SwaSan TS: 'Stay'..Part3#Page11 (COMPLETED)

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heyy guys.. i wrote one more TS (Two Shot) on SwaSan.. i hope you guys will like it..
here is the first part...please forgive me if there are typos and other mistakes.. i didn't do any proof reading...

today has been a really gloomy day in maheshwari house..everybody was shocked as Ragini's truth was revealed.. and they were not able to believe if that girl whom they thought as the most cultured and innocent girl.. in reality her heart was filled with all hatred towards her own sister and she fooled everyone...
Lakshya was not able to believe the reality.. he didn't know whether he should apologize or should get punished for not have trust in his only love..
more over he was guilty for thinking about how he moved his relation forward with Ragini.. not because he loved her but to punish Swara for betraying him..
everyone was hell shocked but they couldn't even confront Ragini as she was 2 months pregnant with Lakshya child..
Dadi hated herself for causing all trouble to Swara and her family..she was angry and broken because she was the one who loved Ragini most and helped her in everything just because she believed she was innocent..
she wasn't able to meet her eyes with Shomi or Swara or Dida..
Ragini was at Shekhar's place.. because maheshwari family couldn't let her stay with them for a while...
in the evening Dida, Shomi and Shekhar came to maheshwari house to bring swara back as now everything was revealed..
her parents were together a long time back but now there was no grievance in their relationship...
before their arrival, sujata helped Swara to pack her stuffs.. she wanted to but since sanskar was also in the room she couldn't apologize to him..
later when DP called him because Lakshya had not come out of his room for whole day.. Sujata got a chance to Swara..
she apologized for her rude behavior..and always cursing her for ruining his son's life..she cried and Swara consoled her that maa, you shouldn't say sorry...I'm not upset with anything because you were not aware of the truth..
later when sujata left swara packed her remaining stuffs...everytime she picked any of her stuffs.. she recalled something..after a few minutes when Sanskar came back in the room.. he saw Swara sitting on the floor..he rushed towards her..
her eyes were tearful.. he gave her his hanky and sat beside her..
what happened??
she looked at him.. and a lone tear escaped from her eye..
she nodded in no...
now everything is ok Swara.. you won.. everything is just fine..
maa baba will reach here in no time.. you can finally unite with your family.. and now your baba will accept you with all his heart..
she looked at him with blank expressions...
hmm??
she nodded in yes...he made her stood up and they both turned to another side..
tears rolled down on their cheeks and they wiped them immediately...
after a few minutes..Sujata called Swara that her parents and dida are here..
Sanskar, maa baba aa gaye...
he pressed his lips tight.. controlled his emotions and nodded in yes..
tum chalo..
aur tum..?
baad mein aata hoon..
she was about to leave when he stopped her..
Swara..?
she turned and looked at him..
tum- tum rah logi ab... wahan...
i mean...
she nodded in approval..
ab tum aaram se bed par so sakte ho.. ac 16 par kar sakte ho..
he scoffed hearing that.. kya pata..meri aadatein badal gayi ho...he mumbled..
huh? she asked..
he nodded in no..
tum... miss..miss karogi? he asked in very low voice..but she heard him..
she nodded in no..
tum?
he also nodded in no... achchha hai.. ab jao yahan se to meri jaan chhoote.. he said..
right! she nodded..
she came out of the room and Sanskar also turned his back towards her.. he sat on couch and started working something on his laptop..
in a few seconds she came back to ask him when will he come downstairs..
but she stopped as she saw him leaning his head back on couch..
as he closed his eyes.. tears flew down from the corner of his eyes..
Swara! please stay.. he whispered...and covered his face with his palms..
her heart wrenched seeing him like this.. but a smile appeared on her lips..
"he didn't want her to leave..".. this feeling filled her heart with warmth and immense pleasure..
she smiled and came downstairs...
as soon as dida saw her she hugged her.. Shekhar was standing there lowering her eyes down..
Swara hugged her mom..
Shona, let's go back to home..
Swara.. yes.. let's go back.. i know what i did is unforgivable.. but i hope you and sharmishta will forgive me.. maa also wants to meet you...
i'm sorry baba.. but i can not come with you..
but why Swara.. now we all know that you were innocent and you did nothing wrong..
and i really am sorry for everything..
i know baba.. and i don't blame you for anything.. but still i can not go back..everyone looked at her with surprise..
Shomi held her shoulder and asked her.. if everything is okay?
Shekhar: Swara, beta i promise you.. now i won't let ragini to harm you in any way..
you can start your life afresh..
just forget everything that happened in past..
come back with us..
baba... i don't have any grudges for anyone..and i have forgiven Ragini a long time back.. because she wasn't the one i was disappointed with.. it was someone else.. who should have trusted him.. but he didn't..
DP and AP lowered their eyes.. they knew she was pointing towards Lakshya..
Swara, Lakshya has already said that he will divorce Ragini...he is guilty..we all are guilty and he still loves you..
if you want then...
no baba..i don't want him.. the day he got married with Ragini i broke all my relations with him..he punished me in every way he could.. and that for no reason.. waise bhi Ragini is pregnant.. i don't want to ruin her life.. i don't want them to get divorced baba...
par shona..then why do you want to stay back...?
because...she closed her eyes..and took a deep breath..
everyone was waiting for her answer..
because.. i have some responsibilities towards some one...
who? Shomi asked.. and Dida smiled thinking whom she could be talking about..
Sanskar...he is my husband.. and i can not leave him.. everyone looked at her and Sujata smiled hearing that from her..
