SwaSan 3S: REALISATIONS(Part 1-Falling in love) - Page 6

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

That's nice..

Do continue soon

Originally posted by: SupriyaG96

Wonderful and great writing 👏 👏 ⭐️
Swara's realisation of love for Sanskaar 😳 😳
'But there was distance in the nearness. There was silence in the speech. Swara felt...abandoned. yes that was it. Abandoned.' I really want Swara to feel this in the show 🥱 Her using of Sanskaar for her own motives it irritates me 🤢
And Sanskaar came for Swara may be he got instinct that Swara is alone 😉
"Well, now that they were sipping tea together in the same place where swara had previously been sitting alone...there was a different aspect to the darkness that had covered the light." Loved this line 😳

Originally posted by: dundumol96

Its really nice


waiting for swara's move towards sanskar

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

awesome start>>
loved it>>>
please pm me

Originally posted by: samiya.059

hey medha the os is absolutely wonderful.This exactly what I want to see in the serial.Sanskaar ignoring swara and she doing everything possible to get his attention.It is high time that some of sanskaarz wishes come true.He has been such a support system to swara but she hasn't realised his importance.I want her to feel the anguish of sanskaar and know what has she done to him
I liked how u described swara's feeling and how she was feeling aloof coz of indifference of sanskaar
But I wanted to read the whole story in one go..."poor me"
Why divide such a beautiful story and torture poor swason fans...!!
Well the wait will be worth it I know
You writers at forum have made me greedy and I want episodes full of swason
Keep writing
it was really a beautiful story

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

You have managed to convey so much in the simplest of words! I like your to the point style of writing. Idk when the show will reach this point where swara feels everything that she has been putting sanskaar through, but till then I am happy with all the OS n FF everyone is putting on the forum.

Please update soon n PM me

Originally posted by: SujaLuvsMayur

Wow amazing
awesm start
plz updt soon
thnx 4 pm

Originally posted by: JazzyM

Seriously, the way you wrote, I felt Swara's emotion, it was to the core of herself...her loneliness, her yearning for the blossoming new realization... seriously dear, beautifully written...

The restrained Sanskaar...I could imagine him in the series.. The chai scene...I could easily relate this scene...realistic but cute...

Beautiful piece...please do continue...