Despatches Series Part 4-OS - Letter from Sanskaar to Ram Prasad

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Sakura24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

I seriously need to give you a hug!!

Wow, it was so touching, I'm sure RP might cry if he ever reads this one. And Sanskar, he knows everyone around him to perfection, he understands them so well, only if the favor was returned too. I'm glad he feels all this for his silent father... It was a superb piece of writing!! Keep it up!!

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nimmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Tootiefrootie ...
( i commented once before that your UN reminds of those sweet little cherries and i start craving sweets. your first dispatch i guess.such a cute UN. oh i digress).

OK spit it out now.. you are the writer of Sanskaar Maheswari right!
Rashmi sharma doesn't have it in her neither does her crew to create something so magnificent.

it's gotta be you.😆..
you read him so damn well.
its unbelievable.

so bolo bolo! tell tell!

on serious note.. Fabulous series.!
so effing real from Sankaar's perspective
Kudos!⭐️

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nimmi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

and i absolutely, truly love reading the comments here..
❤️..

so deep and thoughtful and articulate..

you all are really amazing ladies!
all of you!

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Zaalima_5

@Zaalima_5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#14

wow brilliant work once again...👏

literally i cried after reading this letter..😭

loved it...😊

waiting for ur next letter..😳 *hope next one is to ragini...😛*

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Thank you lovely people for your replies to date! Individual responses will be coming up as soon as I can manage a break from work:) And lots asking about a letter to Ragini?! Wasn't the plan but I'll see what o can do 😉

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Smilelicious

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Posted: 9 years ago

#16

'But you Dad- thatreallyrankled. You see, I always sensed somehow that you were capable of so much more, you could have outshone Bade Papa if you had wanted to, but you threw in the towel long ago and never had any desire to ever re-enter the ring to fight again.'
This line was perfect in every sense Shruti 👏
I've always felt that RP doesn't open up too much or doesn't take a stand. He is always there behing DP, agreeing with him. I don't say this is not correct, but he should take his own stand.
I can guess that 5 years ago when DP decided to broke every relationship with Sanskar due to Swara, RP agreed with him and didn't take a proper stand for his son 😒
I want to see a different RP.
Coming to your letter, it was perfectly written, especially that line that i've quoted. It was so on point👏
I'm really looking forward to read the letter he (and you obviously) will write to Swara.

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Purbi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#17

WOW! I just luved it.. Ram is surely a very strange character of the show.. You depicted it very beautifully via Sanskaar. "Sanskaar Maheswari- the son of an entirely unremarkable father and a silly mother" this is so true..lol.. I also thought the same thing about them.. Loved the call of the blood portion and the rest part is also brilliant.. KEEP WRITING.. WAITING FOR NEXT TWO..

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Kudos to that imagination of yours! Who would have thought just some sentences in a letter from a son his father could make you see the otherwise unbefitting father in a completely different light?

This post speaks so much about the little boy and how he came to be Sanskaar.

They are the scions of Durga Prasad and Annapurna Maheshwari, two names that are almost legend in their own unique ways in our community. Their parents deeds shine so bright, the sons can bask in that reflected glory very comfortably and never fear being found to be judged inadequate.

Though these lines portray the deep rooted, ever existing feelings of constant comparison and "never being good enough" that Sanskaar grew up with,

I'm glad that it happened. It might make me seem a sadist and twisted. But I really am. I'm happy that Sanskaar was Suju and RP's son and not AP and DP's. It's true when they say, experience and people mould a man.

That challenge is reserved for Sanskaar Maheshwari- the son of an entirely unremarkable father and a silly mother. Sorry Dad- but you do know that this is what everyone thinks about our immediate family unit. But they won't anymore, I have seen to that. ( OMG! How I love this man!❤️)

Sanskaar would never be Sanskaar, if it weren't for this past of his.( Another Adarsh or worse another Lakshya? The very thought makes me wanna barf🤢) *shudders*

Another fantastic one from you Shruthi. You guys really are making me almost want to try my hand at writing. Keyword being almost😆( I don't have the nerves or as much talent I'm afraid)

Now before I end my babble, my favorite line of the letter -

Your son in more ways than anyone knows,

Sanskaar

I think it clearly sums the entire letter up.( It actually made me curious. I have this bad habit of always getting to the last line of the post before I start reading the whole thing. I know weird 😆)

Having read this, I seriously cannot ignore RP in the show now. I will always imagine him being B&W Sanskaar. Okay.. maybe not!🤢 😆 But I will always remember him as "the Ram before Laxman was born".

I really hope that RP's character in the serial would by some miracle have a back story similar, if not as monumental as this one is. I really don't understand what that actor is paid for😕. He literally does nothing.😆

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tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: asexualflower
Hey tootiefrootie11,
I just wanted to say I love your works, especially this despatches series. I love your writing style and all the insight you put into your work. I normally just read peoples os/ts/ss's and just like them (because I'm too lazy to comment). But I had to comment on yours. Of course to appreciate your work on this series, but also to request you to write a letter to Ragini as well. In this letter you wrote that Sanskaar will also write to Swara and DP before 'taking off for a while.' I'm excited to read those too! But I personally think you should also write one to Ragini. Sangini used to be such good friends before, and in despatches 1, Sanskaar also mentioned her and discussed their friendship. And for that reason I think it'd be really nice to read a letter from Sanskaar to Ragini. Of course you don't have to if you don't want to. I just loved your series and really wanted to have a letter addressed to Ragini from Sanskaar's POV in your words as well. Once again it's totally fine if you don't. 😊 Thanks for writing these great OS's. Even though I don't say it, I truly enjoy reading them. 😛😃

Hey! Wow- am so thrilled with your lovely comments! You actually made a special exception to comment on mine? 🤗 Thank you so much! Oh, you too want a letter to Ragini too? She wasn't on my list but it seems lots of people want this so I am going to have to think on this- I have some ideas I am mulling over. I started this series without a fixed idea except to write a rant to Lux and it has now morphed to this 😆. But seriously, you all are my total motivation and keep me going! Please do keep commenting and interacting with us! What's your name btw? I'm Shruti or Shru/ Shruts, whatever you prefer 😳

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: swa291
Well while reading this i thought that if am not wrong in RS saathiya the heros father is also a mute spectater ..
Well you brought out a side to ram which may justify or atleast make us understand why he may be so..

Even now am afraid that he or ap might turn a big villian later on

And you were fab dear. Keep writing

Thank you! Oh, really re SNS? That show is so bad IMO I don't even remember who the father is...oh wait, i do, i do!!! But of course they have that Koki na? So poor father can never talk 😆. Am glad you liked this one!

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