Rishtoon ki Badalti Daastaan- Swaragini (Chapter--7 on pg-11) - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww dat was a lovely update
Thnku for the pm
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Wow!!
Samar and Ragini...interesting!
Should we call them SamRa (Samar-Ragini)
Heheheehee 😃
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Originally posted by: Pheunli

Wow!!
Samar and Ragini...interesting!
Should we call them SamRa (Samar-Ragini)
Heheheehee 😃

hey that's a cute name SamRa..
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Aww dat was a lovely update

Thnku for the pm

Thanxx & Welcome😊
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Ch-3 Some parts of past
Ragini goes upstairs and completes pooja with her Nani and Roshni and they took cab and goes towards there house.
Scene shifts to baadi--
The person hugs dadi back and ask her to stop crying and makes her sit. He gives a water to drink.
Dadi-- Adarsh (yes its adarsh) mahari laddo ka kucch pata chala.
Adarsh- Nahi,Dadi main Ragini ko dundhane ki koshish kar raha hu but uska koi pata nahi chal raha. Aur aap toh janti hai na ki mein yeh kam kisi detective ko nahi de sakta. Aggar maine aisa kucch bhi kiya toh Laksh aur Swara ko pata chal jayega, aur phir woh log kucch bhi kar sakte. Kucch bhi...(he says last words in anger😡 and closing his fists tightly)
Dadi- (With teary eyes) Khash!!! Uss din humne laddo par vishwas kiya hota, toh aaj voh mahare saath hoti. Adarsh tharre aur Parineeta ko chod kar kissi ne usspar vishwas nahi kiya tha,maine bhi nahi. Aur tu karta bhi kuy nahi aakhir apni bahen manta tha tu usse. Tune sabit kar diya beta ki tera vishwaas sahi tha usspar aur hum galat thhe. Saayad isliye bhagwan humey sazza de raha hai.
Adarsh- (Consoling her) Purani baatoon ko yaad karne se kya phayeda dadi. Philal toh hum bas yeh dua kar sakte hai ki Ragini jaha bhi ho khush ho.Waisi bhi vo yaha rahe kar karti kya Dadi jis tarah ke illzam aap sab ne uss par lagaye thhe voh aur kar bhi kya sakti thi. (A tear falls down from Adarsh eyes) He controls himself and says dadi maine chlta hu apna aur shekhar uncle ka khayal rakhyega. And before going he handover a packet of money to dadi and says--
Adarsh- Isse rahkye Dadi aapko kaam aayege.
Dadi- Nahi Adarsh thare ne pahele hi mahre par bahut ahshaan kiye se abb aur nahi.
Adarsh- Dadi aisa mat kahiye yeh sab main aapni khushi se kiya hai. Aggar apne kaam nahi aayege toh kaun aayega. Plz isse rakh lijiye.
Dadi blesses him and he goes.
Scene shifts to a big office-
A handsome and dashing man gets out of his BMW and walks towards office. All staffs stand up and wishes him Good Morning while he moves towards his cabin with a sweet innocent smile on his face. He enters and we see his name written on golden plate "Mr Samar Raichand" - M.D. Raichand Industries. He sits on his chair calls a peon and ask him to bring a cup of coffee for him.
Employee1- Yaar hamare boss kitne aache hai aur kitne down to earth person hai.
Employee2- Haa yaar thoda bhi gamand nahi hai sabhi se ek jaisa hi behave karte hai.
While in his cabin Samar takes out his mobile and start seeing pics.(he is staring at Ragini's pic which he took outside mandir. Yes he was the one who was looking to the things happening outside mandir. He was touched by Ragini 's gesture towards little boy.)
Samar (self thought) -- Yaar kitni sweet aur innocent smile hai iss ladaki ki aur aakhen kitni pyaari mann karta hai zindagi bhar dekta hi rahu.
He was disturbed by a knock on door. Peon comes in keeps coffee and goes.
Samar (tu himself) yaar yeh sab toh thik hai but usse ladaki ki aankho mein maine ek ajib sa dard notice kiya hai. Aur ek bahut gahra dard.
Scene shifts to Ragini's house-- All three have returned from mandir and are sitting in hall.
Ragini- Chotti aaj date kya hai. Kal Manas Delhi se wapas aa raha hai na. Kiran Aunty kaa phone aaya tha.
Roshni- Kya dii !!! Aapko itna bhi yaad nahi aaj 26th october hai.(She said and realizes what is the date. She looks at Ragini's face. She could see tears in her eyes. She looks at her nani's direction with helplessness and closes her fist in anger)
Ragini (self thought)- Aaj 26th october hai. 26th kaisi bhul sakti hu main yeh date. 6 months pahele issi date par toh maine sab kucch khoya tha.
Flashback (6 months back on 26th april)

