SWASAN FF...UNCONDITIONAL LOVE OF SANSKAAR--FINAL PART (UPDATED) PG 5 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll

Read both parts...

Awesome story...
Loved it...
Continue soon...
And plss pm me



hello

send part 3 in PM. pls chk :)😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
That was heart wrenching..
Lovely update..
N song selection was just wow..
Sply the song "tum bin jaun kahan.." Loved it !!
Very well written..
Waiting to see jealous swara !!
Try to update next part asap !!
Tc :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
do continue yaar very intresting sansku should say dis to swara to ignore ragya but cvs won't show dis
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Posted: 9 years ago
#14
such a amazing story
bechara sanskar he truly love swara
continue soon waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So emotional n heart touchin update... Hope Swara will understand depth of sankar's love...😊😊
Really penned wel...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Both the parts are awesome...
Sanskar taking care of Swara...
Swara reading Swara's diary...

A very heart touching diary part in Sanskar's word...

great..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part -4

Swara crying badly after reading the diary & waiting eagerly for sanskaar. She thought "aisa kya h??? mujh me jo sanskaar mujhe itna pyar krta hai??

Or main???? She thought what her maa & dadi said "Pyar to shaadi k baad kbi b ho jayega but sacha rishta wahi jo musibat k woqt kaam aaye"

Shomi's words " dekh swara maine sanskaar ki aankhon me tere liye bahut pyar aur izzat dekhi h. jitna pyar wo tujhe krta h na utna pyar koi nhi kar sakta & ek baat me 100% kah sakti hoo ki wo zindagi k har mod pr tera saath dega kyonki beta usne upne pahle pyar ko khoya h & wo ache se janta h ki pyar khone ka gum kya hota h"

She felt something something in her heart. & she feel some soft feeling for sanskaar. Suddnelly land line phone ring. She thought "koi phone kyo nhi pick kr rha?? Anyways main hi pick kr leti hoon. Waise b subah se room me baithi baithi thak gyee hoon. Thoda change ho jayega.

She picked the call. From other side

Caller: ji madam ji, me golden shine car service se bol raha hoon. Wo sanskaar bhiya ka phone lag nhi raha. Unse kahna ki unki car ko thik hone me abi 2-3 din lagenge. Thoda major fault aa gya h accident k karan to abi thoda tym lagega. Acha ji Namaste. & call disconnect.

Swara: hello!! Sanskaar ki car ka accident. Kya hua usse?? Hello, hello

She shouted. Every ones come in hall to hear her voice.

AP : kya hua swara???? Tum chichi kyon??? Kiska phone tha???

Swara: phone , accident, sanskaar

Sujata: ke hua chori?? Bhang kha lee h kya??? Ke bol rahi h???

Ragini usse jor se poochti h: swra kya hua??? Kya bol rahi ho???

Swara (shattered): wo sanskaar ka accident ho gya h???mechanic ka phone aya tha ki sanskaar ka phone nhi lag raha to aapko inform kr diya. Suddenly she comes to sense & tries to call sanskaar. But phone was switched off. She panics.

Sujata: he mhara ram ji. Je kya ho gya jiji. Mera beta.

AP : sujat chup ho jao. Swra kya usne bola ki sanskaar ki sanskaar ka accident hua h???

Swara: nhi badi maa. Wo me kuch poochti. To usse pahle hi usne phone disconnect kr diya.

AP: haan to thik ha na. mera dil kahta h usse kuch nhi hua. Wo aa jayega.

Swara : pr badi maa. Uska phone b switched off aa raha h.

AP (worried): lakshay tum sanskaar k friends ko call krke pooch. Kahin wo wahan to nhi h.

Lux calls all the friends but kisi ko sanskaar k bare me nhi pata tha.

Swara ko sanskaar ki chinta krte dekh lux ko bahut bura lg raha tha. Swara paaglon ki tarah sanskaar ko phone mila rahi thi but no response. Wo bahar lawn me aati h & piche piche lux b aa jata h.

Lux: swara tum bhai k liye itna pareshan kyo ho rhi ho???

Swra (questioning look): kya mtlb h tumhara???

