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Hello everyone.
Many of us post on Swasan and most of u all r gr8 writers.
Well m not at all a writer and so never posted any OS, SS etc.
But today m finally posting a POV of Ragini.
Not that m a Ragini supporter but just thought to post this.
Sorry if i bore u as i already mentioned m no writer. So here it goes-
So this was it! Finally the moment had arrived. Her truth was out. Lakshya came
to know everything.. Ragini sighed. But the sigh wasn't of relief. Relief? The mere
word bought shudders to her.
Here, she was sitting in the car of her husband, the man
who she loves till infinity but never got a pinch of it in return.Yes, He is the one for
whom her heart beats, whose name is inscripted on each and every breath of hers. And
today,he has sworn to bring her truth out and to leave her forever.. Again those
goosebumps, again that mighty sorrow engulfing her, again that endless stream of
tears which were flowing down her hot and now ugly, ashamed face, which had the
grief of separation as large as that of a wide, profound ocean.
Here she was sitting in the car, windows open. Now even the nature was teasing her.
Actually cursing her. That cool wind of the night was lashing at her with a force
again and again reminding of the dread to come. Each passing second was exhibiting
the proximity between her and her 'ghost'. Time.. It was becoming her enemy now. No,
actually she herself was her enemy.
Here she was sitting in the car, remembering each and every warning of Swara and
her maa. How Swara had begged to speak the truth. How Maa had slapped her and she
hadn't paid any heed to what they were saying. Now she is repenting. Why hadn't
she listened to them? why why why? How come her infatuation had let her do the
worst of sins? And yet again, those hot filthy tears. And now... Finally they had
arrived home. With this thought, she opened the door of the car in which she had
been sitting with the only 'love' of her life.
So this was it. This was all i cud write. I wanted to write about her POV after her truth is out but then it wud have been too long and i don't want to bore u.
Do tell me how it was. Negative comments are welcome as I want to improve.
Hope i didn't bore you
Many of us post on Swasan and most of u all r gr8 writers.
Well m not at all a writer and so never posted any OS, SS etc.
But today m finally posting a POV of Ragini.
Not that m a Ragini supporter but just thought to post this.
Sorry if i bore u as i already mentioned m no writer. So here it goes-
So this was it! Finally the moment had arrived. Her truth was out. Lakshya came
to know everything.. Ragini sighed. But the sigh wasn't of relief. Relief? The mere
word bought shudders to her.
Here, she was sitting in the car of her husband, the man
who she loves till infinity but never got a pinch of it in return.Yes, He is the one for
whom her heart beats, whose name is inscripted on each and every breath of hers. And
today,he has sworn to bring her truth out and to leave her forever.. Again those
goosebumps, again that mighty sorrow engulfing her, again that endless stream of
tears which were flowing down her hot and now ugly, ashamed face, which had the
grief of separation as large as that of a wide, profound ocean.
Here she was sitting in the car, windows open. Now even the nature was teasing her.
Actually cursing her. That cool wind of the night was lashing at her with a force
again and again reminding of the dread to come. Each passing second was exhibiting
the proximity between her and her 'ghost'. Time.. It was becoming her enemy now. No,
actually she herself was her enemy.
Here she was sitting in the car, remembering each and every warning of Swara and
her maa. How Swara had begged to speak the truth. How Maa had slapped her and she
hadn't paid any heed to what they were saying. Now she is repenting. Why hadn't
she listened to them? why why why? How come her infatuation had let her do the
worst of sins? And yet again, those hot filthy tears. And now... Finally they had
arrived home. With this thought, she opened the door of the car in which she had
been sitting with the only 'love' of her life.
So this was it. This was all i cud write. I wanted to write about her POV after her truth is out but then it wud have been too long and i don't want to bore u.
Do tell me how it was. Negative comments are welcome as I want to improve.
Hope i didn't bore you
Debate Mansion
