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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 13

Swasan were lost in the kiss. Swara fell down on their bed due to the force of the kiss. Sanskar was desperate. He needed this. He needed love. But never got that and now when he heard swara's Confession he lost all his patience, control and gentleness. He just wanted to make sure that this real. Sanskar was above swara His whole body weight was on her. He started opening her kurti's zip. He was halfway, when swara heard a knock. Swara eyes flew open she broke the kiss and was breathing heavily but sanskar didn't stop, as soon as swara broke the kiss he started placing kisses on her neck.
Swara - hmm ahh sanskar koi hai ahh
Sanskar(still kissing) - i don't care swara
Swara pushed him but sanskar grabbed her wrist and held it above clutched them in firm grip
Sanskar- quit trying swara I am not leaving you
Swara - koi knock kar raha hai plsss
Sanskar then heard the distant knocking on their bedroom door
Sanskar- just ignore
Swara - sanskar pls hato na baba don't behave like a kid
Sanskar(in a seductive tone) - swara I am not at all behaving like a kid
Swara blushed, someone knocked again.
Sanskar- why can't they just go damn it
Swara- hato na pls
Sanskar gave up and angrily left her
Sanskar- u know what just go
Sanskar got up angrily and twitched his nose and went to the washroom and banged the door
Swara- ek dam bachha
Swara made herself presentable and opened the door, Komal was there
Komal- Kitna Der swara?
Swara - woh woh I was ahh listening to music and hmm sanskar is in the washroom so Haan so sorry
Komal- achha actually I came to give u this file
Swara - yeh kya hai
Komal- your divorce papers and obviously now u don't need divorce so there is a form in this fill that up and submit it in the court before the completion of 3 months ok
Swara- ok thanks par yeh kal subha de deti
Komal- swara Mai kal subha subha chali jaungi
Swara was shocked - chali jaogi Matlab
Komal- arrey I was here to stop ur divorce which I have successfully done Aur ragini k ilaj k liye I have to.give this file to lakshay
Swara started crying
Swara- don't go Plsss
Komal- arrey swara why are u crying dekho my job here is over I have to go for another job ad soon as court appoints me don't worry I will be in touch
Swara - plss don't go I need u plss
Swara was crying desperately
Sanskar saw all this
Sanskar - Komal u can't go I will not submit this form
Komal- what??????
Sanskar(smirked) - Haan phir toh ur job won't be over and u wouldn't be appointed other case
Komal- sanskar????
Sanskar - swara needs u Komal
Komal- par...
Sanskar- par var kuch nahi
Swara- Haan pls ragini k thik honey tak atleast be with us
Komal - u both are such brats
Sanskar- woh toh hum hai
Komal smiled and shook her head
Komal- ok par Tum log humesha mughe yahan nahi rakh saktein
Sanskar- woh badmai decide karenge ki hum tumhe Kab tak rakh saktein hai filhaal toh 2.5 months tak u are here
Komal- what do you mean?
Sanskar smirked - good night Komal sweet dreams
And he closed the door
Komal looked confused and went away from there
Swara - what did u mean?
Sanskar - lakshay loves her
Swara(shouted)- what???? Kab Kahan Kaise did he tell you
Sanskat- why are u shouting? I don't know but I know my little bro he still doesn't know that he loves her bit he would come around and Komal respects lucky so may be she would fall for him too
Swara- wow yeh toh Kamal ho gaya
Sanskar suddenly realised that he was angry with her
Sanskar- just shut up alright I am not talking to u
Swara- arrey...

Komal went to lucky's room with ragini's file
Lucky looked at her she looked confused
Lucky- Tum confusion Mai cute lagti ho
Komal came out of hert thoughts- what?
Lucky realised what he blurted out
Lucky- what I was saying that u look confused why?
Komal- tumhare bhai k wahjah sai
She told him what happened
Lucky- Komal bad itni site baat may be it he just said it like that
Komal- may be u right, yeh lo
Lucky - what's this?
Komal- file hai Ragini k ilzam k liye kuch contacts of world renowned psychiatrist and there price details and stuff like that. Jab sabko batayenge then we have to decide the doctor.
Lucky- hmm ok
Komal- how's ragini?
Lucky - still sleeping, beech Mai unhi thi Shetland water and slept again
Komal- hmm chain peeyoge?
Lucky - ok par bannayega Kaun
Komal- Mai bannungi chalo...

