Ts- forever and always updated part 3B page 5( completed)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys..I know I haven't updated any of my Ss or my off in a long time. Sorry folks, busy with studies and exams coming up so I won't be able to update any of it till Nov first week. Before I sign off I have something to present before you guys..one from me to all of you...a swasan os-forever and always..

Swara was looking at herself in the mirror. She was looking beautiful in that marwari lehenga, orange and red did suit her complexion, the khandani jewelry that AP presented her went well with her outfit. Ragini who was elated with swara's marriage had applied the perfect makeup for her. She looked angelic. Swara heard the notice of the procession. She went near the window to have a glimpse of her in laws and her to be husband. She couldn't look at him properly with all the people coming in. She turned around dejected and sat on her bed. She looked at her palms that carried a beautiful mehendi design and she started searching for laksh's name in it. She tried a lot but couldnt..
God! Where did the mehendi girl write laksh's name...if I can't find it..how will Laksh? And she blushed thinking about Laksh...
Swara's thoughts- Laksh and I are finally getting married. Laksh my first love...we had been through so much.. I had my doubts on our relationship..I even thought to break up but thank god I didn't..thank god Sanskar stopped me from doing something stupid. Sanskar, my best friend and laksh's cousin. Sanskar always was there for me. Every time I needed his help, always he was there. Even he helped me to make Laksh jealous so that out of jealousy he will come up and propose to me and it worked..Laksh did propose me and today I am all set to be Laksh's wife...she blushed again. But, where is Sanskar? He had said he would be the first to be here..just then her mobile beeped-
Message from sanskar- check your mail...
Swara always wondered why he was so obsessed with e-mail. A message would have been enough. She logged into her id to find a mail from Sanskar. She opened it and it read-

Dearest Swara,

I know messages are easy but emails help you to avoid giving replays and also with email you don't expect much of a reply. So you don't have to reply me and I am not expecting any reply from your side. Let's just keep it simple. I am gonna pen down all that I have to..you can read if you feel like..stop when you want to or just delete it.
Swara was confused by his words and continued reading to find out what was it about-
Swara, you are my best friend. Even before you fell for Laksh you were parent in my life. We have been friends for a decade now and today you are going to get married to my younger brother. Great! God! I love you Swara.. I love you.. I know I shouldn't tell you this...especially not today but I can't help it. I have loved you always and I am deeply, madly in love with you. You were always my girl. My best friend, my partner in dance, pranks, rides. Its been you always. And not to forget we were each other's savior. We have been together through lots in these years but we never fell apart. Never gave up on each other. I thought all of this and "us" is forever but then you fell for Laksh. I don't blame you Swara...I don't...trust me. Even today all I want is your happiness..your smile.
Swara was shocked. A lone tear fell from her eyes as she continued-
I..I don't know what to say. I am such an idiot.. I couldn't tell my best friend that I love her.freeeaaakkk... God! You were right Swara.. I am really bad when it comes to love stories. See..I couldn't tell the girl whom I love so much..who means the world to me, for whom I would lie..do all things that were completely insane..I couldn't tell her, looking in her beautiful dove like eyes that I am in love with her. You are my first love and you will be in my heart always and I am gonna love you forever. I am gonna cherish all the moments I have spent with you- our late night rides, talks, gifts, fights, laughter, fun everything all of it. I don't know if I should say this or not but I will always remember our first kiss in that rain. I am sorry for what happened that day and I am sorry I wrote it here. I know its just a mistake for you but it wasn't for me. Coz I love you Swara..then, now and forever.
Swara wanted to shut it down right then but something in her wanted her to continue-
Swara I won't be here when you become Laksh's wi..I don't want to write it. It hurts me, pierces my heart to know that" you will always be in my heart but not in my life". I can't Swara. I helped to get Laksh..but I can't help myself..I can't do this. I know you hate me for all this but I have loved you always and will forever.
You remember Swara once the promise I made to you on your 16th birthday-
I Sanskar maheshwari..promise Swara Bose, my girlfriend to be the world's best boyfriend. Give her all the happiness, shower her with gifts hugs and kisses of course and keep her smiling always. I will love her beyond always and forever.
Swara's tears didn't stop as she read those lines. She continued reading-
And I will fulfill that promise coz
"Love is a promise and promises are forever."
I will love you coz all I can do is love you. Loving you only that comes easy to me. They say forever and always are the same. But, there's a difference-
Always change. But forever doesn't.

So my promises are forever and so is my love for you. You will forever be my love and forever my always.

Yours( someday) forever
Sanskar

Swara shut her laptop and sat there stunned as she just realized her best friend was in love with her from the very beginning and that there was a forever to continue ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please right one more part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved it!
Please continue!!!
I want to know what happens!

