Girl With The Guitar Tattoo. [SWASAN FF] update Part 14, page 33 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone,
I had to split my next update into two parts since it was getting too long. I will try to post the second part second half tomorrow. Also I my native tongue is not Hindi, so apologize for wrong hindi, feel free to correct me.

PART - 2a
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Gadhodhia House, 5AM
Ragini Gadhodhia, was tossing in her bed unable to sleep at 5AM as she was still not accustomed to her new room. After all, only two weeks passed since they relocated from Delhi to Kolkata. It was by no means a sudden decision, she was made aware of it months in advance when they decided to renovate her mothers ancestral home and shift back. It was not the unfamiliar surroundings that bothered her as much as her identity crisis, which she has been suffering since childhood.

Rags was born in Kolkata to a Marwari father and a Bengali mother. Shekar Gadhodhia and Sharmistha Bose met as doctors who started their careers together, fell in love and got married. They moved to Delhi when Ragini was 3yrs old. To top up her mixed parentage, she was a Delhi girl in her head and Kolkata girl in her heart. Her both grandmothers also lived with them which created a dichotomy in her upbringing:
Her dadi, Parvathi Gadhodhia: Shekars mother was a pious & orthodox marwari
Her dida, Shobha Bose: Mishty's mother was a liberal and ultra-modern Bengali

She could not bridge the cuture gap as well as her adorable mother Dr.Sharmishta Bose Gadhodhia (mishty). Mishty was a caring wife, responsible daughter & daughter in-law and above all one of the well known gynecologist among the doctors circles. Rags always looked up to her mother as the perfect embodiment of a successful woman which motivated her to pursue medicine.

Rags thoughts were interrupted by a loud Skype call on her phone. Her sleep flew away when she checked the caller. Excitedly tied her long tresses into a high bun, grabbed for her ear phones and picked the call. She enthusiastically went on blabbering with her animated gestures, like a kid in a disneyland.

At around 7:30AM, when her mother came to wake her up, she saw Rags on phone jumping like a kid. She gave a grim look, put the coffee on the table and left. This upset Rags so much she hanged the phone instantly with a "Bye Di" and halfheartedly drank her coffee alone. She felt shitty to ruin her morning routine with her mother.

On a usual day her mother comes wakes her up either with a kiss or puts the hot coffee cup near Rags fingers so she jolts from the bed. They drink their morning coffee together (always) and gossip about anything and everything under the sun. Today was her bad day. Since Rags mother and father are very busy doctors she only gets the mornings to spend quality time with them and she could not afford to screw it up.
She freshened up, got dressed in a white kurti with red palazzos and a multi color bandhej scarf. She was hoping her mother compliments her but she was having breakfast with her face buried in the newspaper. Rag came to the table, hugged her father from behind and sat beside him. Her face dropped because: One: No one complimented her. Two: Her dadi made oatmeal porridge for breakfast.

Rags: Dadi, she shouted at the top of her voice aap sab senior citizens mujhe torture kar rahe ho.
Everyone at the table smirked and her dida was the first to comeback:
Dida: Parathe aur ghee yeh sab khaati rahegi to teri dadi ki tarah moti ho jaugi. Tum apni choti gaadi mein fit kaise karogi phir.

Rags forcefully gulped down the porridge and went out to meet her sunshine. The most precious gift she has EVER got in life, from the most precious person in her life (her di) when Rags cracked her medical entrance exam in the first go.

A stark red color mini cooper.

Rags to her car: Hi Redsie, missed me baby. She hummed as she sat in the driver seat and carelessly threw her bag, doctors coat and steth in the seat beside. She reached college at 10AM and was too exhausted by the time her labs and ward training finished by 4PM. She forcefully dragged herself to Apollo hospital since she agreed to train the children there for the children's day event which was tomorrow.

Apollo Hospital, 2PM
DP slowly opened his eyes and was feeling his senses as the anesthesia was wearing off. His hand reached the soft palm of his wife AP. She quickly raised her head and signaled him to relax. He was a giant mess of wires and hospital apparatus around him. DP signaled where the rest of the family is. She spoke to him as softly as ever.