Whole Maheshwari family is standing in hall. Shekhar, Dadi, Sharmishtha and Swara are also present. Ragini is also there with tears flowing from her eyes.
Laksh (shouting)- Ragini tumahri himmat kaise hui Swara ko stairs se dakha dene ki. Aggar mein sahi waqt usse nahi pakadta toh aaj kya ho jata tumhe pata bhi hai.
Ragini - Laksh humne aisa kucch nahi kiya. Hum Swara ko dhakka kuy denge. Woh bahen hai hamari.
Swara- Oh shut-up Ragini band karo apna yeh drama main janti hu tumne hi mujhe dhakka diya thaa. Tum mujhe marna chahti thi kuyki tum janti ho ki Laksh mujhese pyaar karta hai.
Ragini- Nahii Swara humne tumhe dhakka nahi diya. Haa hum mante hai ki pahele humse bahut galtiyaan hui h but hamne iss baar aisa kucch nahi kiya.
Laksh- Apna drama band karo Ragini. Aur nikal jao yaha se. Samjhi tum.
Shekhar comes and slap Ragini and says--
Shekhar- Mujhe vishwas nahi hota Ragini ki tu yeh sab dubara kar sakti hai. (Yeh janne ke bawjood ki tunne pahele Swara ko dhakka diya aur Laksh se dhokhe se shaadi ki hum sab ne tumhe maaf kiya tha. Lekin aaj nahi chali jaa yaha se chali jaa yeh ghar chod kar.)
Ragini-Papa humne aisa kucch nahi kiya humpar v ishwas kijiye. She goes tu dadi but she turns her face she goes tu aanapurna, durga prasad, sanskaar, ram but all turn there faces. Sujata was going to speak when she was stopped by sanskaar.
Ragini goes to Adarsh and Parineeta and ask them - Kya aap donno ko bhi hum par vishwaas nahi hai.
A & P- Ragini humme tum par pura vishwaas hai tum aisa kucch nahi kar sakti.
Adarsh to DP- Papa Ragini sahi kahe rahi hai voh aisa kucch nahi kar sakti. Main manta hu ki usne pahele bahut galtiyaan ki hai but ab voh shudhar gayi hai.
DP- Adarsh tum chup raho agar iski itni fikar hai toh tum aur tumhari patni iske saath ghar chod kar jaa sakte ho.
Ragini- Nahi yaha se koi nahi jayega. Sirf main jaaungi. Adarsh and Parineeta tries to stop her but she says
Ragini-Plz mujhe jaane dijiye. Main jaha bhi rahungi aap dono ko caontact karungi. And she leaves.
We could see a evil smile on the face of Swara, Laksh and Sharmishtha.(Yes this was there plan to throw out Ragini from there lives.)
Flashback over...
Present- Ragini was brought out of the thoughts when Roshni touched her and asked whether she is ok.
Ragini- Haa main thik hu. Bas thoda aaram karna chahti hoon. Main apne room main jaa rahi hoon.


Precap- Manas comes from Delhi. Ragini, Payal, Kavya and Roshni goes to a Resturant.


So how was third chapter. Waiting or ur feedback...😊😊😊



Edited by ck1234 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow its superb... U very good writer... Waiting for next update...
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awww just read all 3 chapters they are awsome Update next part soon
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Originally posted by: snehakadam11

awww just read all 3 chapters they are awsome Update next part soon


Thanxxx that so sweet of you
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A Note to Readers---
Hello guyz its my first ff. I request you all the readers to let me know whether you all are liking this ff or not, or you can suggest me new ways to take the story forward. You can tell me by sending PM to me or you can comment on ff. I will surely try to include your suggestions in my ff. Ya and specially silent readers dont forget to hit like. I will be updating ch-4 soon.
😊Thank you 😊
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Originally posted by: ck1234

A Note to Readers---

Hello guyz its my first ff. I request you all the readers to let me know whether you all are liking this ff or not, or you can suggest me new ways to take the story forward. You can tell me by sending PM to me or you can comment on ff. I will surely try to include your suggestions in my ff. Ya and specially silent readers dont forget to hit like. I will be updating ch-4 soon.
😊Thank you 😊

i dont know about others @ck1234 but i am liking your ff very much. So please continue😃 Waiting for ch-4.😛

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