Swasan OS:Love,Hate,Disgust and Bliss'THE BRIDGE' - Page 2

Originally posted by: Kushimian89

vey very beautifully written👏

Originally posted by: kubare

Loved it...it was truly beautifully written...loved how it was divided into emotions...starting with love followed by hate ...disgust...bliss...and all that connected it all the bridge...lived how you showed the literal and figurative bridge uses brilliantly

Oh I loved the satire used through out...and it had me chuckling through out...your wit... Wavering Laksh...literally and figuratively...

The Mahanta Syndrome.

The Contagious Obsession

Best loved Swara's aggressive kissing...and the humour you brought in the whole scene...

The best those Slaps... Hope we get to see it happen in the show too...

Hope to read more from you dear

Thoroughly enjoyed this...😆

Originally posted by: SONAL30

The Bridge

Dear ur story is the only positive thing about this bridge

I hate that bridge yaar but ur story was so nice

The way u have portrayed the scenes were so amazing

Loved it

Do write more

Originally posted by: mjhtfan8

Very nice story. I like the way you've told the story too.

Originally posted by: Aahanaxx11

Wow!

This was perfect! Just PERFECT! 👏

Originally posted by: cadburylover123

Just one word - Beautiful ❤️

Going to read it again and hope to read many more such beautiful stories from you 😳

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Well Written!

Originally posted by: princess_tara

lovely os

Originally posted by: Radhika03

Lovely OS Roshni...😳The Bridge 😆