AP: Aapke saath itna sab kuch hua aur abhi bhi aap ko ghar ki fikar hai. Mujhe khushi hai ki aapne apna parivar ka saath nahi choda, aap mauth se ladke wapas aye ho hum sabke liye. Maine RP, Su aur saarein bachon ko ghar wapas bhej diya. Aur waisey bhi doctor ne ICU mein ek se jyada family member ko allow nahi karte hai.
DP nodded understandingly. He spoke and his once commanding voice now boiled to a mere whisper.
DP: Mujhe maaf kardo Annapurna. Hum haalathon ke saamne kamzor pad gaye aur saare parivar ko itna ghabrahat pahuchayi.
AP susshed him.
DP: Mujhe Adar, San aur Laksh se milna hai aaj.

Apollo Hospital, 4PM
Adarsh comes to meet his father. AP warns him not to stress his father out and excuses herself from the ICU saying she will go to the hospital canteen.
DP: Dekho beta mujhe tum par bahut garv hai. Lekin abhi hamare business bahut uljhano mein fas gayi hai.
Adar: I know papa. Chachaji bata rahe the ki kal kaise hamara saara cargo ka ship samundar mein doob gaya. Abhi 4Cr ka nuksan hai.
DP: Mujhe lagta hai ki abhi Sanskar se behtar hamara business aur koi nahi sambhal payega. Lekin khandan ka bada beta tum ho, tum hamari raay se sehmat nahi ho to abhi humko batao. Agar tumhe khud par bharosa hai...
He hold his father hand to stop talking.
Adar: Papa mujhe pata hai mein academics mein aur achievements mein Sanskar jitna qualified nahi hu. Jis din mainey apna B.Com se drop liya ussi din mainey decide kiya ki mujhe hamare mills mein kaam karne mein jyaada maza aata naa ki leadership mein, na apne international clients ko sambhal ne mein. In fact mujhe behind the screens hi rehna hai zyada matlabi nahi ban na hai. So aap jo bhi decision loge mein sehmat hu. Lekin apne ek baar ke liye bhi Laksh ko consider kiya hai?

DP is silent. Adar understand the silence, waits till his mother is back and leaves.

Apollo Hospital, 6PM
Rags sped into the hospital basement and she had to do parallel parking. She took a deep breath and swerved to the right when at once she heard something break.

Rag: No, no no. Redsie, sweetie not you cannot get hurt.
She got down the car and started shouting at the top of her voice like a rowdy.
Rag: Kaun hai woh andha jo mere Redsie ko peeche se maara.

In the white Honda Sedan behind, it was none other than La behind the wheel and San was sitting beside him.

San: Lucky (this is what San calls Laksh, pyaar se) yeh tune kya kiya aur who bhi ladki ke gaadi ko. Ab koi scene create hoga toh log hame hi blame karenge.
La: Bhai, don't worry. Girls don't know how to drive and this girl is a maniac. Aur yeh Redsie kaun hai.

La steps out of the car, removes his shades and bangs his head against his car when he sees whose car he dashed. Rag on the other hand comes and stars punching him really hard on his shoulder.

La: Ouch..
Rag: Peekar chala raha tha kya
La: Mein din mein nahi peeta. Omg Dr.Ragini aap doctor kam aur daayan jyada ho.
San observes the ruckus and comes out of the car.
San: Shit lucky, tune iss mini cooper ki haalat kharaab kardi
Rag: Don't worry I will send the bill to you only.
La: Doctors ki kaam hi yehi hai, bill ke naam se logon ko darake rakh te hai.

San and La start giggling. San goes to Rag asks her for the keys. She reluctantly gives him. He parks her car properly and returns her keys with a smile.

San: Lucky, mein bade-papa se milne ja raha hu. Be nice to her.
La: Agar tumhe park karna nahi aata toh Nano le leti. Itni mehengi gaadi ki kya zarurat hai.

Ragini starts punching him again and La shouts "ouch" once again. San hears their silly arguments as he was walking away and smiles to himself. His smile disappeared at the thought of when was the last time he behaved so silly.