Lux: matlab jb tum bhai se pyar nhi krti to tumhe itna pareshan hone ki jrurt nhi h. & me to chata hoon ki bhai ka pichali baar ki tarah (kavita k tym) iss baar b pata na chale. & fir me ragini ko divorce dekr tumse shadi kr lo & we stay happy forever.

Swara shocked to listen lux talks. She shouted on him.

Swara: hv u losted lux ???? kya bol rahe ho???

Lux: kya glt bola??? Maine

Swara slapped him (jor ka jhtka jor se lga lux ko)

Swara: tum kitne gire hue insaan ho lux. Tumhari baatein sunane k baad mujhe upne aap se nafrat ho rhi ki maine tumse kbi pyar kiya tha. Acha hua jo humari shaadi nhi hui. Aaj jb tumhare immature behavior ko dekhti ho to god ka shukr manati ho ki usne mujhe daldal me girne se bacha liya. Kitne ghatiya insaan ho tum jo upne uss bhai k liye itna ganda soch rahe ho jo kewl tumhe khush dekhna chata hai. Mein tumse hazaar baar kah chuki hoon ki tum mere liye ragini k pati se badkr kuch nhi ho. Tb b samj nhi aata to ab ek baar or sun lo. Tum mere liye ragini k pati & mere pati sanskaar k chote bhai se badkar kuch nhi ho. Iss lihaz se mein tumhari bhabhi hun. Baba & dadi ne sach hi kaha tha ki kuch rishte bhagwan banata h jo kisi k tode se nhi toot sakte & mera or sanskaar ka rishta aisa hi hai. Me yahan tumhre liye nhi aayee ho ki sanskaar k saath rah kr tumhe jalaon. Me to upne rishte ko ek naya moka dene ki soch rahi thi bus thoda darr rahi thi ki kisi b shaadi me pyar ka hona jruri h jo mere & sanskaar k rishte me nhi h. yeh to mein janti thi ki sanskaar mujhse bahut pyar krte hain but me upni hi feelings ko lekr thoda confuse thi .but tumahri pichali & aaj ki harkaton se main durga maa ko thanks bolna chati hoon ki usne mujhe ek acha decision lene mein meri madad kri. To ache se kaan khol kr sun lo Mr. lux maheswari. Ki me "SWARA SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI" upne pati se bahut pyar krti ho. & sanskaar to bahut ache se upni mohabat nibha raha h. ab meri baari h upni mohabat upne pati "SANSKAAR" k saath nibhane ki.

Aage se kbi humare raste me mt aana. & think abut ur wife.

Itne me hi ek taxi porch area me aakr rukti h & sanskaar taxi me se bahar niklta h. jise dekh kr swara dodti hui jaati h & uske gale lg jaati h. sanskaar shocked ki isse kya hua?? Then he saw lux in lawn & thought ki swara shayd lux ko jalane k liye uske galle lgi h. & wo isse swara ka natak samjte hue galle lagata h.

Sanskaar: swara kya hua???

Swara (crying ): thank god tum thik ho. Tum jante ho tumahre accident ki khabar semeri to jaan hi nikl gyee thi. & tumhara phone b switched off aa raha tha to tumhe maloom kitne byre bure khayal aa rahe they. Pr tumhare mechanic ne to kaha tha ki tumhari gaadi ka accident ho gya h.

in d meantym swara ki awaj se poori family b lawn me aa chuki thi &swra break her hug.

Sanskaar: haan wo meri gaadi k samne ek choti si ladki achanak se aa gayee thi & usse bachane k chakr me emergency break lagane pade jiski wajah se car ped se takra gayee thi. Mujhe kahin chot nhi lgi h bus car ka thoda nuksaan ho gya to wo mechanic ko dekr taxi se sidha ghr aa gya. Wo to traffic ki wajah se thodi der ho gyee.

Swara: & tumhara phone kyo switch off jar aha tha. Sanskaar chekd & said sorry wo battery discharge ho gyee thi.

AP: dekha maine kaha than a ki mera sanskaar bilkul sahi h. sanskaar tum jakr kamre me aaram kro. & swara tum sanskaar k liye haldi wala doodh lekr jana

Sanskaar & swara: ji badi maa.

