SwaSan OS:ACCEPTANCE(Part 2 of Realisations Three shot)

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dundumol96

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Sanskar ache playar hai

mauke pe chakke maar diya

mujhe dost nahi biwi chahiye

ab dekte hai kaise swara sanskar ko clean bowl karti hai

aur i lov to read u r works isliye aage bhi pm karti rahiyo

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Prizi
awrsummm dear :)

thanks prizi, glad u like it.😃

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: princess_tara
it was awesome
loved it

thanks tara. glad u did.😛

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medha

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: The.Lannister
Thanks for the PM Medha!

This part seems right out of a Mills & Boon novel☺️ Deserts...they are so fascinating they have the right mix of history, culture, romance & a fairytale like quality to them.

He poured her some water, to freshen up, from the jug though...for some reason I found this super cute. We certainly notice the smallest things which shouldnt even matter when we are craving a person's attention😳

Swara will always be Swara🤪. Tent tent mein farak hota hai yaar. Where he confessed was like outside your bedroom...you are now in front of a toilet for heavens sake😆😆

"If you want to, really want to be with me, love me back, then Swara, you will have to be my wife, not a friend." Sanskaar cut Swara off. "You will understand what it is to be married and then be my wife. I don't care how much time it takes for you to reach that stage...but I will not let myself love you back until and unless, you are there to meet me halfway. Get that. I have never loved you as lightly as Lucky and if you love me back, it cannot be as shallow as that. Marriage is not a game...and do not mock it, by making it sound like a college crush." PERFECT!👏

She found Sanskaar smelt way better than that camel. 🤣

Move away Limos & Paris...all a romantic heart needs is a camel & a desert night☺️

Hello Shruti😊,

I'm so happy to hear from you on this.

You seem to be a really fantastic and voracious reader, from what I gather from your various replies on some of my friends' posts.

I'm glad you noticed the punchlines.😆 Yes, swara has to have some childishness left. She is having a major crush...and of course, she is just positively nearly writhing for her husband's attention(malicious grin)😉

So, she is magnifying all gestures towards her. got her where i want her.😛

I never read a Mills and Boon novel...but i have read a couple of Nora roberts, until I discovered that half of them contain the same sentences copy pasted.😃

The desert seemed an apt setting, you see...a bengali person would feel awestruck and out of comfort zone in rajasthan...rather like Swara, little more than a child, did with the way more mature and introvert Sanskaar. But beauty after all lies in the eyes of the beholder; her view is changing.😳

Hope you like the last part as well when I update.

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anshu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

beautifully written yet again !!! U always do magic with the words. Loved it !!

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The.Lannister

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: medhasankar

Hello Shruti😊,

I'm so happy to hear from you on this.
You seem to be a really fantastic and voracious reader, from what I gather from your various replies on some of my friends' posts.

I'm glad you noticed the punchlines.😆 Yes, swara has to have some childishness left. She is having a major crush...and of course, she is just positively nearly writhing for her husband's attention(malicious grin)😉
So, she is magnifying all gestures towards her. got her where i want her.😛

I never read a Mills and Boon novel...but i have read a couple of Nora roberts, until I discovered that half of them contain the same sentences copy pasted.😃

The desert seemed an apt setting, you see...a bengali person would feel awestruck and out of comfort zone in rajasthan...rather like Swara, little more than a child, did with the way more mature and introvert Sanskaar. But beauty after all lies in the eyes of the beholder; her view is changing.😳

Hope you like the last part as well when I update.

Voracious ka toh pata nahi but yeah i do love to read😆

Nora Roberts I never liked much. Mills & Boon were a good series of romantic novels till a few years back when they had good stories by good authors. Ab toh wo bahot hi bekar ho gaye hai🥱

Waiting for the next update.

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Beautiful Medha...just beautiful. I have no other words to describe it. The way you had depicted the desert scenery, Swara's growing awareness of her feelings for Sanskaar, and Sanskaar's ever present, potent love for her...heady ingredients for a most delectable, aromatic dish! 😊

I loved their conversation in the tent---seemed like a mature conversation, which would be tone perfect for a real couple in their position. Sanskaar's rejoinder, that he wanted her to understand what it meant being a wife, and not just try to restore their relationship as friends, was top notch.

And your little wry sentence, that Swara realized Sanskaar smelt a whole lot better than the camel, was rib ticklingly funny and kinda romantic 😳 at the same time.

I am catching up with this chapter from an airport lounge! 😊 Couldn't resist logging in to check on airport wifi, when I got your PM. 😊

For whatever my opinion is worth, I just wanted to say that beauty in writing is a rare gift. You have this gift, my dear friend. Thanks for sharing it with us. 🤗

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago