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mistofshadows

@mistofshadows

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#51

And the dice rolls.

The situations are so eerily similar. Loved it.

My most fav thing is that Lakshya is Swara's brother. That thing made my day.

Can I badger u for a pm for ur next update?

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_InDreamWorld_

@_InDreamWorld_

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Awesome
Unique story 👏

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Aiman

@princess_tara

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#53

superb updat
love it alot
next time do pm me plz

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medha

@ToujoursPur

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#54

very well written sharon. Logical progression.

I'm going to have to get used to calling you sharon now...instead of bg. aadat baith gaya tha. : (

anyway...nice...because, lucky is spoilt, but certainly not an idiot...and swara and sanky seem kind of the same personality type.

well...seen the smoke...now where's the fire? ; P

continue soon, yeah?

love---

Medha.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: harshsriti
swara and sanskar are very strict and strong personalities. I wonder how they will unite? ragya union also seems to be impossible due to swasan. both swasan are 2 side of same coin. I think ego rules here. this is a powerful concept dear.. I really loved to see both swara and sanskar are such a strong personalities. and they are self made.. I'm very happy that you make swara as a powerful business women. this update was fantastic. .. loved it.. poor raglak. hope swasan will not make their life miserable. swasan love hate saga is waiting for us na? .. continue soon... thank you for this awesome update...

As they say, when you get scarred, you hit the other side of ypur personality spectrum. For me as writer, these 4 characters on a scale. How each situation shoots them to the other extreme of their personality and then how they all reach the neutral point is what the story is all about.

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful
Another sharp update dearie! I can just imagine the analytics running in both their minds... Cool, calculated and composed. 😎
And about my previous tashan-e-ishq comment, hehe no dearie that wasn't a reference to the Zee show.Guess they brought a show in that name and took over the meaning of that word! 😆 I just meant that I'm guessing there would be some interesting ideological clashes between the 2 strong headed ppl. :)

And Thnks for PM! 😳

PS: Did I mention that I LOVED the title??! 👏

Cool, calculated, composed.. ❤️ such apt words for this chapter.

Well in that sense yes this is tashan-e-ishq😛😆

You are talking about the title only now.. I took the title as inspiration to build the characters.😃

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: Miracle_sweet
Loved it!

I can't wait for swara and sanskaar to come amne saamne! (Fireworks are sure to ensue)
They are so simmilar i can't even...

You stories always get me hooked!

Aur sach mein, Swasan se itne pyaar hai ke Swalak ko bhai behen ke roop mein kuch ageeb nahi laga 😆

Mihika

Thank you😊

Aur sach mein, Swasan se itne pyaar hai ke Swalak ko bhai behen ke roop mein kuch ageeb nahi laga 🤣