Rag: This car is very sentimental to me.
La: Kaun Redsie, winks. Chill maaro and on a serious note repair ka bill San ko bhej dena.
Rag: You are hopeless. Tell me your phone number, I will watsapp you my bank details and repair bill.

She says that with a friendly smile, La reciprocates the same. They say bye to each other and disperse.

Sanskar in the ICU
Sans went and stood beside AP, and put his hand on her shoulder.
San: Bade-papa aapne bulaya.
DP: Baitho San.
San: Bade-papa, Adar bhaiyya aur papa ne bataya mujhe aapke faisley ke baare mein. Mein aapko promise karta hu, I will take care of all the problems in our business today. I will struggle just as hard to give all aish-aram to the family just like you and papa struggled. Lekin mera ek condition hai. Aapko bahut jaldi thik hona padega aur kabhi bhi mujhe aapka jagah dene ka mat sochna. Mein apne hero se inspire hona chahta hu, unhe replace nahi karna chahta.

AP takes San hand and gives him an assuring smile.

San: Lekin mainey aur Adar bhaiyya ne decide kiya ki kal se Lukcy bhi office ayega. Bahut ho gaya uska natak in the name of freedom and masti. Sorry ki mein aapko itna bluntly bol raha hu. Mein Lucky ko apna life aur apni padhai waste nahi karne de sakta. Mein usse Maheshwari textiles run karne layak banaunga. Mein chahta hu aap usko ek chance do. Adar bhaiyya bhi yehi chahte hai.

DP and AP nod to San. He tells good night to them and was about to leave when Dr.Sh comes for his rounds. San shakes hands with him asks about his bade-papas recovery and leaves hearing the happy note from the doctor. San sees Lucky waiting outside the ICU and sends him in.
Edited by chi1tra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Liking it...very different frm the show...but whr is our swara. ..i suppose she is ragini's di right. ..but why is she missing? ?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2b:

Apollo Hospital, Children's Day celebrations: 9AM
It's been 3 days since DP's surgery and AP has not left his side in the ICU even for a second. Dr.Somil came to check up on them and she enquired why he came today instead of Dr.Sh.

Dr.Somil: Arre aaj children's day celebrations ho rahe hai aur unki beti perform kar rahi hai. Aap bhi chaliye, thoda sa change of atmosphere ho jayega.

As they were going towards the function hall Dr.Somil informed her that DP's health has progressed well and they could discharge him sooner if the family agreed to it. AP was taken aback by the melody of the sitar and a voice that could make even the nightingales jealous. They took two empty seats beside Dr.Sh, who seemed so enraptured by the performance of two women, of which AP guessed the girl who was singing was his daughter and the lady who played sitar might be the guru and there was a huge choir of kids. Everyone applauded and the host thanked Ragini Gadhodhia and Sharmistha Gadhodhia for a wonderful performance and Dr.Sh for giving them the pleasure.

Dr.Sh turned to AP who was complimenting his daughter. He introduced his daughter, wife, mother and mother-in-law to everyone. Rags touched AP's feet and AP blessed her.

AP: Beta I should thank you. You have such a God blessed voice; it magically removed all the pain in my heart and made it lighter.

Rag blushes while Dr.Sh says AP-ji aap bahut weak lag rahe hai. Aap ko ghar jaake rest lena chahiye. In fact hum DP ko aaj hi discharge kar sakte hai. Chaliye cabin mein baat karte hai.

Dr.Sh Cabin
Dr.Sh orders food for his family, Dr.Somil and AP. In the meantime he tells AP they could arrange a full time nurse in the Maheshawari house and he or Somil will pay regular visits. While everyone was having breakfast AP gets a call, she asks the entire family to come to Dr.Sh cabin.

Full Maheshwari and Gadhodhia family introduction happens. Everyone notices that San and La go and sit beside Rags and start talking too comfortably with her. Dr.Sh explains that they all met his cabin the other day.

San: Sach mein utna repair bill aaya, or you added an extra zero.
Rag: (fumingly) I sent the correct amount only. Your brother must have added the extra zero and smirks.
La: Bows in front of Rags.

