SWASAN FF...UNCONDITIONAL LOVE OF SANSKAAR--FINAL PART (UPDATED) PG 5

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Hello friends this is an FF of three parts for swasan. It's all about what swara is feeling for sanskaar & how come she falling for sanskaar.

PART -1

Ragini ke truth revelation k baad swaragini upne maa baba k ghar me h. & swara is still want ki raglak ek ho jaayen & lakhshya ragini ko maaf krke accept kr le. But it's looking impossible but upni swara d mahaan swara "saari duniya ka bojh uthati h" J.

Ek din sanskaar usse milne aata h & sab family walon k samne swara ko divorce paper deta h. jise dekh kr swara shocked ho jaati h not because she feel something for sanskaar but isne itni jaldi divorce dene ka faisla kaise le liya abi ussi din to isne upna pyar ka confession kiya tha to ye kaise divorce dene k liye taiyaar h. (confused).

She checked the papers & sanskaar's sign on that. Sanskaar jaane lagta h & She said to sanskaar.

Swara: sanskaar ek min ruko. Mujhe tumse akele mein jaruri baat krni h.

Sanskaar: haan bolo & he follow the swara

In her room:

Swara: sanskaar me janti ho jo me kahne jaa rhi ho wo thoda tumhe weried lagega but u know na my family is my first priority. Agr me tumseek help aur mango to tum meri help kroge pls.

Sanskar: swara tum kaam bolo. Tumhe itni bhumika banana suit nhi krta.

Swara: pls kya hum iss divorce ko abi postpond kr sakte h wo actuaaly me chati ho ki raglak ko ek krne me tum meri help kro & iske liye hume MM me ek saath rahna hoga

Sanskaar shocked what the hell is she is saying. In the mean tym shomi bring tea for sanskaar & listen all their conversation.

Sanskaar: tum pagal ho gyee ho swra. Maana kit um bahut mahaan ho. Tumme bahut baddapan h sabko maaf krne ka.

Tum ache se janti ho ki how much I love u. & u don't love me. Me to upni zindagi se tumhe kbi b na jaane doon. But I committed you ki me kbi tum pr upna haq nhi jataonga & na hi tumhe kbi hasil krne ki kooshis krunga. & iss relationship ko nibhane ko b nhi kahunga. Ye divorce paper issi baat ka sabut h kime sirf or sirf tumhari khushi chata hoon. & tumhari khushi iss relationship ko khatam krne me to me bus wahi kr rha ho.

Mere pass b dil h jisme dard hota h jab tum mere pyar ki insult krti ho. Aur me nhi chata ki me iss dard ko roj roj jhelon me insaan hoon swraa but tumhare jitna mahaan nhi.

Pls swara mujhe maaf kr do me isme tumhari koi madad nhi kr sakta. Suddenly he hears swara's crying voice & bebus ho jata hai & asked her" sorry swara mujhe tumse ye sab nhi kahna chahiye tha pls don't cry pr tum hi batao maine kya galat kaha. Pls swara ab ki baar upne bare me socho. Ragini aur lakshya k rishte ko unko hi sudharne do pls.

Itne me shomi knocks the door & sanskaar take a leave from there.

Next day

Sanskaar calls swara ki humare divorce ki hearing Wednesday ki h so tum taiyaar rhna. I'll pik u.

In court room:

Judge : jaisa ki me dekh raha hoon ki tum dono ki shaadi ko abi ek hfta hi hua h & tum dono divorse chate ho. Pr kyo???

Swara: humari shaadi jabardasti hui thi. ek doosre ki pasand se nhi.

Judge to sanskaar: kya tumne iss pr shaadi k liye koi pressure daala tha.

Swara: nhi. Inhone kuch b nhi kiya wo halat hi aise ban gye ki hume na chate hue b shaadi krni padi.

Judge to swara: to fir ??? aisi kya baat hai??

Swra speechless.

Sanskaar: sir jaisa ye chahti hai waisa hi hone de aap.

Judge analyses both. & see there is a hope in this relationship. He said both

Dekho duniya me aisa koi law nhi h jo pati patni ko ek doosre se alag krta ho. But aap dono ki shaadi ko abi ek hafta hi hua & as per law divorse file krne k liye pati patni ka ek chat k nich 6 mahine rahna jruri h.

To me to aap dono se yahi kahunga ki aap 6 mahine ek saath rahe & uske baad b aapko lagta h ki aapko divorce chahiy. Then I'll sign & stamped the paper.