Swara - arrey sorry baba agree na kholtein toh kya sochti Komal
Sanskar - i don't care kya sochti , aur woh Pagal nahi hai agar pati Patni darwaza nahi kholtein toh she knows the meaning of that
Swara blushed and looked down. She saw his husband's back towards her, she hugged him from the back
Swara - sorry na baba
Sanskar smiled he turned and hugged her from the front
Sanskar- i just don't want u to be away from me
Swara smiled - i am right here bachha
Sanskar- bachha?
Swara - Aur nahi toh kya Mera bachha I will call u that only when we are alone
Sanskar- achha ji... So let me show how naughty I am as kid
Swara blushed and said- abhi nahi bohat Der ho gayi hai we have to get up early tomorrow Baadi jaana hai bachha
Sanskar pouted his lips in annoyance and Swara moved back from there hug to witness that she smiled and pulled his cheek
Swara- ale Mera bachha pls na
Sanskar picked her up swara gasped in shock
Sanskar took her towards the bed and made lie on his side and came above her
He switched off the light and said
Sanskar- sleep swara
He then buried his head in the crook of her neck, swara was too shocked to respond after few minutes she came out of it due to sanskar's gentle snoring
Swara engulfed him in her embrance with a smile and started caressing his hair. She closed her eyes, she understood that she has to get used to this weight and she was not complaining


Precap
Sanskar- baba ragini is suffering from schizophrenia pls samajne ki koshish toh karte
Dadi was frustrated she walked up to him and slapped him
Swara(shouted)- dadi?
Dadi- mahre lado ko Pagal sabit karna chahve hai yeh chore Taki apne bhai ka picha chuka sake ragini se
Swara- dadi pls suniye puri baat phir react kariye Aur mere pati par haath uthane ka ya phir un pai ilzam lagane ka aapko koi hai nahi hai
Sanskar - swara it's ok relax
Shekhar - bolo sanskar
Dadi- par shekhar???
Shekhar - MA pls chup rahiye
Edited by luvakanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey Akanksha 😊
Really liked the update. Such lovely SwaSan moments. Very cute and romantic. Sanskaar's intense love for Swara, his poignant desire to be loved back by her was so lovely. The way he reacted to Swara's confession, and didn't even want to stop their kiss when someone was at the door was 😳

And Sanskaar is so smart. He's already figured out that Lucky has begun to love Komal. 😊 So now he and Swara can play cupid for Kom-Ya 😉 But first I want to see a proper uninterrupted romance scene between SwaSan. ☺️
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Posted: 9 years ago
Grt update.
SwaSan moments were really good. Lucky nd Komal r developing their relationship though unknowingly.
Precap is good. Hopefully all will accept Ragini's condition.
Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice!!!
Bacchha!!!😃

Nice name!!
Thanku for the pm..
Continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww so sweet .
Love the way swara called her back.
Simply awawesom update.
Thanks for pm.
Do update soon.


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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update!!
SwaSan moments were lovely,..
Sanskaar already knows Laksh's feelings for Komal evn before he himself realises...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey that was awesome. please Pm me next time.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved swasan moments. And she calling him bacchaa. Awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey guys I am writing one more os its in 2 parts which is completed only epilogue is left here is the link
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4547737

Pls read and comment

Part 14

Swara woke up as the sunlight fell on her face, sanskar was still sleeping but now his face was not buried in the crook of her instead his face was buried in her chest. Swara started breathing heavily. She was blushing.
Swara- sanskar, sanskar utho subha ho gayi
Sanskar rubbed his cheeks on her chest before waking up and rubbing his eyes. Once his vision was clear he noticed his wife who was red due to her blushing and was breathing heavily because of their close proximity.
Sanskar- i love u
Swara tried to push him but he was too strong for her.
Swara - hato, pls
Sanskar kissed her cheek
Sanskar- i love u
Swara looked up into his eyes, she realised that he would not move until and unless he hears what he wants to
Swara- me too bachha, I love u too. Ab hato pls na badi jana hai
Sanskar lifted himself up and now lay down besides her.
Sanskar - u go get ready wake me up when u r done
Swara kissed his cheek and went to the washroom, sanskar closed his eyes to catch some more sleep
Swara came out from washroom to witness her bachha sleeping.
Swara- sanskar , bachha get up I am ready
Sanskar opened his eyes and was mesmerized. Swara was in front of the mirror with wet hairs and was wearing his favourite color blue. He got up and went behind her. He hugged her from back, his hands were on her waist and he pulled her towards himself and buried his face in her wet hair. And started placing kisses, first on her hair then on her cheek and then he moved back and bought her hair on one shoulder very slowly touching her neck lazily and then started kissing her other shoulder. Sanskar was lost in this passion and swara's situation was the same. Her heartbeats were so loud that she was sure that even sanskar could hear them. She was breathing so heavily that it made her wonder whether she was normal or not. Sanskar suddenly bit her shoulder. Swara's eyes rounded in shock and she grabbed sanskar's hands which were on her waste for support. She felt a tinge of pain but more than that it was pleasure. Sanskar sucked the area and then place a gentle kiss to ease out the pain. Swara's eyes were closed when he was doing so. Suddenly she felt nothing, she opened her eyes to see herself alone in front of mirror. Was that a dream? But suddenly she noticed a hickey on her shoulder which was enough evidence to prove her thought wrong. She heard the shower running to conclude sanskar's presence in washroom, she combed her hair applied her sindoor and wore her mungalsutra, then she picked up her dupatta and made sure it hid the love bite sanskar has given her and then went out blushing.
Sanskar got out of shower. He started taking out his clothes from the wardrobe. Just then swara entered the room the sandwiches and tea. Suddenly sanskar heard his wife's gasp.
Sanskar- kya hua?
Swara - sanskar Tum aisai Kaise
Sanskar- Matlab
Swara- sanskar u r just in a towel besharam kahinkey
Swara kept the tray on bed to run out side the room but sanskar caught her well before and closed the door. He pinned swara to the door and leaned towards her
Sanskar- besharam? Mai humesha sai aisai hi bahar aata hun washroom se
Swara's nervousness was gone now and she became the feisty tigeress she is
Swara- jhooth bachha jhooth I am living with u for 4 months
Sanskar- nope u were not living with me
Swara- hawww phirse jhooth
Sanskar- i am not lieing swara, in these 4 months a stranger girl was living with me who wanted her mom dad to unite, u became my wife yesterday so I became what I am too.
Swara was stunned at the Confession
Swara smiled
Swara- achha achha now get ready bacha we have to leave
Sanskar- ok wait
Sanskar went towards the wardrobe and wore his clothes and joined swara for tea and sandwiches
Swara - i hope my family understands all this
Sanskar- don't worry they would, ragini thik ho jayegi
Swara smiled and kissed him on his cheek
Swara - i love u
Sanskar- me too now let's leave

