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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved their fight like talks. Awesome. Pls do write more😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: --Anna--

Loved it Medha. Been a big fan of your writing from Day one. Following most of them silently but love love love them.

I loved this beautiful idea of SwaSan on a date. They so need to go on one right? 😉

Waiting to read more. Keep writing. 😊


Oh thanks anna. i just read that outburst wala os of urs yeterday..and really liked it as well.

I write for myself...so anybody reading it is welcome...silent or not.😳
swasan ki date. Needed. Period.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

Medhaaa this is so adorbz huny!! Thank u for writing this... My brain was going in some weird loops tonight and this kinda rooted me! Simple yet close to heart... Just what I needed...Perfect!


thanks Nik!

and of course we chatted about the weird loops last night.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful piece of writing Medha🤗
This was so cute❤️ SwaSan on a date ohmygod
Keep writing more and more 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Arrr!! This is so darned cute!!!! I am so happy I read this before crashing as I can sleep happy, thinking of these adorable 2 on a date! And Swara was cute too but Sanskaar ❤️

Thanks for making the night better M 🤗


Shruti🤗
Okay ..Bang goes the belan on your head.😡

and as for ur reply, glad you liked it...
and the blazer scene totally got me going for this.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Sigh...😳. Medha...you know what they say, na, that "normal" is the most underrated thing in a happy life of togetherness? I mean "normal" in the loveliest sense---a day spent in companionable togetherness with your special other, without incessant tension and drama. 😊

You captured that slice of "normality" so beautifully in this gem of a piece. To go straight from "Unspoken" to this one, hats off to you! What a range! 👏

My favorite part had to be this: ""
"So, what have you discovered about mine?" Sanskaar sent a scorching look at her. "Hmm. There is certainly a big connection between your flirtatious glares..and my weak knees. ....And of course, they speak volumes...and I am honoured to be able to read them." Swara smiled""""

😳

Can you try writing a sequel to this, detailing exactly how they made up for this little bickering episode? 😳


Hey Viji...
Yup..we and swasan desperately need normal. glad u liked it. it means my os has the seal of approval from a good storyteller. i am at peace.😳

As for my range...its only my overimaginative mind coupled with swasan fever.😆

I dunno about a sequel..I toh write what comes to me. u are the one who researches and tells stories...nd amazes me with the total effort.😳

if the sequel comes to me...stop me if u can.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Nice one medha

Loved it
Thanks for the pm


thanks sonal..and anytime.😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: mamta99

lovely os, omg it was so cute, loved it a lot😳


thanks mamta😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: harshsriti

oh.. very sweet.. they fight like 2 kids . Lol..


thanks jwala...cute right?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: Sparkler8

Cute sweet sugary crisp!! Medha I think I am going to dream this sequence in my sleep..


thanks sharon...
I awanted to dream of it...so i wrote it.😆.

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