SwaSan TS:Redemption - Page 2

Originally posted by: princess_tara

awesome story

Originally posted by: Annei123

Lovely TS !!!!

Keep writing more on swasan 😃

Loved it.
Do write more.

Beautifully written and with a fantastic underlying concept. You tackled the difficult subject of Ragini's redemption so well, I really loved this Ragini- how I wish we could get something like this in the show, I'd happily sacrifice a lot of the endless and mega fast drama for it. I really like how you did justice to all the 4 characters, even Lakshya in his brief sections. Made me get a really nice feeling- loved the romance but also the finer nuances. Ragini seeing her mum in that gap between life and death was particularly moving. Overall, thought it was fantastic 👏

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Beautifully written and with a fantastic underlying concept. You tackled the difficult subject of Ragini's redemption so well, I really loved this Ragini- how I wish we could get something like this in the show, I'd happily sacrifice a lot of the endless and mega fast drama for it. I really like how you did justice to all the 4 characters, even Lakshya in his brief sections. Made me get a really nice feeling- loved the romance but also the finer nuances. Ragini seeing her mum in that gap between life and death was particularly moving. Overall, thought it was fantastic 👏

PS: We clearly share some mental link! My first SwaSan OS is titled Redemption:) It deals with Sanskaar's. Also, I just completed a Three Shot where there's a very filmy public declaration of love by Swara! 😃

Originally posted by: Jidnyasa

Really nice..👍🏼

Magical update...

Originally posted by: sun_shine18

Thank you so much. 😳

Ragini clearly has some mental issues and needs treatment, and I know that it will be raining pigs before the cvs even touch this subject. So I wrote this to satisfy my inner doctor.😆😆

I didn't know that your first os was titled redemption, can I get the link for it. I would love to read.😃

And Swara owes Sanskar a very public confession, I wanted everyone in the show to hear it, but had to be content with just the MM ladies and Lakshya. 😉

ps. Great minds huh??😉

Ok after a long time felt a bit for ragini

Beautiful! Loved both the parts... But the swasanian in me loved the part 2 a dash more for obvious reasons! 😃