Swasan OS:Love,Hate,Disgust and Bliss'THE BRIDGE'

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"It is up to us if we are a prisoner of our past or a guardian of our future, It is our Bridge to Cross"...

Swara loved these words that she read long ago and now almost a reality of her life. This bridge is almost a soulful part of her life now. Many a great twists in her life was witnessed by this bridge(and we audience ofcourse). The roaring waters that flowed beneath after the recent rains threatened to take her along but she was not one bit scared. We get scared only when we fear to lose something but here she has lost everything in her life. "Don't fall in love, fall off the bridge, it hurts less" how very true are these words, Swara thought.

LOVE: Swara had fallen in love once, atleast that was what she thought. Her love was Lucky, Lakhsya. A Bindass guy , a total charmer. Though meant to be the guy for her sister Ragini, his every antic was towards gaining Swara. He loved her with all his heart, atleast that is what he thought. It took months for him to claim this girl. Swara took time, felt guilty but fell in love as well. Ragini was their pillar of support to their love, atleast that is what they thought. If only thoughts were horses and we could ride safe to our destinations. It was not so, sadly enough. Lucky and Swara spent many of their romantic evenings on this bridge. The burning sensation of love in their hearts failed to see the true burning fire of spite and jealously in Ragini's eyes. Ragini was simple yet calculative, loving but with a reason, supportive but with an agenda. The waters that Swara had so admiringly watched along with Lucky proved they were no satin to doze swara off to sleep. When Ragini pushed Swara off the bridge on the day of Swara's planned wedding with Lucky, Swara was engulfed in water. The bridge never gave a helping hand. The water mercilessly beat and swept her away, choked her lungs, she was scared. She was scared for her life and was scared to lose Lucky, Her Love.

HATE: Swara was saved in time, destiny had greater plans for her. She went on a mission - "Mission Expose Ragini". Swara was no planner. Nobody gave her a responsibility to plan even a birthday party, so "calculative" was Swara. So here enters her super planner. Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari. A smart bright heir of the Maheswari clan. He talks sense all of the times and can't stand nonsense most of the times, the reason why he felt an instant attraction for Swara , (opposite poles do attract , right) He saw a girl who lived in her own world, full of bubbles. She was good at lectures on what is right and what is wrong. She had a opinion about everything and she thought it was her utmost duty to tell this world her opinion on everything. Sanskaar was amused at her. Many a times he did think if she was for real. But he soon got his answer, if he was for real why cannot she be. He had an original mission - his revenge on the Maheswaris whom he thought was the reason behind the death of his love of life- Kavitha. He was quick to realize his folly. Too quick because with Swara in neighbourhood no sane person can think of doing wrong, her lectures are too long. Becoming good was much easier. He gave up all his initial missions and took up Swara's mission to help her cross the bridge of life. With lots of twists and turns and pains Swara finally managed to get Lucky on the same bridge to make him see the truth. She hated him for the fact that he never believed a word of what she said. She did not force him off the bridge to find the truth but he himself slipped off, Lucky's nature being very wavering, his legs were no different. They wavered him off the bridge in to the waters. Swara was scared again, scared on the very little probability of Lucky getting to know the truth. Scared on her impending wedding (for real) with Sanskaar who by this time was firmly , truly , honestly and irrevocably in love with Swara.

DISGUST: How very quickly Swara moves from one mission to another, she might have fared very good in the Indian Army, thought Sanskaar. This thought crept up his mind when Swara was talking her sense on how Ragini should be forgiven. He could see that her sense was more her sense of seeing her sister happy, her parents happy and the whole world happy. He wondered how could such a person ever exist. So selfless, so angel like. Anyways stop dreaming Sanskaar...he whacked himself, it was time for Mission -Ragini Lakhsya Milao' . Inspite of the entire Maheswari and Gadodias clan forcing their displeasure on seeing Ragini back in her sasural, Ragini still managed to reach Lakshya's room as his wife. Sanskaar never had to spend his brains. Ragini was mastering the lessons of deceit in her own university of FoulPlay. She made a hundred efforts to gain Lucky's love but he managed a 101 times to escape from her clutches, not because he had grown smart but because he had caught the same disease of Ragini sharing a room with her - Obsession. He was obsessed to get Swara back in to his life. Swara was his brother's legally wedded wife, his Bhabhi to be short but he never took No' from Swara. He was sure that Swara still loved him and Sanskaar was just a bridge she used to crossover to reach him, Lakhsya. He saw swara fast for Sanskaar. He saw Sanskaar fast for Swara. He has seen Swara wait for Sanskaar to have dinner with him. He saw Swara has taken pains to know what Sanskaar likes and she has also stated making food for him. He saw her looking at Sanskaar with an unexplained longing in her eyes. He saw her helping him out with powerpoints and excels in his office work. He saw her playing Sanskaar's favourite songs before the family on her guitar. He finally decided that Swara still loved him, Lakhsya. That is what obsession and insanity does to us friends. One day when the other family members were out on an occasion, he used the opportunity to drag Swara out ...(u guessed it right) to the bridge. He knelt down, held her hand and said...Swara, I love U. Will u Marry me? Without a Yes or No, he kissed her hand. Swara felt pure DISGUST. She now actually wanted to throw Lucky off the bridge by her own effort. But Mahaanta is a syndrome friends with no cure. She thought of her sister's suhaag. But she at the same time realized there was a third person on the bridge who had witnessed this entire drama - Sanskaar. Swara was scared, scared that Sanskaar might misunderstand, scared of loosing Sanskaar, Her Bliss.

