Rishtoon ki Badalti Daastaan- Swaragini (Chapter--7 on pg-11) - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey this is too short... but start is good... how did shekhar got paralyzed... and what happened in last 6 months... give send me pm too if u can please...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: bhanu321

hey this is too short... but start is good... how did shekhar got paralyzed... and what happened in last 6 months... give send me pm too if u can please...😊


ya i know that 1st update is short, since i am free for a week i will be updating 3-4 chapters a day,so relax i will upadte 2nd chap in few hrs😊.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: alisha17

Hi just read your update

Seems interesting
Would love to read the next part
Plz could u pm me wn u update


than you for ur lovely comment & liking it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

nice start
but i update was too short
next time give long update
when sheker becom paralyzed
and when ragini left her home
update next prt soon
waitings


you will get all the answers. just be patience
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Posted: 9 years ago
#15
Interesting concept.
The lead characters are quite interesting!
Chapter 1 is nice!
Waiting for the next chapter!
😃

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow u gave a very good start dear👏👏
liked it pls do continue soon😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pheunli

Interesting concept.

The lead characters are quite interesting!
Chapter 1 is nice!
Waiting for the next chapter!
😃

thank u glad that u liked it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: rerose

Wow u gave a very good start dear👏👏

liked it pls do continue soon😳😳


thank u.😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ch-2 A New Begining p2---
Nani,Roshni and Ragini reach temple and start going upstairs. Then--
Nani- Ragini bete hum niche se mataji ki chunri aur prasad lena bhul gayye aap le aaiye ja kar. (its the temple of Maa Durga)
Ragini- Haa nani hum abhi le aate hai. Aap aur roshni chaliye hum aate hai. (and she goes to buy prasad)
Scene shifts to baadi---
Dadi is sitting beside Shekhar (who is now sleeping on the bed) Her eyes were still moist. Then she heard the sound of door and goes to see. She sees sharmistha entering baadi talking and laughing over the phone. Sharmistha also notice dadi staring her with red eyes😡😡 but she ignores her. She goes to table and start drinking water, just then dadi comes and we hear a loud sound thaapaaak... (yes, dadi slapped sharmistha tightly)
Sharmistha stands there shocked😲 while her eyes were emitting fire.
Sharmistha (shouting loudly)- Maaa, aapki himmat kaise hui mujh par haath uthane ki.
Dadi- Himmat thari himmat kaise hui shekhar ko akele chod kar jaane ki. Thare ko pata bhi kya hua tha bhi.
Sharmistha- Kuy kaun sa paahad tooth padda appar aur aapke uss apahij bete par. Aur aap kya chahti hai ki main din bhar aapke uss aapahij bete ki dekhbhal karti rahu aur apni sahelion se bhi na milu.
Dadi was shocked tu hear all this from sharmistha's mouth,She raises her hand to slap sharmistha again but sharmistha holds her hand.
Sharmistha- Aisi galti dubara karne ki sochiye ga bhi mat maa warna aap janti bhi nahi ki main kya kar sakti hu.
She takes her purse again and says main mall jaa rahi hoon flim dekne raat tak lauto gi. Aur haa yeh mat bhuliye gaa ki yeh ghar meri beti Swara aur uske patti Lakshya ke diye hue paiso se chalta hai,Samjhi aap.
Tears starts rolling down from dadi's face. She breaks down completely. She was about to fall when a person comes and supports her. She see his face, hugs him and starts crying loudly.😭😭😭
Scene shifts to mandir where Ragini had purchased prasad and was about to go upstairs when she see a fruit vendor beating a child shouting chor chori karta hai... ha bol and child was crying badly.
She goes to fruit vendor and says--
Ragini- Arrey aap isse kuy mar rahe hai chodiye isse.(taking stick from fv's hand)
F.V.- Madamji yeh chor hai hamare dukane se fruits chura raha thaa.
She gives some money to f.v. and he leaves. She kneels down cups chil face and ask him-
Ragini- Beta aap chori kuy kar rahe the chori karna galat hai na.
Child-Didi, main phichle doon dino se bhukha hoon. Meri maa aur chotti bahen bhi bhukhi hai main unke liye kucch lene aaya tha par mere pass paise nahi hai...
Ragini- Aapko khana chahiye aao mere saath.
She goes to a near by stall.
Stall owner (seeing her)-- Arrey madamji aap aaiye aur bataien kya seva kar sakta hu aapki.
Ragini-Nameste Kaka, actually aap aaj roz se iss bacche ko teen waqt ka khana pack kar ke dedijiye ga (she says pointing towards the child)
aur Paise main aapko roz subh hi de jaaugi.
Stall owner- Thik hai madam ji.
She kneels down and say sthik hai ab aap roz yaha se apne aur apne parivaar ke liye khaana le jaana.
Child-Shuriya didi aapke yeh aheshaan main kabhi nahi bhuluga.She kisses his forhead and gives a sweet smile and goes towards mandir.

Unknown to her a pairs of eyes where watching her and where staring towards her with sweet smile on lips.

Precap- Ragini's first meeting with Samar Raichand.

So guyzz how was the chapter-2... Waiting for your feed backs...
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey ck1234 its good... Update next chapter soon...

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