SwaSan TS 'Dil De Diya Hai' (last part pag 11) - Page 8

awesome nd emotional update dear
heart touching
swara is alive
eagerly waitng for next update
update soon
thanxx for the pm
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First of all sorry for the delay guys. I have been a bit busy but finally got the time to post it 😊

3rd and last part 😊

Swara slowly opens her eyes, she is still weak.
The first person she notices in the room is of course Sanskar .
'San.. Sanskar tum yahan?' were the first words she pronounced, or better say she tried .
She was not able to remember anything. She was just sitting in the bus when suddenly a truck came at a high speed in front of them and then.. blank.

Her head was hurting. She had an major injury on her head, and she lost lots of blood. But fortunately nothing broken.
Doctor said that he would have be able to take her at home after atleast a week.
'A week doctor? I can't stay here for a week. What am i going to do in this 7 days? Few days are enough, then i can go home, and there Mom Badi maa, Ragini, bhabhi and everyone else can take care of me right?'
'And i'm there as well' said Sanskar.
Was she ignoring him? Why didn't she mention him? Was she still angry?
He moved near her bed 'Swara i..'
'Doctor i need rest. I want to stay alone' and avoided looking into his eyes.
'Swara?'
She rested her head on the pillow and closed her eyes.
Sanskar went near her and noticed that she was crying. 'Did he do anything wrong now?' he asked himself allarmed.
'Swara? Are you fine?' asked her going near her.
'Ohh, my fault. I'm stupid, she was not conscious before so she doesn't know about my feelings for her' he sat near her on a stool and held her delicate hand in his.
'Swara. I want to say something. I'm really sorry, it's all my fault and..' but is interrupted by Swara.
'Sanskar you don't have to say anything. I know everything. I mean, i heard everything while i was not in my senses.. But..'
'But what?' he asked allarmed.
'I love you more Sanskar' she said smiling at him.
He felt relieved. He held her hand tightly and gently placed a kiss on it.
Doctor came inside. 'Mr Maheshwari you can take her home after a few days. She is still quite weak and she will need lots of vitamines. In the meanwhile can you please get those medecines?'

After a week:
Swara was finally discharged from the hospital. She was feeling quite well now.
She was sitting in her room, looking at her and Sanskar's pic. She took it and gently caressed it. She got teary eyes. Finally she got all the happiness in the world. She couldn't have asked more from life.
Finally she was officially Mrs Sanskar Maheshwari. Finally Sanskar accepted her as his wife, finally he confessed that he loves her. They say the couples that are meant to be are the ones who go through everything that's designed to tear them apart and come out even stronger.
Many difficulties came in their life, but they survived ❤️
Sanskar entered the room and saw her sitting on the bed with their pic in her hands.
He slowly reached her and covered her eyes.
'Kon hai?' she asked, a bit afraid
'Shhh, mein hoon' he whispered in her ear.
'Sanskar kya kar rahe ho? Aankhein kyun band ki?'
'Btata hoon' and took her along with him in the garden.
It is night. The wind dies down and a newly-minted moon appears, drenching shady glades with silver light.
Flowers were smelling like a bowl of sun warmed ripened fruit.
She slowly opened her eyes and found Sanskar bent on his knees in front of her.
She was surprised, he took out a diamond ring from his pocket.
'Swara, i know we are already married, but only last week the fear of losing you forever made me realize how much you mean to me.
Swara i promise to stick stick by you through tough times. Anyone can stand by you in sunny days but the real test is when someone hold the umbrella over you during the stormy days.
I promise i will never change, i will always stay the same, for you.
We will any 'bridges' in our life together.
If you are alone, i'll be your shadow, if you want to cry i'll be your shoulder, if you are not happy i'll be your smile.
I will not tell you what your feelings are; they belong to you. I will trust with my feelings.
My heart will be your shelter and my arms will be your home.
I love you Swara '
Tears slowly flooded from her eyes.
They were tears of joy, she was crying with sheer happiness and relief.
Love, what a powerful feeling it is! Love is an inconditional commitment to a person; to love somebody is not just a strong feeling. It is a decision, a judgement, a promise.
Love is honesty and trust. Love is helping each other. Love is respect. Love is the connection of two hearts.

So this is the last part. Thanks to all for reading it 😳

Preet,🤗,





Love..

Hey preet

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

Preet,🤗,

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Beautiful last part...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">and you really were very late😡.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Swara and Sanskaar got together...</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">at one point, I was like, oh dear..iska bhi memory loss toh nahi ho gaya</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">and then she said..that I heard everything while I was unconscious⭐️.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">The ending was beautiful...and yes, he does not want to lose her again.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I felt that you hurried a bit while writing this part..am I right?</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Because most of the time, I find a lot more steadiness and peace in your write ups. It was no less beautiful for that...but you are way better than this. Maybe you should have made it a four part..and explored it more...just saying..because I'm a fan of urs...and I love your STEADINESS as I call it.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">I'm just being truthful...pretty please don't be offended.I certainly cannot hope to lecture a writer like you.👏</font>

Thank you Medha 🤗
I know i was very late and i'm very sorry for that
And about the part that it seemed a bit rushed, ehm yup you are right.
I didn't have lots of ideas, normally i work a lot on my OS and stories but this time i didn't a lot.
I will definetely consider your idea of a 4th part maybe. Still have no clue how to continue it, if you have any idea please do share it 😳
And don't worry i won't get offended, infact i'm glad you noticed and point out this.
And thank you once again for the lovely words 😳

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Hey preet

That was simple yet so beautiful

I really loved the sweet n simple confession nothing OTT n OTT is not even sansku's type

He is a simple guy so loved his simple n sweet sa confession

Do write more

Thank you so much Sona 😳

Originally posted by: -Prithi-

it was so emotional

Thank you for liking it Prithi 😳

Nice update !!!

Beautiful ending...

Aww..