"tu sach kah rahi hai swara..."...she came forward and said..
swara nodded in yes..
but shona.. tum dono ne ye shaadi...wo sab to jhooth tha.. aur hum sab jaante hai...
maa.. humara rishta juda tha kisi maqsad ke liye... magar wo jhootha nahi tha.. balki ek jhooth ko samne laane ke liye liya gaya faisala tha...
aur main humare rishte ka sach ab nibhana chahti hoon...
baba, aapne kaha na.. main apni zindagi naye sire se start kar sakti hu..
to main wo nayi zindagi sanskar ke saath start karna chahti hoon..
sujata got very happy.. her eyes turned moist.. she cupped her face and kissed on her forehead..
bilkul sahi socha hai tune swara...
AP and DP also agreed.. they had no problem with her staying in this house as Sanskar's wife...
par shona, kya sanskaar ne..??
swara nodded in yes.. with a smile on her face..
par jab meri baat hui us se.. sanskaar to tumhara saaman pack kar raha tha..shekhar asked..
wo unpack ho jayega baba..
everybody smiled.. shekhar nodded in yes..
after a few minutes dida, shomi and shekhar left..
Swara came upstairs.. Sanskar was still sitting on his couch.. lost in his thoughts..
when he heard someone closing the door he opened his eyes..
Swara? he got up...
tum..? i'm sorry.. i almost forgot.. tum chalo.. main saman laata hoon...
Sanskaar.. maa baba chale gaye..she lowered her eyes and said with sad expressions..
chale gaye matlab? he came forward and held her shoulders..
wo mujhe le kar nahi gaye... she said..
kya ab phir us ragini ne kuchh kiya.. tum batao mujhe..
sara sach pata chalne ke baad bhi..
tumhare baba aaye kyun the phir..??
he held her shoulders and made her look at him...kya hua... mujhe batao Swara..
mujhe aana chahiye tha nee...he turned and brushed his hairs with his fingers thinking if they caused a new trouble for her..
Sanskaar..!
he turned and looked at her...
she came forward and stood close to him...
Swara? he took a backstep..
kyunki main jane se mana kar diya..
huh? he looked at her as if he heard her wrong..
maine jane se mana kar diya sanskar..
his heart skipped a beat thinking that she is not leaving...kyun? he could utter..
kyunki abhi ek sach aur hai.. jo maine nahi bataya hai..
kaisa sach...? he wondered now what else is remaining..
yahin.. ki mujhe kisi ki aadat ho gayi hai..
he looked at her with blank expressions..
main samj... before he could complete his sentence.. she came closer to him and very slowly slid her arms around his waist and hid her face in his chest...'tumhari'...she closed her eyes and stood still..
it took a moment for him to realize what she said.. and then a smile appeared on his lips..she could feel his fast and now stable heartbeat..
sach kah rahi ho??
she nodded in yes..
he took her in embrace and wounded his arms around her..
hamesha yahi rahogi??
she again nodded in yes...
mere paas??
hamesha...
he kissed in her hairs.. and pulled her out of her hug...
pahle kyun nahi bola.. packing ki nautanki kyun ki..?
at least bola to.. tum to mujhe wapas bhej hi rahe the...
mujhe laga tum jana chahti ho...to main kaise rokta..
tum rokte to sahi...
sorry..!! he made puppy face...
tum kyun nahi chahte the main jau?
matlab?
matlab tum khush ho ki main nahi gayi.. aisa kyun.?
kyun kya matlab..
matlab koi to wajah hogi..
tum bhi to nahi gayi.. kyun?
maine to bata diya..
theek hai.. mujhe bhi aadat ho gayi hai tumhari..
jhooth...
he nodded in no...
sach bolo sanskaar.. nahi to couch pe hi sona hoga.. she giggled and turned...
he held her arm..and made her turned to him..
aur agar bata diya.. to kahan sona hoga..
she looked at him in awe.. and lowered her eyes..
tum blush bhi karti ho? he slid his hand on her waist and whispered in her ears...
she nodded in no..and made her free from his grip..
he held her hand.. but she didn't look at him..and ran outside..
he ran behind her and stopped her making her pinned over the railing..
she lowered her gaze and couldn't dare to meet them with his...
i didn't want you to leave.. he said..
because i love you...he looked at her with piercing gaze..and said..
she looked at him and their eyes met..
he leaned over her face..she felt his hot breath on his lips... his grip got tighter on the railing..as he took her bottom lip in his..and inhaled deeply..
she felt a chill through her spine down...she closed her eyes and kissed him back..
she held her shirt tight in her small fists and gave into that kiss.. they both kissed gently...and so for long..
after a few minutes they broke the kiss and looked at each other...
they both smiled and shared a hug..

precap: just a day into SwaSan's life.. in presence of RaGya...
love...
-Akki

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Ooolalala thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Simply beautiful. I hope to see all of this in show. Youre such an amazing writer. I can totally imagine swasan here. Mind blowing just simply amazing job
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow akki
Loved it
Sanskaar is such a dhakkan...loved swara's bindaaspan
Finally swasan confessed
Continue soon yaar
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the confession scene ❤️
pls update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was awww ❤️
Loved Confession part most ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you so much guys..
will update next part soonish...
today's schedule is very tight.. so most probably..tomorrow morning.. :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the confession part the most! ⭐️
Plz update soon... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U can not end it in 2 parts.. 😳 please continue n make it a "ss" 😳

Eeeppp.. Sucha delight to read.. Loved it ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much for writing this.. can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice. At last they confess 😊. I think your plot has a high chance of happening in the serial too--Swara is likely going to have to confess first, don't think Sanskaar will disclose his feelings without prompting. 😊

Eagerly looking forward for the next part.

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