SwaSan Oneshot: on a date

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"Why are you flirting with that waitress?"

"I am flirting with the..? Dear Lord!"

"Whenever she passes our damn table, she sends a coy look at you...and smiles. Why? Her teeth are yellow👎🏼." Swara snapped.

"Well, that could be, maybe she thinks, I am hot." Sanskaar suggested wickedly." Maybe its time someone else thought that too. For instance, you?"

"I think you are hot. Obviously. But every pretty girl you meet should not nah? Its annoying."

"Well, I could put on my shades if you want. Go incognito.😎 That work?"

"Not really, women love men who wear shades hiding their eyes. And immediately set to work, trying to uncover what sort of eyes they do have." Swara fumed.

"So, what have you discovered about mine?" Sanskaar sent a scorching look at her.

"Hmm. There is certainly a big connection between your flirtatious glares..and my weak knees. I love it, when they go all dreamy looking at me, like I'm the woman you would want, even if I was from Mars; I feel assured, when they go protective about me...and I feel happy when they are near me, miss them as hell, when they are away.And of course, they speak volumes...and I am honoured to be able to read them." Swara smiled.❤️

"Apt summary. As for your eyes...I want to die watching them if I can"

"That will not happen.😲

"Why, you leaving me?"😲

"No. I want to die before you. I certainly intend not to live longer than you, without you. Can't cope sorry."

"Cheerful conversation for a date, huh? Who will die first?"

"No, it is not. But considering you brought your wife out on a date...its my way of saying..I cannot live without you"

"Me neither Swara. So declare it a draw. And now, if we don't go home...they are going to push us out. Its past twelve."

"Well, okay..can I drive?" Swara stretched her hand for the keys.

"The keys?..I thought, you put them in your purse."

"No. You slipped them in your jacket pocket. Check"

"No, swara, you drove us here...and kept them."

"Did not. You took them"

"No."

"Yes."

Glaring at each other...they both got up..and of course, the keys had been locked in the car.😕

Bickering, sanskaar and Swara set off to the nearest pump station..to see if they get a mechanic to open the car so that they can go home together...

and of course then make up for the fight...😉

Edited by medhasankar - 9 years ago


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Sakura24 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG Medha!!! How did you even imagine that??? It was pure cute, I love it. Wish SwaSan had this kind of cool problems in their lives. It is awesome piece of writing!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely Medha !!!!
Loved swasan 😳
Do write more 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww.. really do want to see this scene...
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Originally posted by: Sakura24

OMG Medha!!! How did you even imagine that??? It was pure cute, I love it. Wish SwaSan had this kind of cool problems in their lives. It is awesome piece of writing!!


thanks sakura😃 inspired by mom and dad..they regularly lock keys in the car😆
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Originally posted by: Annei123

Lovely Medha !!!!

Loved swasan 😳
Do write more 😃


thanks anne
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and of course then make up for the fight...😉
Hayye☺️ 😆
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Ah! This is mush at it's best. I can totally have a good night sleep after reading this 😳

How is it that you write the most intense stuff in the most quirky, funny manner possible? Like this was SO mushy & lighthearted & yet such deep stuff <3 Swara describing his eyes & then saying she wants to die before him cos she can't imagine living without him, I could totally imagine a speechless gawking Sanskaar who'll try kissing her then & there irrespective of where they are 😆 WOW Medha ⭐️

Oh I so wanna see the green eyed monster erupt outta Swara in the show too *sighs* 😳 The last bit about them making up after the fight teehee 😳 *giggles like a teen* Perfect end

Wonderfully short & cute. Love your quirky writing 🤗
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Originally posted by: a_uma

awww.. really do want to see this scene...


thanks uma.😛 and me too.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bickering SwaSan on a romantic date...
Gosh! I'm smiling all the way...👏

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