In swasan room. Sanskaar ke shoulder pr thodi chot lag gayee thi & wo ointment lga raha tha. Itne me swara enters in room & see

Swra: sanskaar ye kya ??? mtlb tum niche jhute bol rahe they ki kahin chot nhi lagi thi.

Sanskaar thought "kaise batata tum mere galle jo lg hui thi. Me to bus yahi chata tha ki t um aise hi mere sine se lgi raho & ye woqt tham jaye.

Swara: bolo ...chup kyon ho?? Sanskaar: wo maine socha ki sab ghr wale ghabra jayenge & waise b choti si hi chot h.

Swara: acha lo tum ye doodh piyo or ointment mujhe do em lga deti hoon.

Sanskaar: rahne do swara me lga loonga.

Swara: maine kaha na do & wo ointment chin leti h.

Sanskaar: tum rahne do swara. Waise b aab yahan lux nhi h so tumhe ab kuch b pretend krne ki jrurt nhi h.

Swara kuch nhi bolti. Sanskaar insists.

Swara: ab tum mujhe bataoge ki mujhe kya krna h or kya nahi?? Yeh meri lyf h & agr mujhe tumhara koi b kaam krke acha lagta h to wo mein krungi haan ofcousre 6 mahine k liye hi sahi. Tum b to meri khushi hi chate ho na

Intense eyelock**

& haan or aaj tumhe couch pr sone ki jrurt nhi h. tumhe dikat hoti h & aaj chot k karan tumse couch pr soya b nhi jayega to tum bed pr so jao & me couch pr.

Sanskaar: tum couch pr nhi soagi. Me wahin thik ho.

Swra took d pillow & give angry look to sanskaar

Sanskaar: haan kya??? Me nhi sone doonga tumhe couch pr.bed se to girti rahti ho & couch pr se gir kr tumhe chot lg gayee to.

Swra: ormein tumhe couch pr nhi sone doongi. To fir ye jhagda suljhe kaise. Ek kaam krte h bed kaafi bada h & dono hi iss pr so jaate h. ab thik h.

Sanskaar shocked.

Swara: haan kya??? Chinta mat kro tumhe nhi giraongi bed se. & winked

Sanskaar smiles & go to bed & sleep. Swra thought all the incidents which was happened in porch area & then remember what sanskaar said not to pretend.

Swara monologue: janti hoon sanskaar tumhe bahut hurt kiya h & bus ab or ni. Ab me tumahri jindagi khooshiyoon se bhar doongi. Bahut pyar doongi tumhe. & places a feather touch kiss on sanskaar's fore head.

Next morning sanskaar was sleeping & swara brings tea for him.

Swara: sanskaar utho. Ab kaisa feel ho raha h?? lo tumhare liye chai layee hon. ab utho b jao.

Suddenly she saw her lipstick mark on his forehead than fatafat sanskaar k jagne se pahle hi wo towel se saaf kr deti h.

Sanskaar: kya krrahi ho swara???

Swara: kuch nhi. Wo tumahre mathe pr kuch lga hua tha bus wahi saaf kiya .

Sanskaar phone rings & he said to swara ki pls give the phone.

Swara phone deti h sanskaar ko & saw ki caller name is sweetheart. She shocked. Wo phone sanskaar ko de deti but kuch poochti nhi h.

Sanskaar also shocked to see the caller name & go to the balcony to receive the call

Sanskaar: hello sweet heart?? Kaisi ho??

Caller is a lady: I am fine. Mujhe tumse milna h. kahan mile???office

Sanskaar: nhi office nhi. Tum aisa kro tumhare pass mere ghar ki key hai na. hum wahin milte han & lunch b wahin krte h. okk se u then in afternoon.

Swara listen their talk secretly & think about the caller who is that sweetheart???

Precap : swara knows about the sweetheart & express her feelings to sanskaar

Edited by manisha.8148 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Wow..
Amazing update..
Jealous swara..
Loved it..!!
Will wait for ur next update..
Tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing
Finally she realized her feelings
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Plz update soonish... very eager to know who is this 'sweetheart'!!!!

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