KAVITA OS: WHISPERS - Page 2

Originally posted by: JazzyM

I'm airy, I waft around...I have read such dialogues in horror books...for a second I thought I'm going to read a OS in that genre...

Yours turned out different; I really do not how to explain except that it was soulful...

I would hope, all departed souls would 'feel' the same way about loved ones on earth...Gosh! I'm not making sense..sorry!

Originally posted by: inlieu

Lovely piece. Can I add, though, that you've touched on an important point here?

We all know Swara isn't ready for this relationship, but neither is Sanskaar. He loves her, but is he really ready to move on with her? I don't think so. There is still too much angst in him, too much of his past spilling over to his present that is not healthy for this relationship. I don't he has actively thought that far into the future about growing old with her, though his subconscious and heart know that's what they want.

Yes, it's obvious that being in love with Swara, he would want to marry her. That is the natural route to take, but I don't believe Sanskaar has had the chance or time yet to envision them living as a married couple and being together just for each other. Free of boundaries, obligation, and guilt. My belief has been reinforced by his dialog in today's episode.

I'm not talking about Sanksaar resisting this marriage because he doesn't want to bind Swara to him by force. That is a big factor of course, but what I'm trying to say has nothing to do with Swara's rejection of him, and everything to do with his state of mind. I want to stress that Sanskaar himself is not really there yet, not fully ready to be a husband and life partner. He's doing and saying all the right things, being supporting and caring as one ought to, but there's a part of him that he's holding back.

His nightmares haven't gone away completely and are also the reason he is so protective of Swara. He can't let anything happen to her. Until he is completely free of the guilt and pain of his past, he won't be able to belong to Swara fully. I think he is still tied to Kavita and his past in a major way, and I hope the CVs explore this angle as it would make for beautiful storytelling. It would be stupid to just forget about her, because Sanskaar's journey in this show started from his revenge, and it defined who he has become. Swara's Sanksaar is a totally different one to Kavita's, and he would not have connected to Swara had it not been for the pain they have both suffered.

Originally posted by: piccola1

A completely unique take on the serial, 👏Medha, loved it ! You have captured, so eloquently, the pain of somebody who loves someone, watching that loved one give up on life..and then the springing hope that it CAN all come right !

I wouldnt have thought of a ghost story (literally !😉), becoming a part of my list of romantic favorites..but this one qualifies for its sheer poetry of thought...especially the last bit where she refers to "ruffling" his hair...

With any other ghost it would have given me the shivers! In this case, I can only imagine a tousle headed Sanskar, waking up to his beautiful Swara and a glorious new morning. blessed by the whispers of his true wellwisher ! Umm Lovely 😳

Looking forward to more !!

Pic.

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Medhaaa 🤗 OMG- you've done it with this one!! It so called to me on so many levels- am overcome with it. I love pieces like this- the writer in me rejoices when i read something that transcends drama- this for me did that. The concept is incredible- I so think the show has so far failed to grapple with Kavita. I also find it somewhat unnatural that SwaSan were not shown discussing her during their friendship phase- Sanskaar had opened up his heart about her to Swara so it would have been natural to. Here, the idea of Kavita as a benevolent spirit wanting him to move on and actually showering her blessings on them is so poignant. You said to me recently that you like to read people express emotions well and in detail- you nailed this here, even if it isn't a long part. In return, I love your gift of expressing concisely but with incredible punch and depth. So many fantastic lines to choose from but i am choosing this one as just one example of beautiful prose:

"She will make you breathe with freedom again. And you will make her fly in pleasure."

Oh and calling him Sunny was perfect both for what it symbolises at that time in their life and just because its so cute 😳.

Lovely ⭐️

Originally posted by: dundumol96

Nice

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

thank you so much jazz.(hope the name is cool with ya)😉

i did not want a horror story...but rather a story where an angel watches over you.😊 you got it. thanks.

Originally posted by: Lifez_Beautiful

OK by now I may sound like a broken record Medha, but I really love the way u write dear... Esp angst... And my brain craves angst at night, dunno why but feels satisfying to read something in that genre, esp open-ended stuff and going to sleep thinking of the 'what ifs'... This fits in that category perfectly...

And I guess I will remember this line for a long time...

"you who mattered and to whom i mattered..."