SwaSan SS: Naino Ki Bhasha Samjhe Na [DISCONTINUED] - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks a lot dear.. 😳😳
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Originally posted by: ros_aavir

This is certainly interesting!

Complete change in characterisation for both Swara and Sanskaar!

Continue soon. 😃

yeah!.. you will probably find a completely new shade of Sanskar in this SS..
i'm glad you liked the concept/intro.. means a lot..
will cont soon.. (=
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Originally posted by: Smilelicious

This is interesting Akki 😳
Glad to see you back here 🤗
Continue soon 😊

heyy.. it's good to see you too yaara..
thanks for the comments..
will post first chapter soon..
most probably will update TS 'stay' and this ss together.. 😳
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thank you.. 😳😳
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PM ME WHEN UPDATED PLEASE I CANT WAIT
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Interesting concept yaar... Do continue...😊
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Originally posted by: Miss-swasan

PM ME WHEN UPDATED PLEASE I CANT WAIT

sure. thank you so much for your comments dear.. 😳
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thank you dear.. (=
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Originally posted by: Sreeja_babu

Interesting concept yaar... Do continue...😊

thanks a lot dear.. glad you liked the concept..
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will update tonight..😳
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guys, i added banner for this SS..how'z it??
Part 1

Hey guys.. thank you for such a wonderful response..
here is the first chapter of SS..
i hope you will like it..

It was 1 AM...Swara was sleeping in her room..suddenly she woke up as she heard some noise outside of her room..she came outside and saw her family is gathering in hall...
She came downstairs and asked while rubbing her eyes... "what's going on?? why everybody is awake?? is is earth quake..or its my birthday"...every body smiled on her question...
No..they replied...then why are you here..??
aunty why you're awake ..you should sleep now..it's too late...you're already not well..she told to Sujata (mom of Sanskar)
Actually sanskar has a flight in morning at 4..so we just came to bid him goodbye...
flight??? how..when...what??? i mean...why???

arey, he is going to UK...for MS program..

Swara couldn't believe what she heard..she immediately ran to his room...which was just next to her room...
everybody was surprised to see her like that.."what's happened to her..din't she know about this.." Sujata asked...
now she'll surely fight with him for not telling her about this.. but how come she doesn't know..Annapurna wondered..

Swara entered in Sanskar's room without knock..it was closed but not locked...she looked here and there but he was no where...
she was being restless and was about to leave when she heard the click of knob..she turned..and she saw him..coming out from the bathroom..he was wearing a black jeans but he was topless... without noticing her, he walked towards the mirror while drying his hairs with his towel...for a moment she forgot why she came here and adored his masculine body....but she came back to her trance when he threw his towel on chair...

Suniye..?
Sanskar looked in the direction of the voice..and there he saw Swara..her eyes were moist.. or actually full of tears...
Shona...???..so u're awake..hmm.. thought u won't come to say goodbye..
she ran towards Sanskar and hugged him tightly..she wounded her arms in his neck and cried like a mad..
Sanskar was shocked at this...he din't understand what did just happen...and couldn't utter a single word...Swara kept crying and her tears were flowing on his neck and shoulder..he asked her.."Shona...what happened?? why r u crying??"

Why r u going..n u din't even tell me..that u're leaving..
u should have told me..no one told me..
please don't go..please..why r u going..?? she hugged him more digging her nails in his shoulders..

Sanskar still couldn't understand all this..
ssshhh!! shhh!! what's wrong with u...??
m going UK for MS..everybody knows that..

what's wrong with me.??.how would i live here.??...i'll be all alone..
i'll miss u..please don't go..
how can i live without you...
Sanskar tried to pull her out of hug but she hugged him tight..

now he was going all mad with her dialogues and why the hell is she crying...he put his hand on her head and patted it slowly.. I am going for two years only..
n stop crying please..i have to get ready or i'll miss my flight...

no please don't go..don't leave me...Swara kissed on his neck while crying...
this was hell shocking and surprising for Sanskar.. at first he didn't really notice if he felt strange, angry or good actually...her kiss was so soft..that little touch of her lips sent shiver through his spine down...this was the first time any one touched him like that...and now he felt really good...
but Swara was not in her senses..
she kissed him on his nape again n again...now when Sanskar couldn't bear that..he pulled her from that hug...
SWARA...!!!!!

Swara came back to her senses and felt very embarrassing..sad..hurt..
i hate you...she could utter and ran out of his room..she went into her room and locked the door...
Sanskar couldn't believe what did just happen...a small smile appeared on his lips..he went into bathroom again..washed her tears which was now on his neck and chest..he touched his neck where she kissed.. he was lost for a moment the way she kissed him.. but he shook his head and got ready..while coming downstairs he tried to peep into her room..but it was locked..he called her twice...but she din't reply...
he felt sad because he could hear her sobs from outside...

he came downstais and left for the airport..

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Sanskar: yes mom..i have reached here safely..
everybody in his family was very happy..they all wished him for his studies and career...
later Swara's mom- Shomi talked to him..
Sanskar beta..did u had a fight with Swara before you left..she is very angry since u left and she is not talking to anyone..
no maa..nothing happened..you plz tell her to call me...
she was just sad that i left...
after a few minutes they cut the call..Sanskar was smiling after hearing her name... just like he was smiling whole time in flight..

Precap: SwaSan's POV on the bedroom moment..

please do leave your comments and hit the like button..
loads of luv..
-Akki

Other work on SwaSan:

guys, if you are interested in reading my work on other couples, please check: Devil'sHeaven-My Writing Index
Edited by itsokaysammy - 9 years ago

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