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Anu

@anu91

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

First big big big hug from me to u...

Fantastic OS...

u made me cryand smile also. ...

Each and every word was really awesome dr...

Hope something will happen in show like same...

Waiting for tat day...

U pen-ed it so nicely dr...

Loved it...

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-Ros-

@-Ros-

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Lovely OS 😊

Loved the last scene! 😃

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tigress.meenu

@tigress.meenu

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

beautiful os dr... i had tears reading the first half and smiling like an idiot at last part👏

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Its amazing Ritika👏

The emotions and the realisation were the high points for me. Laksh really needs to see Sanskaar's pain to know what a selfless love means.

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Mansi

@Princess_Mansi

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awesome update dear

Keep writing such wonderful stories

Thanks for the pm

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: sadhana.np
Nice 👍🏼

thank u for liking and commenting

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: princess1222
Its just awesome... loved it...
plzzz keep writing... 👏

thank u dear.

will deffo write if i get any other thought.

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: AartShefa
Awesome dr..
I loved it totally. .
Well written. .
This what I expect from the cvs..don't know what is there in their mind..
Thanks for the pm dr

thanks that u loved it.

even i want to watch that in show but we know never cv's will ever give us that so i made it into os.😉

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rithika2015

@rithika2015

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: Annei123
Thanks for giving such a beautiful os Rithika !!!!! 😛
Keep writing more

thank u dear,

will deffo write more..😛

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rithika2012

@rithika2012

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: gayu6
Really nice update. Very emotional when he left her and went away. Sad for sanskar😭 how much he s crying at the temple. Finally she realized her love for him and went back to him.and laksh decision is also good as he gave one more chance for his marriage. Swasan raglak leading a happy married life😳

thanks for ur comment.

it really means a lot to me.

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