New SwaSan SS Inkaar Part 2 on pg 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Disclaimer

All the characters are a work of fiction. Don't be over possessive for any Character or Bash them. All the characters present is a necessary need. As some member want to read something on Sanskaar and Ragini, here I am giving a strong Bond between them. Any harsh comment will make the writer stop the story right at the moment.



Prologue

Swara's P.O.V

Shaadi? Shaadi ko le kar mera b wahi sapna hai, jo har ladki ka hota hai.sitaaron se saji raat main, chamchamate ghode par aayega aur phulon se saji gaadi par le kar jayega, mere sapno ka Rajkumar!

Marriage? I have the same dream to get married that every girl has. Adorned with stars at night, gleaming horses will come and take over the car decorated with flowers, Prince of my dreams!

Sanskaar's P.O.V

Shaadi? Bakwass! Mere life me shaadi nam k chiz ki koi jagah nahi. 20 me shaadi, aur 22 me bacche! Ye b koi life hai??? zindagi jine k liye hoti hai, barbaad karne k liye nahi!

Marriage? Rubbish! marriage has no place in my life. Married at 20, and 22 children! i Is this a Life??? Life is for living, not for a waste!

Do insaan, do alag soch, lekin dono bandhe hai ek hi dor se.

Shaadi par bharosha kar k bhi kyun hai Swara ko Shaadi se inkaar?

Pyar ho kar bhi, kyun hai Sanskaar ko Pyar se Inkaaar???


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character Sketch

Laksh Maheswari

Sanskaar's cousin. He is married. He is a businessman and loves his wife and family very much. Being busy, he takes out time any how to spend with his family which he accepts as a duty.

Ragini Maheswari

Laksh's wife. She is the dearest of Sanskaar. She too loves him as a best friend. She is a perfect DIL as well as wife. She never regrets anything. She has a sister who she love same as Sanskaar.

Sanskaar Maheswari

He is the dearest of all. His parents died when he was very little. Perhaps it's the reason why he gets more love than anyone else from his family. He hates everyone in his family beSanskaare Ragini is the only one after Laksh who he can believe to share his secretes. Trusts love but refuse to accept it.

Swara Garodia

She is a sweet bubbly girl. She is the younger sister of Ragini. Loves her more than her life. Darling of all. She always wants to get a life partner just like her sis' hubby Laksh, Gentle and Responsible. She can do anything for her Sister and family. She also wants her in laws to be like the Maheswari's. She loves but refuse to marry.

All other characters will be introduced in the story.

Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

Maheswari Mansion getting decorated. Laksh comes.

Laksh: Bhai k aane se pehle sab ho jana chahiye.

Ragini: Aap bilkul tension mat lijiye, sab ho jayega.

Laksh: tumhare hote hue mujhe tension lene ki zaroorat b nhi hai.

Both share a smile and Laksh leaves while Ragini get busy in the arrangement.

Evening

Laksh: Kahan reh gaya yeh...

All hears "Main aa gaya"

"Sanskaar!"

Everyone exclaimes happily. But he ignores everyone and just greets Laksh and Ragini.

Dinning table

Laksh: God Sanskaar, We missed u!

Sanskaar: I missed u too. By the Lucky, tu Ragini ko zyada paresaan nahi karta na?

Lucky: ah.. thoda thoda... !

Sanskaar: I will kill you!!!

Ragini: sanskaar, wo hame paresaan nahi karte, app khana khayiye.

She feeds him too and all laughs.

Market

Sanskaar was wandering in the market and felt something on his back. He turns and finds someone throwing stones on him. He looks here and there and finds another stone on him. He goes to the direction and finds a girl trying to break some pots with stones. Her tongue was little out of the mouth and one eye closed, aiming at the pot. She throws it.

Girl: damn!

Sanskaar smiles and goes to her.

Sanskaar: "Swara!"

She gets up and looks at him opening her mouth and widening her eyes.

Sanskaar: close it warna macchhar ghus jayega.

She closes and looks down.

Sanskaar: koi nahi keh sakta k tum Londan se graduate ho!

She keeps quiet.

Sanskaar: are you so scared of me?

Swara: ah... you are senior...!

Sanskaar: correction, I was! Now we are not at college. So we are friends right?

Swara: friends?? (Smiles) right!

Someone calls "Swara"...

Swara: coming! Ok Sanskaari, see you later. Bye!

She leaves.

Sanskaar: mad girl! Tum kab samjhogi Swara?? Kab? K main tumhare liye kya feel karta hun, how I think for you, why I care for you... my studies were over, but still I stayed in London for 1 more year, do u know why? For you... to see you, to listen you, to love you... always! I love you Swara..., I love you!!!

To be continued...


Love,

Shirisha😊


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Edited by ShirishaTeddy - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved this also... plz pm me..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start. I wonder why Sanskar hates his family though. Glad to see ragini as a nice person for a change. The bond between SanGini and SanLak is nice. Awe my SwaSan!!! ❤️ So Sanskar is already in love with Swara. Wow! Looking forward to see Swara falling head over heels for him.
Continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely SS
will definitely waiting for next update

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic
Please pm me and accept as it buddy
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice starting. .cont soon. . nd plz do pm mr
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Really a nice start sha. Intro is super. So both have different thoughts and gng to fall for eachother. First part really awesome. So sanskar hates everyone except raglak. Really he has feelings for swara😳. Oh at university he s senior to her😉. So she is scared of him.Hope soon our swara will realise his feelings and he too will confess his feelings. Pls continue soon and pls pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2

Swara's home

Swara enters and finds a priest sitting.

Swara: kya ho raha hai maa?

Ma: Swara, panditji kundli teri kundli dekhne aye hain.