Sanskaar swara ko ghar chodne jaata h than shomi asked to sanskaar ki kya hua court me. & swraa sab bata deti h.

Sanskaar: acha maa me chalta hoo. Swara tum packing kr lenaa me evening me tumko leta hua jaonga.

Swara noded her head.

shomi asked to swara

shomi: kya soch tune shona??

swara (surprised): kis baare me maa

shomi: shona maine sab sun liya tha jo b sanskaar ne tujhe uss din kaha. ab beta faisla tujhe krna h ki tu kya chati h???

swra: me nhi janti maa but itna pata h ki mujhe sanskaar k saath nhi rahna h???

shomi: koi ek vaalid reason degi shona???

swara: maa me usse pyar nhi kkrti???

shomi: oho. to fir to mujhe batyegi pyar ki kya defination h teri najar me????

swara: maa me chati ho ki mera lyf partner ek aisa insaan ho jo mere har sukh-dukh me mera saath de. mere kuch kahne se pahle hi mere dil ki baat jaan le. jo mujh pr trust kare. sah galat ko samjhne ka uska ek upna vision ho. upni aissi koi baat mujhe pr thopne ki koshish na kare jo me nhi chati.

shomi: or kuch????

swara : or kya maa

shomi: nhi shona me is;iye pooch rhi ho ki jo qualities tune upne ideal husband k baare me sochi h wo sanskaar ko dekh kr sochi h ya tere dimag me pahle se hi thi.

coz jo jo qualitites tune boli h wo sab qualities sanskaar me h. dekh shona tune ye to bata diya ki tujhe upne husband se kya expectation h but kya tune kbi socha ki tere husband ko b tujse kuch expectation ho sakti h??

shona maine sanskaar ki aankhon me tere liya bahut pyar dekha h & tujhe khone ka dard b.

dekh beta kuch rishte bhagwan banata h & kuch rishte hum chunte h. tera or sanskaar ka rishta kuch aisa hi hai.

abi tere pass 6 mahine ka tym h. inn 6 mahino me sanskaar k saath rah kr tujhe b meri kahi hui baaton ka ehsaas ho jayega ki me kitna sahi kah rhi hoo.

tum upni packing kr lo. tumhe shaam ko sanskaar k saath jaana h.

beta jo b faisla lena ho ache se soch samjkr lena. iss baar maa baba ya raglak ko ek krne ke baare me sochte hue upna rishta mat badana. pls ek fair chance dena upne rishte ko.

friends pls give ur feedback if u lyk this i'll continue with second part.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful story
I wish same happen in serial
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it was nice...very well written.😊
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it was so awesome,very well written👏👏
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very well written !!
n concept is really very nice..
will wait for ur update..
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Originally posted by: Shikha022

very well written !!
n concept is really very nice..
will wait for ur update..
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Read both parts...
Awesome story...
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Part -2

At d evening sanskaar comes to gadodia house to take the swara. Swara was already waiting for sanskaar .

Sanskaar: chalen???

Swara noded her head. Both take blessings from their dada, dadi, maa & baba.

In d car. Dono hi khamosh they.

Fake marriage k dauraan sanskaar k saath bitaye plon ko swara yaad kr rhi thi.

About his confession, about maang filling & how she badly behave with him when ragini accuse her a nazayaz aulad of her baba. & ofcourse shaadi wale din sanskaar said ki kabhi mujh pr upna haq nhi jatayega & na hi hasil krne ki kbi koshis krega. Saari zindagi mera dost ban kr rahega wo b tb gr me chaon to.

& also thought about lux behavior was last evening ki kaise wo usse jabardasti car me bitha kr bridge pr le gya tha & kaise usse hurt kr raha tha kit um meri ho, meri hi rahogi. Bhai ko jo me bologna wo wahi krega. Wo tumhe asani se talak de dega & fir me or tum ek ho jayenge.

She compared both brothers behavior ki lux kitna matlabi h usse swra ki khushi ki bilkul b parwah nhi h bus usse to swara upna toy chahiye by hook or by crook.

& doosri taraf sanskaar h jo hr jagah , hr pal mere saath khada h kewal meri khushiyoon k liye. Uske liye upni khushi maayne nhi rakhti balki wo har samay yahi sochta rahta h ki aisa kya kro jisse ki meri hoothon pr smile bani rahe.

Suddenely sanskaar stopped the car. Swara looked at sanskaar.

Swara: kya hua sanskaar???

