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shreya

@shreyaansh

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

So beautifully written. ... :) <3
Thanks for the lovely os sharing with us...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Preet, my dear friend...thanks for making this morning special for me, by giving me this lovely OS to read. 🤗

I loved that you had given both Sanskaar and Swara's perspectives one after the other, both speaking of their mature understanding, love and care for each other. True love is like that---it fills your heart with both passion and peace, na? 😳

BTW, I just wanted to tell you some sentences in your OS which made go completely Awww...😊

"""Love is a pretty powerful drug. When you feel it, you really feel it. It can suspend time, making the whole world seem still and invisible. True love isn't ordinary, it doesn't come around often. ""

""I'm not saying that our married life didn't face problems. We had lots of problems, but our love didn't become weak. When bad times come true love won't let you down, instead it will grow stronger and stronger with each passing day.""

""They say 'no man is worth your tears, but once you find one that is, he won't make you cry'""

""If i had a chance to live my life over again, next time i would find him sooner so that i could love him longer.'""

Bravo, Preet. Very beautifully put. 👏

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anju rana

@anju10

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

woww lovely os dear
beautifully written
thanxx for the pm
😊 😛 😛 😊

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Preet... 🤗 Its so beautiful yaara...
Loved the way you penned down Sanskaar and Swara's perspectives.
Keep rocking girl...

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MusicMyLife.

@MusicMyLife.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Preet it wz awesome re ❤️❤️
loved it ❤️❤️

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naina

@hp_2006

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Really beautiful OS..

Sanskaar's feelings and Swara's feelings were written beautifully👏👏👏

A question came up in my mind at that time (i might sound selfish) but why zindagi was giving him a second chance? Why zindagi was not giving ME a second chance? Kya galti thi meri?

Sanskaar's this words hurt me 😭

And loved Swara's this thought

If i had a chance to live my life over again, next time i would find him sooner so that i could love him longer.'

Awesome ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Edited by hp_2006 - 9 years ago