BLISS: There are few moments in our life when we experience this word Bliss. But Swara was living her bliss after the day she realized that she was in love with her husband , Sanskaar. The man who stood by her side in thick and thin, may be an old saying...so a man who stood by her side in all her missions. He never gained a thing out of her senseless missions but his bliss was in seeing the girl he loved with all of his heart smile. But slowly a brainy sanskaar also failed to see that his girl is also indeed falling for him. Inspite of seeing the changes in swara for the past few days for him, he too like Lakhsya thought swara loved Lucky...(how lucky, u lucky), the final nail to the coffin was the kiss on bridge scene. He came back to their room and sat without a word or movement with his face buried inside his palms. Swara slowly entered the room and latched it. She knew words were not going to make a sense and her lengthy bashans were not going to convey her love. She came close to Sanskaar and touched his shoulder. He looked up and with words most incoherent even to himself he said " We should be parting ways Swara". I know u love Lucky and will always will. I shouldnot be holding on to u. Our mission cannot be completed. Lucky loves u and u love him. There is no Ragini or Sanskaar in ur story...His eyes gave way to tears which he tried to hold on to but they never obeyed. Swara caught him by his collar and kissed him...how many times and where she was not sure but she was pure exhausted after her kisses. She slowly opened her eyes to see a Sanskaar who looked rather like a poster with her lipstick marks all along his forehead, cheek, nose, neck and even chest...she later noticed that she had pulled out a couple of his shirt buttons as well and hence the colour on his chest. Sanskaar was never so shocked in his life. Before he could react, Swara yelled out her usual sense on how she was all his and if he doesnot believe her she will leave for ever and ran away (Oh NO...)to the Bridge again.

THE BRIDGE: Oh my swara, how many times a day you actually plan to climb over me, sighed The Bridge. You are not even afraid of my raging waters. I can easily let your petite self swallowed by my faithful waters but I am so afraid of that guy who will burn me down if I do so...

Sanskaar slowly climbed on the bridge. He could see that the water was so dangerously running close to the bridge. One missed step and the world will lose an angel and her mad lover, me, Sanskaar. He quietly stepped close to Swara who was now in deep thoughts on writing a last poem on... The Bridge, ofcourse. Sanskaar slowly stepped closer and whispered in her ears..."I never knew u kiss so good". Swara was startled and almost lost her balance to the utter shock of the Bridge but with Sanskaar near her she isn't falling off as he had already held her by her waist. They had a small eyelock and Sanskaar quickly swept her off her feet in to her arms to carried her off the bridge. He placed her near his car. She was looking at him all the while. As he put her down she asked...what did u tell me on the bridge??? That I kiss good, but Sanskaar iam yet to know your proficiency in a kiss?? Sanskaar raised his brow and before Swara could blink he caught her petal lips with his stronger ones to kiss away all her pain and plight to replace them all with the bliss of her life. They stood kissing each other for a long long time.

Sanskaar: Why did not u tell me that u loved me?

Swara: Why should I tell u that, u should have understood..

Sanskaar: We should talk to Lucky, he will be in a misunderstanding that u love him.

Swara: Don't bother ... I slapped him thrice before coming in search of you.

Sanskaar: OMG, You slapped him.

Swara: Yes, that was long pending. I thought I will complete the task today.

Sanskaar: Please don't climb this bridge when the waters are too high. Its dangerous.

Swara: Nope...it's a beautiful bridge. I love it. I can spend my entire life on this Bridge.

Sanskaar: But we maynot allowed to build a house over the bridge Swara.

Swara: You are my Bridge Sanskaar. The loving Bridge who connect me to this bliss-filled life. I love you very very very very much.

Sanskaar took Swara in his arms for a loving embrace.

The Bridge stood in witness of the lovers who now know which bridge to cross and which bridge to burn.

Edited by RoshiniManeet - 9 years ago

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dilwali thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very sweet story loved it. i like one shots bcoz u dnt need to wait wow
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vey very beautifully written👏
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Loved it...it was truly beautifully written...loved how it was divided into emotions...starting with love followed by hate ...disgust...bliss...and all that connected it all the bridge...lived how you showed the literal and figurative bridge uses brilliantly
Oh I loved the satire used through out...and it had me chuckling through out...your wit... Wavering Laksh...literally and figuratively...

The Mahanta Syndrome.

The Contagious Obsession

Best loved Swara's aggressive kissing...and the humour you brought in the whole scene...

The best those Slaps... Hope we get to see it happen in the show too...

Hope to read more from you dear

Thoroughly enjoyed this...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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The Bridge
Dear ur story is the only positive thing about this bridge
I hate that bridge yaar but ur story was so nice
The way u have portrayed the scenes were so amazing
Loved it
Do write more
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Very nice story. I like the way you've told the story too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!
This was perfect! Just PERFECT! 👏

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Just one word - Beautiful ❤️
Going to read it again and hope to read many more such beautiful stories from you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS Roshni...😳The Bridge 😆
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Originally posted by: KawalArora

very sweet story loved it. i like one shots bcoz u dnt need to wait wow

Thank u friend😛

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