SwaSan TS 'Dil De Diya Hai' (last part pag 11)

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Sana

@Forum.Maniac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Preet beautiful ending!

Loved the way Sanskaar proposed 😭

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ZAINAB

@Miss-swasan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

YOUR SUCH A GREAT WRITER PREET

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

nice and cute ending...thnks 4 pm

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Very sweet and almost poetic ending to the series, Preet! 😊

I just loved these lines ""Anyone can stand by you in sunny days but the real test is when someone hold the umbrella over you during the stormy days.
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If you are alone, i'll be your shadow, if you want to cry i'll be your shoulder, if you are not happy i'll be your smile.
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My heart will be your shelter and my arms will be your home."""

This is what Sanskaar is doing for Swara on the serial as well...Yaar when will Swara realize 😳

I am actually feeling a little frustrated with the MU/ separation being shown between SwaSan on TV, so reading works like this fills me with the necessary peace and joy to overcome that! Thanks, Preet!

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AshaJyothi

@ASHAJYOTHIII

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

awesomely written by queen :)) and too emotional dear :) but aagar queen likey toh aacha que nahi lagegi yar superb lines too

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naina

@hp_2006

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Beautiful TS Preet...🤗

I loved all the three updates😃

poor sanskaar..

he was so much broken when he heard the news😭

the way he kept consoling himself that she is not dead was gut wrenching😭

but the way he confessed his feelings to her was so heart touching❤️

and the way he proposed to her in the end☺️

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someonelikeyou-

@someonelikeyou-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

beautiful...you are turning into a really good writer

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Wow wonderful ending...

You wrote simple yet beautiful...

Do write more...

Thanks for the pm

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Oh...beautiful ending...the tears and the subtle yearning of the couple was superbly written. The whole 'reading' gives a reader a wonderful feeling. Thank you.

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Nityah

@-StarlitFire-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Its so amazing Preet...
In first part ...I felt like crying... but the ending was so sweet that it brought a smile on my face...Its so simple yet so adorably sweet story...
You're brilliant writer...will be looking forward for more of your stories...

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