Maheshwari Mansion, next day
The morning routines continued under Su guidance, as AP was busy attending to DP. Everyone was having breakfast when Dr.Sh entered for his routine check-up and followed him behind was Rag. Everyone greeted each other.

Rag: Sujata aunty aapka ghar awesome hai, just like in KJo movies.
Su: Doctor saab aur Rag beta aao nastha karo.
Pari: Woww, Rag tum bhi patient check up karti ho.
Dr.Sh: Who, actually Rag ki gaadi repair pe gayi hai aur usne mujhe personal driver bana diya, sighs.
Rag: Rubbed her eyes in disbelief. Aap breakfast ke liye itne dishes banaate ho, like seriously. Hamare ghar pe health ke naam pe mujhe khana hi nahi dete.
Dr.Sh looked at her disapprovingly while others were laughing at Rags. She looks sheepishly and they both go off to DP's room.

San: Lucky, are you ready for your big day.
Dr.Sh and Rag were about to leave when they bump into San & La in the entrance of the house.
Rag: Why big day? Lucky, haan. Is it your b'day Lucky? she says tauntingly...
San to Dr.Sh: Uncle actually woh Rag ki gaadi hamare wajeh se thuki hai. I am feeling a bit guilty seeing you troubled. Apko problem nahi hai toh my driver will leave her at her college.

DrSh was surprised at this revelation and rejected the offer. But Sans insisted so Dr.Sh finally agreed. San, Laksh and Rags were going in the car to leave Rags at her college first.
La: I am going to start working in my family business and today is my first day.
Rag: Sahi hai shaam ko party hai phir toh.
San: Lucky, tumhe itna nervous hone ki koi zarurat nahi hai. Hum sabko pata tha ki this day had to come but only difference is it happened to be a decision forced upon you. I couldn't tolerate anymore how you became laid back about your future.
Rags: Ohh, so that's why you are lucky. "Like Happy Go Lucky types" The typical rich spoilt brats, you are like a Delhi guy then.
La: (irritatingly) maai tu pls chup hoja.
Rags feels offended, she plugs in her ear-phones and looks at the brothers talk with a WHATEVER look. They reach her college and Rags wishes Lucky all the best in a very affectionate tone.
Rags: Lucky, I will give you an advice which a smart person gave me on my first day as a medical student. Everyone thinks first days are screwed up because we are nervous and we don't have any knowledge. But the real truth is we are fighting the fear of the unknown. Just tell your mind you are not the first person who is doing this, how worse the first guy who ever did what you are doing today must have felt. World is full of people ready to help you but you should let go off your fears so you can absorb everything in full spirit. Bye, good luck once again.

Her words definitely were profound but they had a mysterious calming effect on Lucky. San also had a new found respect for the silly Delhi girl now.

Two months later @Gadhodhia House:
The music, the ambience, the guests and the clamor was too loud and new for the otherwise reserved & low-key Gadhodhias. But they enjoyed it all with broad smiles on the faces since it was their daughter's engagement to the Maheshwari boy, who was a high profile name in the city. The families looked ecstatic with the choices that their children made.

The bride and groom sat in the plush sofa on the exotically decorated stage. Ragini looked drop-dead-gorgeous in a royal blue & beige lehenga. Laksh color matched her in a royal blue sherwani with beige pyjama. The pandit finally arrives and asks for the rings. Rag slips the platinum band onto La finger while La raised the platinum solitaire for the entire room to see and announces: Game Over.
Everyone laughs and Rags slaps him on the shoulder. He too slips the ring onto her finger, the duo give each other a hi-fi and they look into each other eyes deeply.

**Flashback**
Laksh's first day at office was not so bad after all. Adar and San made a genuine effort to keep him comfortable and what really lifted his spirits was the watsapp message from Rag. "All Good" she sent. The chat resumed for so long, they decided to take it offline and have a celebration for successful first day with a dinner. San, La & Rag went for a dinner and the trio seemed to hit-off very well.

Over the course of the next month Rag would visit their house with her dad for checking on DP uncle. Join the family sometimes for breakfast and she began to bond very well. Between Rag & La a lot of dynamics changed. Their watsapp conversations got endless, phone conversations got longer and their weekends got busy with he showing her around Kolkata. Somehow AP started to notice the change in La recently she doubted it was caused by him attending office. She asked San what's cooking and he admitted La and Rag seemed to have developed a liking for each other.

