I am sorry Shona.."..Swara felt shivers in her body she stopped hitting him and lift her face upside..which made Sanskar to kiss her neck again..

Swara's whole body was shaking this time...
Sanskar looked at her face and smirked seeing his effect on her...
she wasn't trying to get freed from his grip..Sanskar smiled and bend again..he moved her hairs behind and kissed below her earlobe..."I am sorry shona..I really am.."

Sw: "you please leave me..let me go..." she said softly...she could still feel his breath on her skin which was making her go weak...

hearing this Sanskar gave a wet kiss on her neck again and licked her earlobe...
Swara pushed Sanskar with all her strength..."PLEASE!!!..."

"you please go..." Sanskar could sense..that she could cry at any time..he din't want to hurt again...he came here only to see her..to talk to her and to make her smile..but her eyes are moist...Sw: nooo..this is not what i wanted to do...omggg..i am so sorry Swara..i have hurt you a lot...but you should have talk to me at least once...""

he composed himself.."okay i am sorry..if you have packed your stuffs..can we please leave...""
Sw: "we???..i am not going with you...""
"i know..but bhaiyya dropped me here..so i hv no vehicle to go back..if its okay with you..can you please take me home with you.."

she din't say anything and cont her work...
Sanskar considered it as a green signal...

Precap: SwaSan's Activa ride..😉

please do leave your comments and hit the like button..
loads of luv..
-Akki

Other work on SwaSan:

my work on Ishaan Preet from PKHJD:

my work on RaNtara from DDEJ Devil'sHeaven-My Writing Index
Edited by itsokaysammy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PMs sent..
if you didn't receive one.. please hit like button on this button or buddy me..
Edited by itsokaysammy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
It's awesome dearie...
Loved it...
Beautifully written👏
Swasan very cute
Curious about next...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice...liked it a lot . Thank you for the PM😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update dear
Like it
Thanks for the pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
This was so awsm!!!
Loved it!!!!!
Plzz cntn soon

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