Sanskaar: swra ek baat clear krni h tumse. Agr if u doesn't mind.

Swra: haan bolo me sun rahi ho.

Sanskaar: dekho swara ye court ka procedure h ki before divorce 6 mahine ek chat k niche rahna jruri h. pr tum pr koi pressure nhi h kit um 6 mahine mere saath MM me bitao. Tum chaho to ye 6 mahine mama baba k paas rah kr bita sakti ho. Hum 6 mahine baad court me jhoot bol denge ki humne saath rah kr dekh liya but hum relation aage continue nhi kr sakte.

Swara looked sanskaar surprisingly .

Sanskaar: kya dekh rhi ho?? Yahi ki ye baat me subah b kah sakta tha. & agr yahi krna tha to tumhe lene kyon aaya???

Swara kuch nhi boli.

Sanskaar: tumse jhot nhi bologna. Kl jb judge ne 6 mahine saath rahne ki baat kahi tab me thoda swarthy ho gya tha & upne bare me sochne lga ki chalo kam se kam ye 6 mahine to mein upne pyar k saath rah sakta hon. But afternoon me office me socha ki ye galat h jab tum iss jabarasti k ristey me khush nhi ho to mujhe koi haq nhi banta kit um pr upni marji thopon. Me tumse pyar karta ho to iska ye matlab to nhi na kit um b mujhse pyar kro ya duniya walon k dabab me aakr iss rishtey ko accept kro. Mere liye tum or tumhari khushi importat h. & janta ho tum lakshya se pyar krti ho.

Swra interrupt sanskaar.

Swara: pls sanskaar ek request meri b h tumse ki mera naam lux k saath mat jodna kbi. Me lux se pyar krti thi, but ab wo mere liye ragini k pati k siva or kuch nhi h.so pls aaj kaha h aage kbi fir mat kahna.

& rahi baat 6 mahine saath rahne ki to jo law h usko to follow krna padega na.

Intense eyelock.

Sanskaar start d car & reached the MM.

After dinner in swasan room

Sanskaar took his pillow & couch pr baith gya upna laptop lekr & doing some office work.

Swara comes from washroom & see to sanskaar.

Sanskaar: good night swara.

Swra: good night.

Sanskaar doing his work on laptop & in bedroom light swara can't sleep. Sanskaar noticed & switched off the lights & went to study.

Swra looking all his activity & smiles ki isse kitni parwah h meri. Ab meri baari h ki me prove kru ki me b sanskaar ki parwah krti ho. Pr kyo??? She asked herself. Wo mera acha dost h.

Next morning.

Next morning jb swra jaagi to dekha sanskaar wahan nhi tha. Wo raat bhr room me nhi aaya "she thought.

Suddenly door open & sanskaar comes.

Swra looked sanskaar.

Sanskaar: kya??? Wo raat ko kaam krte krte der ho gye to study me so gya. Socha ab room me jaonga to tumhari nind b kharab hogi isliye. Aise look mt dikhaya kro yr.

Swra : tum naha lo. Me tumhre liya chai lekr aati ho.

Sanskaar: pls swara tumhe taqleef krne ki jrurt nhi h. shanti (maid) ko bol dena wo de jayegi.

Sanskaar goes wash room. & swra chai lekr aati h. & sanskaar k kapde, volet, hanky, etc sb bed pr lga deti .

Sanskaar saw all these & shocked pr kuch nhi bola. Sanskaar finish his tea & go to office.

Swara: breakfast to krke jao.

Sanskaar : aaj ek important meeting h to me office me hi kuch le loonga. Bye.

In evening sanskar comes home very late to avoid swara.

Wo actually sanskaar swara ko avoid krne ki koashis kr rha hai kyonki won n hi chata ki usse swara ki adat pade. Coz jab 6 mahine baad divorce ho jayega tb sabse jyada dard & taqleef usse hi hogi. Wo t swra se pyar krta h pr swara nhi pyar krti usse.

Yahi karan tha ki wo raat ko study me soya tha. When he reached house & saw swra waiting for him at dining table.

Swara : kitni der kr dee sanskaar?? Kab se wait kr rhi ho???

Sanskaar: wo thoda kaam jyada tha. Tumne dinner nhi kiya abi tk???

Swara: tumhra wait kr rhi thi. Ssocha saath me krenge.

They both have dinner together.

In d room

Sanskaar: swara pls tum aisa mat kro????

Swra: kya kiya maine???