When DP completely recovered, AP casually slipped this into their conversation. He liked the idea of an alliance with the family who has given him back his life, who protected their family from breaking apart. They called Dr.Sh and Mishty the same day; the doctor couple had no honest reason to say NO. They simply had once concern if the Maheshwaris were against Rag doing her doctor practice. AP and DP immediately said they would be proud to have a bahu with such a noble profession.

**Flashback Ends**

Rag was superficially smiling to the guests and for photographs but devoted to her phone. She was texting aggressively and when La noticed he snatched the phone from her:
Rag: (shouts back) Lucky phone wapas do mujhe.
La was surprised at so much anger from Rags and especially over something so simple and on their special day.
La: I know bahut log tumhe aaj wish kar rahe honge but you don't have to reply asap na. Shyaam ko you can do this right, when the function is over.
Rag says with an impatient tone, to cut the crap and give her the phone. They were fiddling with the phone when there was a huge spark at the food counter due to an electric short circuit and the entire lights in the house went off. The curtains around caught fire because of the electric spark

Rags: Lucky, what did you do. Aaj bahut bada kaand hone waala hai.
La: Mainey kya kiya, your phone is the remote to electric short circuit or what.
Everyone rushed to put off the fire and they were able to put off the fire since it was low flame. The head chef dragged a girl into the middle of the room and said iss ladki ne short-circuit karwa diya sab kuch.
The girl was wearing army pants with a black hoodie, Stanford written on it and a burnt wire in her hand. As the head chef was about to pull her hoodie back she fought back. The faces of the Gadhodhia's paled out; They knew today isn't going to end well for them. Dr.Sh broke the silence first with a brash voice that had a remorse undertone to it:

Dr.Sh: Swara, I want you out of my house and out of my sight, abhi issi waqt. I don't want to hear another word from you.

The girl pulled her hoodie to reveal a baby looking face with dewy skin and blood shot eyes. Her hair was jet black too many red highlights tied into a high bun. Swara Gadhodhia, stood there in the middle of the commotion, head held low, and pulled her angry fists into her hoodie pockets.
Rags slapped her forehead and started to run towards her father with tear filled eyes. Mishty walks in a trance towards Swara, holds her chin up and says tu hame aur kitna barbad karegi Swara. She starts crying like the floodgates in her eyes forced themselves open.

Swara: I put my phone on charge. American charger tha... wo voltage...short circuit...she was now gulping her words.

Dadi and Dida notice that the situation is getting out of hand with so many guests around and their new sambandhis, throwing puzzled looks. Dadi ushers all the Maheshwaris to a quieter room. Rag helps her mother and father behind them.

Dida looks at Swara and into her eyes and hugs her grand daughter so tight she was making up for the lost 5yrs between them. The nathan she loved and cared for more than any other member in her family was back.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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heroin ki entry ho gai Humara hero kidher reh gya bhai ke engagement mai nahi aya?
very nice update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update yaar. So friendship bond started for raglak ah? Wow finally swara's entry came. continue soon
Edited by gayu6 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kushimian89

heroin ki entry ho gai Humara hero kidher reh gya bhai ke engagement mai nahi aya? very nice update


Abhi hero ko nahi pata uski heroine aa gayi hai, rotfl
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Posted: 9 years ago
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read all the cahpters, very beautifully written. I like this ragini very much.😊

and our swara, kya mast entry hui uski👏 always wanted to see her in gray shades, let her be crazy and do many mistakes in this ff. pls pm me when you update😊

Edited by patralekha24 - 9 years ago
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Whoa what an entry...fitting fr Ajay devgan or salman khan...but yeah apni swara kuch kam nahi...:):)
Awesome update n thnx fr the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You have me intrigued. Why is Swara behaving like that with her family? Why does Shekar have a remorseful undertone to his voice? And where is Sanskaar? Will you give us a clue to the background story in the next update? Contue soon, please.
Edited by bloomnskyrules - 9 years ago

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