Mihika
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It was awesome...
Sanskar mail was so nicely written...
Plz do write further...
Pm me while updating. ...
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Hello people I planned on an os, with the overwhelming response I take upon to continue the os as a ts or Ss. I hope you guys like the next part. Enjoy reading 😊

Part 2

The Maheshwaris had reached the Gaddodia Mansion and the greetings were in full swing. Annapurna complimented ragini for her beauty and gave her a beautiful piece of anklet and asked her to give it to Swara. Ragini smiled and nodded. Ragini left to give Swara the shagun. She pushed open the door to find a strange silence in the room. It seemed as though happiness was replaced, it seemed so incomplete and engulfed by pain, she went in and found Swara in one of the corner. She was sitting down with papers, gifts and things all around her. Swara picked up one of the photos and held it close to her and the tears kept flowing. She sobbed hard and all she uttered was ...Sanskar... Why Sanskar...why...
Ragini was stunned by the scene ahead of her. All she noticed was her sister in the wedding outfit, weeping and recalling Sanskar. She went towards Swara and sat down near her. Swara who was still sobbing didn't realize ragini's presence until ragini called her name.-
Swara...
Swara looked at ragini and quickly laid her head on her shoulders and cried. Ragini couldn't see her sister in that state. She looked around and she found sanskar's photo, letters signed Sanskar and gifts. She understood what was going on. She smiled and thought- love is friendship.
She caressed swara's hair and asked-
Do you love him?
Swara nodded still resting her head on ragini's shoulder.
Then why are you here, why are you not down there getting married to him?
Swara quickly snapped up and looked at ragini amused.
Why are you looking at me like that? Did I say anything wrong?
Ragini..I...I love ...
You love Laksh right?
Swara didn't answer.
Ragini held Swara by her shoulders and said-
When I asked you, do you love him? Whose thought crossed your mind Swara?
Swara didn't answer. She stood still. Ragini decided to correct Swara and make her realize her feelings for Swara. She removed her hands from swara's shoulders and crossed them across her chest and said-
Sanskar...am I right? She asked with a smile across her face...
Swara's face lit up the very moment and she realized that it was him. Yes, Sanskar was the one she thought of. Its him, her best friend.
Swara nodded a yes.
Ragini was delighted by the news, she gave Swara a sisterly hug and said-
I so knew it.. God! I am so happy...she hit Swara on her head playfully and continued-
I knew one day you guys will fall in love...you two are adorable... Just perfect!
After hearing all this from ragini, Swara felt as though she was really mad to have decided to marry Laksh. She looked around and at herself in the mirror, her eyes have swollen and she was a mess but her heart felt so happy. She was happy and elated. I love you Sanskar...that was what her every heart beat was saying... I love Sanskar...and she could see smile forming on her lips. Swara gave ragini a hug and told her-
I love him ragini...I love him...
Ragini broke the hug and handed over to Swara the anklet presented by Annapurna-
Laksh's mom gave this, its shagun before marriage.
And the reality struck, Swara realized that today was the day she was going to be Mrs Swara Laksh Maheshwari. Its her marriage day and the groom is waiting downstairs for her. The sisters looked at each other while ragini found herself in a helpless state, Swara was heartbroken coz she knew very well that she was in love...in love with Sanskar and not Laksh..

**flashback**
Swara...Swara...come fast...we will get late.
Coming...2 minutes.
Sanskar was waiting outside swara's house on his bike. He looked handsome in his blue jeans and white shirt. A well set hair and his killer smile, that was enough for any girl to fall head over heals for him. Came Swara dressed in a black jeans and royal blue floral top. Her hair were left free to mingle with air and the long wearing clinged to her cheek bones. She looked beautiful. Sanskar passed on a smile which she returned. They then left from there. On the way-
Sanskar...I really am not in a mood to watch movie...
I know...but sapna and Neil have invited us...so...
Still..
Come on Swara...anyways its vacation going on...why are you being so lazy...
I am not lazy but I am not in the mood that's it...
Its okay..I am there na to entertain you..
That's true and the duo chuckled.
While rest of the friends watched movie, swasan were busy chattering and least bothered about what was going on in the big screen. During the interval, swasan made an excuse and left from there. They decided to roam around before leaving for home.
Sanskar...
Hmmm...munching on his cheese popcorn..
We are 18 right? Sipping her coke..
Yes...so?
I think its time we fall in love...
What? Sanskar asked shocked and stood in his place.
Swara turned to face him, took a cheese popcorn, munched it and continued-
Yes..why not? At 18..
So...Swara...you don't fall in love...love happens to you...and I am happy being single..saying this Sanskar started walking ahead.
Swara ran behind him and asked-
Will you be my boyfriend?
Sanskar looked at her and asked-
What's your problem?
Sanskar, we are best friends right? So let's get into a relationship we can be friends as well and get to know how relationship work..what say?
No way...what if we loose our friendship on the way?
We won't. Friends first and then relationship...
Sanskar was still unsure. Swara understood sanskar's doubt regarding the idea, she went down on her one knee, moved her hand forward and asked-
Mr. Sanskar maheshwari, my best friend. Will you be my boyfriend?
Sanskar was taken aback by this change in avatar of Swara but then this was her. Swara gadodia, his best friend and he knew he was in with her on everything. His heart was sure of her and so he took her hand and lifted her up as a 'yes' . Swara wrapped her arms around Sanskar and he held her protectively with his arms around her waist. From best friends to being in a relationship, that indeed was something.
**flashback ends**
Sanskar opened his eyes and there were years flowing down his cheek. He wiped them off and looked at swara's photo set as wallpaper in his cellphone. I love you Swara...I love you...
Flight no.6E 532 is set for boarding. Passengers are requested to do their check-in- came the announcement and Sanskar got up from his seat. He took his luggage, kept the phone in the pocket and moved ahead...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely..please update next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I just loved it. Actually I loved all your writing.
You write very well.
Plz do PM me if possible.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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update sooon... cnt wait fr more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So good,... try to update soon yar,...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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another beautiful one...i can understand how sanskar could have been in love with her given their closeness...what made swara not realise it and go after laksh i wonder...will she run away from her wedding now and go stop him?

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