Swasan ff - the judgement part 15 on pg 28 - Page 11

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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update. So swara l take her time to confess her feelings.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 11
Komal saw lucky on the terrace
Lucky - aap yahan?
Komal - Haan woh neend nahi aa rahi thi isiliye. Aur aap
Lucky - mughe bhi
Komal - chalo phir bethtein hai batein kartein hai
Lucky smiled and said - ok
Komal- Tum bohat bahadur ho lakshay
Lakshay looked at her surprised
Lakshay- woh Kaise
Komal- kya? Itna surprised kyun sound kar rahein ho? Maine tumhari Aur swara ki batein sunli thi. U are very courageous to let go lucky, yeh samjhne k liye bohat himmat chahiye hoti hai ki ab tumhara pyaar tumhara nahi hai
Lucky- kaash ragini bhi yeh baat samjti, ki I don't love her
Komal- nahi samjhegi woh abhi lakshay infact ho sakta hai kabhi na samjhe she is suffering from obsession usko ek medical problem hai Aur Maine yeh baat shekhar uncle ko bhi Kahin hai par unko lagta hai ki mai swara Aur sanskar ki shadi bachane k liye unki beti ko Pagal sabit kar rahi hun
Lakshay - kya? Par tumhe Kaise patah ki usko medical problem hai
Komal- i am a councillor lakshay, ragini sai sirf do baar baat ki hai Maine usnai mughse sirf yeh Kahan hai ki swara usko tumsai cheen rahi hai ya phir swara bohat kharab hai ya phir she loves u and can't let u go, uske dimaag Mai sirf Tum ho woh Aur kissi Kai baare Mai nahi sochti
Lakshay - toh?
Komal - toh yeh lucky that u have rejected her twice, that too for a girl like swara, u wanted a modern wife right?
Lakshay- Haan par
Komal - lakshay pehle tum uska pyaar thai, phir uski zid banne, phir uska junoon Aur ab uska obsession ho, woh swara se sirf isiliye nafrat karti hai because u love her, woh sanskar sai nafrat karti hai kyunki usnai uska saath aise samay pai chodh diya jab woh tumko panne k bilkul kareeb thi,usnai adarsh bhai ka Sach chupaya Taki swara achhi bahu sabit na ho, usko maarne ki koshish tak ki, sanskar par galat ilzam lagaya Taki swara ka support system khatam ho jayye insare instances Mai sirf ek cheezon common hai Aur woh ho Tum lucky
Lucky was shocked
Lucky- toh ab?
Komal - she needs a psychiatrist lucky, I have a plan
Lucky immediately held Komal's hand
Lucky - i am with u
Komal was shocked with the contact she never touched a man like this in her life, not even her husband
Lucky realised what had he done and looked at her and withdrew his hand
Lucky- plan kya hai?

Morning
Sanskar woke up with a headache. He tried to remember but couldn't. He decided to ask swara. Just then swara entered the room with his lemon juice.
Swara - kal kya hua swara Maine kya kiya???? Blah blah blah, kyun drink kartein ho sanskar jab handle nahi hoti?
Sanskar remembered why he drank.that much and his eyes filled up with tears of jealousy and heartbreak
Swara smiled seeing him
Swara- kya hua?
Sanskar - nothing woh mughe office jaana hai.
Swara- yeh lo pehle nimboo pani piyyo
Sanskar- thanks
Swara- waise sanskar jab tum kal gayab huye na tab mughe Lucky mila
Suddenly sanskar's expressions changed his nose twitched in anger and his face became red
Swara controlled her laughter, he looked like a three year old kid whose chocolate has been snatched away
Sanskar - toh Mai kya karun? Just go to hell
Swara- arrey chilla kyun rahe ho, aur kisliye gussa ho
Sanskar - i am not angry samjhi? Mughe koi pharak nahi padta
Swara - kis baat ka pharak nahi padta?
Sanskar - mughe late ho raha hai I don't have time to listen your bakwass
Swara- arrey itna gussa?
Sanskaar got up and went to the washroom and closed the door
Swara- sanskar suno toh please... Idiot kahinka