Swara: really? Ok. Main b dekhti hun, what's written in my destiny!

Pandit: Tumhe apni khushiyon k liye, ladhna hoga beta.

Ma: aap kehna kya chahte hain panditji?

Maheswari house

Sanskaar comes,

Annapurna: sanskaar, come. I have some photos. Dekho tumhe kaun pasand hai.

Sanskaar: Aaplog yeh baat samjhte kyun nahi hain, mujhe shaadi nahi karni!

Annapurna: Yeh kkya baat hui sanskaar? Kabhi na kabhi toh Shaadi karni hi hai na, toh aaj kyun nahi?

Sanskaar: Main Shaadi nahi karunga!

Durga Prasad: Tumhari baat maan kar humne laksh ki shaadi pehle kara di, ab tumhari baari. Yeh hamara Aakhri faisla hai.

Sanskaar: Main Shaadi nahi karunga, aur yeh mera aakhri faisla hai..

He left the place and RagLak followed. Sanskaar entered his room and sat on bed keeping his hand on his face. He felt something on his shoulder. He saw Laksh and Ragini standing.

Sanskaar: Laksh, Ragini...

Laksh: tujhe kuch kehne ki zaroorat nahi hai bhai.

Sanskaar: mene kuch galat kiya kya laksh?

Laksh: nahi bhai, tu apne jagah par bilkul thik hai. Par tu kisise pyaar b toh karta hai na?

Sanskaar: han karta hun, aur hamesha karta rahunga. Par main use shaadi nahi kar sakta. Tumlog jante ho yeh baat.

Laksh: Aur agar wo tujhse shaadi karne ko taiyaar ho jaye toh?

Sanskaar: Lucky, maine aaj tak har ladki k saamne aisi condition rakhi hai na, use swara kya, koi b mujhse shaadi karne ko Haan nahi kahegi. Aur main toh yeh b nahi janta k wo mujhse pyar karti b hai ya nahi.

Ragini: Sanskaar Swara hamari behen hai, hum use bahut ache se jante hain, aap ek baar use apne dil ki baat batakar toh dekhiye.

Sanskaar: ki zarurat hai hi nahi ragini, jab shaadi ka koi sawal hai hi nahi, toh pyar ka izhaar kar k kya fayeda?

Ragini: Jaisa apko thik lage.

Night

Sanskaar was thinking what happened all day. But he didn't know when he fell asleep and started dreaming.

SANSKAAR WAS FINDING SWARA HERE AND THERE AND STARTS SINGING:

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya

tumhe, nag mein sagaya tumhe

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

SWARA WAS WATCHING THIS HIDING BEHIND A TREE... LISTENING THE SONG SHE COMES OUT AND STARTS SINGING:

tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

Sapne teri chahaton ke, sapne teri chahaton ke

Dekhti hoon ab kayee

Din hai sona aur chaandi raat ban gayi

Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

WITH THIS SANSKAAR HELDS HER HAND AND MAKE HER TWILL AROUND N EMBRACES HER FROM BEHIND N BOTH STARTS WAVING THEIR BODY IN THE SAME FLOW.THEN SANSKAAR UN HOLDS HER MAKES HER FACE HIM...SWARA STARTS BLUSHING AND TRIED 2 GO AWAY BUT SANSKAAR DOES NOT LET HER DO SO...

Chahaton ka mazaa, faasalon mein nahin

Aa chupa loon tumhe hauslon mein kahin

Sab se upar likha, hai tere naam ko

Khwaishon se jude silsilon mein kahin

WITH THIS HE CLOSES HER EYES WITH HIS HANDS...WHEN SWARA OPENS HER EYES... SANSKAAR WAS NOT THERE.WORRIEDLY SHE STARTS FINDING HIM HERE N THERE.

Khwaishein milne ki tumse, khwaishein milne ki tumse

Roz hoti hai nayi

Mere dil ki jeet meri maat ban gayi

Hoo tum jo aaye zindagi mein baat ban gayi

THEN SANSKAAR COMES OUT FROM THE BEHIND OF A TREE AND KEEPS HIS HAND ON SWARA'S SHOULDER...FEELING HAPPY SWARA HUGS HIM TIGHTLY AS IF SHE SAYS NOT 2 GO AGAIN.

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, rab ne milaya tumhe, honthon pe sajaya tumhe ,nag mein sagaya tumhe

Paaya maine, paaya tumhe, sab se chupaya tumhe, sapna banaya tumhe, neendhon mein bulaya tumhe

BUT SUDDENLY SANSKAAR REALISED THAT SWARA IS MOVING AWAY FROM HIM WITH TEARS IN HER EYES. AND SOON SHE VANISHED SOMEWHERE.

HE WAS NOW OUT OF HIS DREAM. HE COULDN'T BELIEVE WHAT HE JUST SAW. BUT HE WAS RELAXED REALISING IT A DREAM and tried to sleep again.

Next Morning

Swara is waiting in the bus stop. Sanskaar comes.

Sanskaar: Hey Swara.

Swara: Hey! Tum yahan...

Sanskaar: tum kahin jaa rahi ho? Main drop kar dun?

Swara: Ah...

Sanskaar: Come on...

He gets out of the car. Swara moves forward her heal bend and she was about to fall, Sanskaar caught her in his arms before she fall. He looked her face, her eyes were closed. But something was there that was very cute. She was holding his shirt so tightly that it was going to tear. She opened her eyes and loosened his shirt. He wished not to leave her anymore, but it was the situation's demand. Bull Shit! He left her, made her stand straight. All the eyes around were upon them only. He didn't want to create a scene. He hoped the time to repeat again.

To be continued...

Love,

Shirisha😊

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