They reached the badi
Shomi - Tum log itni subha subha aao
Shekhar dadi and Dada came too
Shekhar - kuch baat hai kya? Aao Batho
Sanskar- Haan uncle, ek khush khabri hai Aur ek buri kaunsi pehle sunenge?
Dadi- khush khabri pehle suna beta kafi din ho gayye sunne huye
Sanskar- me and Swara have decided to continue our marriage we are not breaking it we love each other
Everyone was smilling shomi gave a hug to swara.
Shomi - arrey waah Mai bohat khush hun
Shekhar - itnai khushi k mauka pe buri khabar kya hai
Dadi- Haan itni badi khush khabri isske aage kya buri khabar hai
Shomi - batao beta
Sanskar- MA kal...
Flashback
Komal- toh batao ragini lucky ki favourite dish, colour Aur Jagah
Ragini- woh pati hai humare humai sab patah Hai, unki favourite dish daal batti hai, colour blue hai Aur Jagah Kolkata hai
Komal- lucky notepad dena
Lucky gave it to her
Komal- pizza, green Aur goa
Ragini was shocked
Ragini - nahi he is my husband. Unki pasand yehi honi chahiye, yeh Kaise?
Swara was confused with all this
Swara- ragini tum kya keh rahi ho tumhai toh yeh sab patah tha, tumnai galat kyun bataya?
Ragini- galat bataya? Mughe nahi patah Hai. Par humare pyaar ko yehi pasand hona chahiye
Komal- made her sit, ragini tumanai lakshay ki ek chaavi apne dil Aur dimaag Mai bannai hui hai, bilkul vaisi chaavi jaisi tum apne pyaar Aur apne pati k liye bachpan sai sochti thi, par lucky woh nahi hai
Swara - yeh sab kya hai Komal
Ragini- Haan yeh sab Mera Matlab lakshay ko toh jo maine Kahan woh pasand hona chahiye yeh sab kya? Mughe kuch samaj nahi...
And ragini fainted
Flashback over
Shomi- ajeeb baat hai
Swara- Komal nai ek psychiatrist se baat ki
Everyone gasped in shock
Sanskar- unhoney humai ek bohat ajeeb par zaroori baat battayi
No one spoke, so sanskar continued
Sanskar- ragini is schizophrenic, she has an imaginary world of her own where she thinks that lakshay is her dream man and is obsessed with him.
Shekhar- get out sanskar isse pehle I loose my patience go
Swara- baba please... Ragini ko lagta hai ki mai, sanskar, ma Aur dida lakshay ko usse alag karna chahtein hai, she thinks we are her enemies. Baba ragini nai jo mughe maarne ki koshish ki, ma ki kidnapping Aur sanskar par molestation ka jhootha ilzam woh sab iss bemaari ki wahjah sai. She hallucinates, and has her own world which revolves around her. We need to bring our old ragini back baba
Sanskar- baba ragini is suffering from schizophrenia pls samajne ki koshish toh karo
Dadi was frustrated she walked up to him and slapped him
Swara(shouted)- dadi?
Dadi- mahre lado ko Pagal sabit karna chahve hai yeh chora Taki apne bhai ka picha chudha sake ragini se
Swara- dadi pls suniye puri baat phir react kariye Aur mere pati par haath uthane ka ya phir un pai ilzam lagane ka aapko koi hai nahi hai
Sanskar - swara it's ok relax
Shekhar - bolo sanskar
Dadi- par shekhar???
Shekhar - MA pls chup rahiye
Sanskar- baba iska ilaj hai hum ragini ko wapas la saktein hai, ismai sharmane ki koi baat nahi hai baba. Yeh ek bemaari hai baki sabhi beemariyon ki Tarah and it has a cure.
Dadi- par hum kyun Maine thari baat
Shomi - Tum ragini ko yahan le aao pls
Swara- ok ma hum Shyam ko latein hai usse
Shekhar- woh thik ho jayegi????
Swara hugged him
Swara- Haan baba Pakka


Edited by luvakanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
The family got to know about Ragini's condition. Hope they take proper steps.

SwaSan moments were really cute.

Continue soon

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