Sanskar got ready to go down for breakfast. While going down he collided with lucky.
Sanskar was angry, he started moving away. He didn't wanted to get more hurt by him or swara and most importantly he can't hurt them. So he did the best he can - he ran away from them
Lucky- bhai I am sorry
Lucky shouted
Sanskar stopped and turned
Lucky ran to him and hugged him tight
Lucky -sorry bhai and thank you. I don't hate u bhai. Meri kal swara se baat hui and I understood that she doesn't love me bhai, so now we're freinds forever just like before. I promised her not to bother her and remain her friend.
Sanskar was shocked, so this is what the hug was about? He immediately hugged lucky back he was genuinely happy that his little brother was back
Sanskar choked because he was crying
Sanskar- agggarrr aaggli baarrr bakwasss ki na toh Mai zor se Thapar marunga
Lucky- maar Lena bhai pehle bachon ki Tarah rona toh band Karon
Sanskar broke the hug and wiped his tears
Sanskar - Tu Mera mazaak uda raha hai?
Sanskar held his ears
Lucky- aauuu bhai ouch sorry sorry sorry
Sanskar left his ear and smiled both of them looked at each other and started laughing
3 ladies saw this brother hood exchange Komal swara and ragini
Komal (joined her hands in a silent prayer )- devi mayya thanks a lot, iss parivar ki saari problems dheere Dheere mitah do
Ragini ran from there to her room. She started thinking
Ragini- yeh sab Kaise? Lucky ko toh Sanskar sai nafrat honi chahiye nafrat, par lucky swara ko itni aasani sai Kaise jaane de saktein hai. Aise toh swara ko Sanskar mill jayenge Aur jis ladki nai mughse mere pyaar ko cheen liya woh khush rahega. Aur lucky humare nahi honge woh humai chodh denge humara saara plan chopat ho jayega
Swara wiped her happy tears and went to her room
Swara- thank god, do bhai toh mill Gayye. Ab tension yeh hai ki Mai sanskar ko Kaise bataungi ki I also love him
Swara started thinking

Precap- swara practicing I love you in front of the mirror and Komal sees her
Edited by luvakanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow..
sanskar kabhi kisi ki bat nhi sunta..
😆😆😆😆😆

Swara practicing ilu..
👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Great..

Loved it..
Continue soon..
Thank you for the PM..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing
Can't wait for confession
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update. N loved swara playing with sanskar by talking abt laksh. Finally both brother are happy and became one. swara practicing to say I love you to sanskar. So sweet continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story.
Love swasan.
Plzzz pm me about update.
Plzzz.
Thanks
avihothi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Love the way swara teases Sanskaar.
Plzzz make her confess very romantically.
Plzzz pm me about update.
Plzzz.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks so much for the pm Akanksha. I've read some of your OS's before, but somehow I had missed this SS. It is so amazing. I'm really glad I could read all the 11 parts together. You have done so much justice to the story, made it a very realistic and mature take on the realization of love, the importance given to friendship and marriage.
And not just Swasan, you have given attention in a brief but important way, to the role of others in the family too, like Durga Prasad, Ram Prasad, Sujata, Parineeta, Dida.

I especially liked the character of Komal whom you have created in this SS. Like you have portrayed, her love for her husband is so similar to the love Swara has for Sanskaar. She depended on him, trusted him, considered him as her best friend...but realized only much later, that she also reciprocated his love. Sadly, for her the realization came too late and she tragically lost her husband. It was so touching to read how she wants to ensure SwaSan relationship is saved.

Lakshya is more mature, thankfully, in your fic, rather than the juvenile and impulsive version in the serial. But Ragini is still plotting and scheming...not only does she want to possess Lakshya, she wants to make Swara unhappy by eliminating Sanskaar. ... 🥺

Hope Ragini does not succeed even a bit. Like Komal said, she needs psychiatric treatment.

And I really hope Swara confesses her feelings to Sanskaar in the next chapter, and they have some lovely, romantic moments. 😳

Eagerly looking forward to your next chapter. And please do PM me.


Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story yaar

This is not fair 😆
Y u r not sending me pms
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update...
plz continue...
nice precap..swara practising in front of mirror...😳

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