Swasan ff - the judgement part 15 on pg 28

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gayu6

@gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#121

Nice update. So finally swara confessed her love to sanskar. Continue soon

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#122

Wow!!! Suprb update..

Sach mein komal s awesum yaar..

Ragini ko apni galathiyan dikane ki koshish kr rhi thi..

Fabulous...

Swara practising 2 say i luv u 2 sanky..

Hahaha..fantastic...

Hope sb treatmnt ke baad ragini ko kuch toh akal aa jaye...

Finally swasan confession...

Swasan romance...

Precap seems interest in...

Nw lov stry s gng 2 blossom...

Penned well dear...

Thnku so much 4 d pm...

Do continue.

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Akshdeep Kaur

@_akaur_

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#123

It's an amazing story...

I started from the beginning and couldn't stop reading..

At least Lucky is positive.. Yuppi!!

I'm so excited to know about Komal and Lakshya..

Loved SwaSan's confession, it was just so simple and funny...

at first Sanskaar didn't even realise... Swara is just perfect..

Continue with your work soon please...

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#124

Very nice update Akanksha. The SwaSan love confession was cute and romantic...exactly how I would have loved to see their confession on TV. But in the serial we are getting Swara's confession with so much pain and separation coming up. 😕

Loved Komal's way of explaining to Ragini, how her love is mostly a delusion. She had an image of what her love would be like, what her husband would be like. And she tried to force Lakshya into that image, without really understanding what Lakshya wanted, what he was like as a person.

I also liked Komal's calm explanation of schizophrenia to Swara, and her insistence that Ragini should be seen like any other patient needing medical attention. There is no need for this excessive stigma attached to this condition.

Sanskaar, as always, was so calm and collected and was completely in control. The way he promised to take care of he whole issue with the family was so much in tune with his character.

Looking forward to the next update, of their travel to US. Can't wait to see how SwaSan's romance blossoms, and also Lakshya's feelings for Komal.

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wordsofwisdom

@wordsofwisdom

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#125

Very nice diii

I read all the parts together

Its just so good

And I love the way the story unfolds

Swasan confession was just superb

I'm new to this forum

And this is the first story I read it just awesome

And plss pm me when u update the next prt

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Preeti

@-Prithi-

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#126

superb update
thanks for the pm

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akanksha

@luvakanksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#127

Hey guys since u all wanted me to continue I am continuing will update today or tomorrow, here is a teaser till then

Teaser

Sanskar- baba ragini is suffering from schizophrenia pls samajne ki koshish toh karte

Dadi was frustrated she walked up to him and slapped him

Swara(shouted)- dadi?

Dadi- mahre lado ko Pagal sabit karna chahve hai yeh chore Taki apne bhai ka picha chuka sake ragini se

Swara- dadi pls suniye puri baat phir react kariye Aur mere pati par haath uthane ka ya phir un pai ilzam lagane ka aapko koi hai nahi hai

Sanskar - swara it's ok relax

Shekhar - bolo sanskar

Dadi- par shekhar???

Shekhar - MA pls chup rahiye

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: luvakanksha
Hey guys since u all wanted me to continue I am continuing will update today or tomorrow, here is a teaser till then
Teaser
Sanskar- baba ragini is suffering from schizophrenia pls samajne ki koshish toh karte
Dadi was frustrated she walked up to him and slapped him
Swara(shouted)- dadi?
Dadi- mahre lado ko Pagal sabit karna chahve hai yeh chore Taki apne bhai ka picha chuka sake ragini se
Swara- dadi pls suniye puri baat phir react kariye Aur mere pati par haath uthane ka ya phir un pai ilzam lagane ka aapko koi hai nahi hai
Sanskar - swara it's ok relax
Shekhar - bolo sanskar
Dadi- par shekhar???
Shekhar - MA pls chup rahiye

Hey Akanksha...so glad you are continuing this. 😊 Nice preview, waiting for the chapter.

Cheers

Viji