Sanskaar: yahi jo tumne morning me kiya & ye dinner pr wait. Dekho ye sab 6 mahine k liye h fir tum upne raste & me upne raste. But tumhari inn baton se meri habits bigad jayengi & fir mere lye mushkil hoga upne aapko sambhalana.

Swara say nothing & goes to sleep

Precap: swara sanskaar ki diary dekhti & crying very badly to know his true feeling about her.

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Superb !!

Amazing update must say..
Update was sweet n simple..
Loved it..
N every single emotion was well written..
M curious abt ur next update..
Plz try update as soon as possible..
It's gonna be interesting !!
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Part 3

Today night sanskaar do his work in his bedroom in table lamp light. Wo nhi chata tha ki ghar ka koi member usse study me sota dekhe nhi to 100 sawal khade ho jayenge & he also avoid this situation.

In morning

He saw swara is still sleeping. He admire his beauty (in bg song plays "tum bin jaon kahan ki duniya me aakr kuch na fir chaha kbi tumko chah ke)

After having bath sanskaar comes to room & swara was still sleeping. Sanskaar checked the tym. 8 baj gaye hai. & swara abi tak nhi jaagi: he thought.

Wo swara k pass gya

Sanskaar: swara ...swara utho 8 baj gaye. Kya baat h?? aaj itni der tak so rahi ho??

No response from swara. Wo pareshan ho jata h. he touched his forehead & see ki usse fever h.

After feeling sanskaar touch swara wake up.

Sanskaar: tumhe to bukhar h swara.

Swara : haan wo raat ko AC ke karan bahut thand lg rahi thi & remote tumare pillow k niche tha so AC off nhi kr saki.

Sanskaar: kamal krti ho. Remote mere pillow k niche tha to tum wahan se nikal to sakti thi na. ya mujhe hi jaga deti me band kr deta AC.

Swara: tum bahut gahri nind me the & mujhe lga ki tumhari nind nhi kharab krni chaiye.

Sanskaar: look swara aage se meri nind kharab hoti h ya nhi, me kis baat se pareshan hota hoon ki nahi..ye sab sochna tumhara kaam nhi h. ek baat yaad rakho ki mujhe tumse kbi b koi b pareshani nhi ho sakti. Okkk.

Ab tum aaram kro. Me tumhare liye medicine & breakfast lekr aata hoon. She noded her head.

Medicine dene & breakfast krane k baad swara said to sanskaar.

Swara : sanskaar pls ye sab mat kiya kro??

Sanskaar looked surprisingly "what???"

Swara : ye dekhbhaal & all. Waise b ye sab 6 mahine ki baat h.

Sanskaar: mera dialogue mujhe maarne ki jrurat nhi h swara. Me tumse pyar krta hoon, Tum mujhse nhi & janta hoon yahan se jaane k baad tumhe fark nhi padega but mere liye ye choti choti memories hi poori lyf jeeene ka jariya hongi.

Swra monologue: fark padega sanskaar.

Sanskaar : kuch kaha tumne???

Swra : nhi.

Sanskaar: acha tm rest kro me yahi hoon. Kisi cheez ki jrurt ho to mujhe bata dena. & tum bed se bilkul b nhi uthogi. Okk

Swra lyk obedient child noded her head & sleep. After few hours swara wake up & see sanskaar was not there. Wo bed se niche uttar kr balcony me aati h thodi thandi hawa k liye. Itne me sanskaar room me aata h & see the swara in balcony.

Sanskaar : tumhe bistar se uthne ko mana kyat ha na fir??

Swara: wo thodi der k liye thandi hawa me aana chati thi.

Sanskaar : yelo coffee lene gya tha. U feel better.

Both drink coffee together. Tabhi sanskaar k phone ki ring bajti h & someone calling him for an important meeting & he tries to avoid meeting that day because of swara illness. But swara insist to go.

Swara said: I am fine. Tum jao. Waise b ek ghante ki to baat h.tum pls upna kaam krke aa jao.

Sanskaar: sure. Swara say: yes, sanskaar: thik h me ek ghante me aa jaonga tum upna dhyan rakhna.

Sanskaar left the room. Swara feeling bore. & she saw ki sanskaar upna laptop ghar pr hi chod gya h & it's still on.

Wo sanskaar ka laptop shut down krne lgi ki achanak upne naam ka folder dekh kr shocked ho gayee.

She thought " mere naam ka folder. Ye sanskaar ne mere naam ka folder kyon bana rakha??? Kya hoga isme??? Let me chk. But swra aise kisi ka laptop chk krna bad manners. She fought with herself.

