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Very lovely, Rithika. I really liked it. You have portrayed the gamut of emotions running through Sanskaar and Swara's mind at their separation---the pain they are both going through.
I must tell you, these sentences spoken by Sanskaar in your OS literally gave me goosebumps: """When I know everything that my love will never succeed then why did I love her.. no why did u make me fall in love with her?? Now I cant even ask u for her because I myself know how it feels to be away from ur love. ... I cant ask u to give her to me I cant ask u to reunite them with my whole heart, (hitting the ground) why did u make me like this. I cant wish for her happiness completely since I cant live without her and I cant ask her for me since I know she cant be happy with me. I doesn't have such a big heart like swara to see my love living infront of me with other person. So there is only one answer for it kill me.. yes ma kill me then there will not be any problem to anyone. I cant kill myself because I promised my mom that I will never think of suicide after kavita's death and I cant break my promise so u kill me and take me with u."""
Wow. Very powerfully conceived and articulated. 👏 I also loved the "cosmic connection" between Sansku and Swara you indicated in your story---how she realizes he is hurt/ in danger, even though she is nowhere on the scene. Truly these two are meant to be! 😊
I must tell you, these sentences spoken by Sanskaar in your OS literally gave me goosebumps: """When I know everything that my love will never succeed then why did I love her.. no why did u make me fall in love with her?? Now I cant even ask u for her because I myself know how it feels to be away from ur love. ... I cant ask u to give her to me I cant ask u to reunite them with my whole heart, (hitting the ground) why did u make me like this. I cant wish for her happiness completely since I cant live without her and I cant ask her for me since I know she cant be happy with me. I doesn't have such a big heart like swara to see my love living infront of me with other person. So there is only one answer for it kill me.. yes ma kill me then there will not be any problem to anyone. I cant kill myself because I promised my mom that I will never think of suicide after kavita's death and I cant break my promise so u kill me and take me with u."""
Wow. Very powerfully conceived and articulated. 👏 I also loved the "cosmic connection" between Sansku and Swara you indicated in your story---how she realizes he is hurt/ in danger, even though she is nowhere on the scene. Truly these two are meant to be! 😊