Kisi ka laptop nhi h ye mere pati ka laptop h & I have full right to chk this after all mere naam ka folder h.

Kaafi kashmakash k baad wo folder open krti h & saw her wedding pics where sanskaar fills her maang & wore the mangalsutra.

There is a word document by the name "My Angel-swara". She opens that doc & after reading that she crying badly. & thought oho god kya itna pyar koi kisi ko kr sakta h. wo b bina kisi umeed ke.

Wo document kuch iss tarah se tha: "swara my angel, my love, meri poori duniya. Swara is a pure heart girl. Maine uske saath bahut bura kiya. Meri dushmani lux k saath thi & maine upne revenge k chalet ek itni achi, jindadil ladki ki lyf spoil kr dee. Upne badle me mein itna andha ho gya tha ki mjhe ye hi dikha ki mein ek masoom ki jindagi kharab kr raha ho.

Mujhe ye kaafi der baad realize hu jab sab kuch haath se nikl chukka tha. She such a great heart lady . maine uske saath kitna galat kiya fir b usne mujhe koi saja diye bina hi maaf kr diya. Uska hamesha doosron ki khushiyoon k bare me sochna hi usse sabse alag banata h. jb tk humne fake marriage ka natak nhi kiya tha tab tk hum dono me koi rishta nhi tha. Pr jb wo meri fake wife bankr mere ghr me aayeetb usse janne ka moka mila & uski saadgi & bholepan me me kab upna dil haar baitha pata hi nhi chla. Jab jab wo pass hoti h ek hawa k taaze jhonke ka ehsaas dilate h. kavita k jaane k baad main ek jinda laash ban gyaa tha jisme usne fi se jaan daal dee.

Maine shayad upne pyar ka izhaar bahut jaldi kr diya mujhe usse sambhalne ka tym dena chahiye tha. Usne b upne pahle pyar ko khoya tha. Jb ragini ne forcefully humari shaadi krayee thi tb maine dekha tha ki wo bilkul b raaji nhi thi &me chata tha ki uski iss wish ko poora kru but ragini ne maa ko upne kabje me kr rakha tha & mein chahkr b mana nhi kr saka. & mujhe b majboori me shaadi krni padi. swara sochti ha ki me to aisa hi chata tha. Fir mujhe kya problem hogi.

Haan ye sach hai ki me shaadi krna chata tha swara se pr kisi majboori k chalt nhi. Jb wo raaji hoti. Main pahle upne payar ka bharosa usse dilana chahta tha. But sab gadbad ho gya ragini k ekiss kadam se.

Pr ab shayad aisa kbi nhi ho payega. Wo divorce chati h & main uski khushi k liye usse divorce b de doonga. But ek baat to fore sure h ki ab koi b swara ki jagah meri jindagi me nhi le sakta. Meri aakhri saanson tk me usse upna pyar nibhonga bhale hi wo mere saath na rahe. Wo ek aisee angel h jisne jindagi dekhne ka mera najaria hi poora badal diya h. ki har cheez me achai dekhne ki koshish kro.

Jb judge ne 6 mahine saath rahne ko bola that b maine uske face pr pareshani dekhi thi ki saath rahne ka judgement sunkr wo kitna pareshan ho gayee thi .

Swara meri jaan maine socha tha ki mein inn 6 mahino me tumhe itna pareshan krunga ki tum kbi b mujhe sapne me b yaad nhi krogi. Pr shayad upne pyar k chalet mein nhi kr paa raha ho. Jb tumse harsh tareeke se baat krta ho to bahut bura lgata h. pata nhi kaise jiyoonga tumhare bina. Pls meri jindagi se mat jao. Mujhe jindagi jeena sikhakr wapis se jinda laash bana kr mat jao.

Tumse waada kiya h ki kbi upna haq nhi jataonga & na hi kbi hasil krne ki koshish krunga. Tum jahan b raho, jis kisi k saath b upni lyf spend kro khush raho.

But saansen thamne lagti h jab b tumhare bina jindagi jeene ki sochta hon. abi jb tum upne maa baba k ghr gayee thi tb bahut khalipan ho gya tha iss room me.

Me tumhe jaane se rokunga nhi jaan...bus jaane se pahle koi aisa tareeka b bata jana ki tumare bina kaise jiyoonga...(jiyeen to jiyen kaise bin aapke)

I love u swara...luv u sooo much.

Precap: sanskaar received a call from sweetheart & swra gets jealous.

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