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Hello friends! Delivered as promised! Here is part 2 of Chapter 3 for you! Some asked why did Sanskar have the sudden change of heart, so here is why he did! Hope you enjoy reading it!!


Chapter 3(ii) - Resurrection And The Likes

Lakhsya had an amazing day with Ragini. They sat and chatted in the caf for hours, and that was followed with catching a night show and a candle lit dinner. If life could be perfect, Lakshya was living it. As he entered home, he saw his mother sitting with his father in the living room and discussing something, they looked up when he entered and his mother smiled. "I knew you would be late today, Swara wouldn't let go of you today so easily" she laughed. Lakshya was taken aback, why did his mother assume he was with Swara when they all knew he was about to be engaged to Ragini soon! But he didn't question further, lest his mother enquired much about Swara and he had to tell her they snapped ties. He knew for a fact that his mother would not be pleased with that bit of information. Swara's upset face from the morning was flashing in his mind again, but he chose to ignore it and walked up to his bedroom. Once he freshened up, he unlocked his phone to check for updates, his phone had beeped many times while he was with Ragini. As he flicked through the missed calls, notifications and text messages, one particular text caught his attention, it was from Sharmishta aunty.

7:15PM [Lakshya beta, could you please arrange for a birthday cake for Swara on my behalf? Ever since childhood, I have always baked one for her, but due to my mother-in-laws ill health her dida and I had to come to Bhopal. She will be missing us, please make her smile - Shomi aunty]

Lakshya fell back on the bed in shock, it was Swara's birthday! Of course it was! How did he not check the date? Now he understood why she looked so gloomy today. And he? He didn't even wish her? Let alone spending the day with her! A guilt consumed Lakshya looked at the clock, he still had quarter of an hour on him, he could still make her smile. He ran down the steps and rushed out of his house leaving his parents startled. He drove down like a maniac and arranged for a cake. He wanted to get flowers too, since those were Swara's favourite, but who was to get him flower around midnight? So instead he opted for her second most favourite thing - ice cream! By the time he reached her "baari" with his cake and ice-cream, he had about fifteen minutes on him. He stood outside her door and breathed heavily once, and decided in his head, Swags and Sanskar got along or not, he was done being cold with her, he was going to hug her tight and get back to being the best pals they were. He then rang the doorbell, already feeling the thrill.

He waited patiently for some time, but no one opened the door. He saw that he had seven more minutes on him, he impatiently rang the bell a few more times, and yet there was no response. Swara wasn't home, he wondered as he turned back in surprise, where could she possibly be at this hour? Maybe she was with Parineeti di? Hadn't Adarsh bhaiya told him, his fianc and Swara were good friends now? He knew it was too late in the night to call his would-be bhabi, but he still did, and was surprised when she said she hadn't seen her after college. He walked in the quadrangle of the baari impatiently. It was way past midnight now, where was Swags? He was debating between calling Shomi aunty and waiting till morning, when the main gate of the baari creaked open. Lucky looked up in surprise to see a blissfully cheerful Swara walking in, after wishing a goodnight to someone outside the gate - gone was her gloom, she was smiling like she didn't ever miss him at all. Something inside Lucky burned, and he had an urge to run out and see who the person was, but he didn't, he was too busy gauging Swags.

As Swara entered the quadrangle, she looked up and her eyes met Lucky's, she stopped surprised. What was Lucky doing here? "Lucky?" she called out uncertainly. And Lakshya instinctively took a step towards her, and it was as if unconsciously she took a step back, and seeing her action, something inside Lakshya snapped. He was pained. "Had come to wish you. Happy Birthday Swags" he said, but as hard as he tried he couldn't smile. She looked at him for a moment before replying, her face not giving away anything that was going on inside her head. "It's not my birthday Lucky. Not anymore" she replied shortly, and she turned to walk towards her door. "Well I had come when there was still time, you weren't around" Lucky managed to choke out in supressed irritation, the mere memory of Swags's goodnight to her friend irked him. "Yes I was with a friend and he insisted that I didn't stay alone even for a minute on my birthday, hence he dropped me home after midnight" she replied while unlocking her door. "Him" thought Lucky savagely, and seeing Swags's indifference and coldness towards him, he thought maybe he needed to reconsider about reviving their friendship. So not waiting further, the moment Swara opened the door, he walked inside her house and dropped the cake and ice-cream on her table and was about to leave when she spoke, "What's all these Lucky?" she sounded both hurt and surprised. A part of Lucky wanted to turn back and answer, but then her indifference stung so bad that he decided against it. "Cake and Ice-cream from your mother" he replied shortly. She laughed, but it wasn't her warm happy laugh, it was a mocking cold one, "Oh so Ma reminded you" she said. He shut his eyes in anger, irritation, anguish and maybe even jealousy, and said "Yes" - and then he dashed out.

***

Sanskar was sitting in the classroom and smiling to himself. Last night he had done things he hadn't done in a long time. What started as a simple drive to drop her home, ended with much more, it ended with her friendship. He hadn't felt bad for her when she had left their group, but he had noticed her many a times after she left, he had expected her to fight for her friend, because whatever happened was unfair, but Swara didn't, she distanced herself from Lucky and never impeached again, he saw that she had changed, she was quieter and smiled less often, her changes were subtle and very gradual, hence people hardly noticed, even Lucky didn't. But he knew these changes by heart, he had gone through them himself, after his Kavita had left him. So with each passing day, he was finding it difficult to hold anything against her, but he kept quiet. But yesterday when he saw her so upset, something tugged at his heart, he saw his own reflection from the past in her, she was silently crumpling. He felt pitiful towards her, but didn't initiate a step - then he saw the ID card and saw that it was her birthday, what a coincidence it was, yesterday was Kavita's birthday too! He had decided that though they couldn't be friends, he would be compassionate of her trouble at least, and with this notion in mind, he had gone to drop her home, but the incident at the tea stall seemed to challenge his resolution and before they knew it they had become friends - he liked the time they spent together - they had their chai, and then he had decided to not let her be alone until her birthday was over, who knew maybe he didn't want to stay alone until Kavita's birthday was over, lest he wallowed back in the same pain? So he had asked her to show him around places in her city instead - drenched in the rain, they had driven to Victoria Memorial, stood awestruck before the brightly lit Howrah Bridge, they went near Princep Ghat and stood by the Ganges and chatted until midnight - time seemed to fly with Swara he thought.

"What's with the goofy smile Sanskar? Am I missing out on some news?" drawled Ragini's teasing voice as Sanskar jerked back to reality. He looked up at Ragini and laughed at her sly smile. "Got nothing better to do all morning? Where is your Lakshya?" he enquired. "He seems to be in a bad mood, see his is brooding there" she said, pointing at him sitting a few rows ahead. "Why?" asked Sanskar surprised. "Don't know" Ragini replied unconcerned. While they were talking, their eyes fell on Swara, as she entered the classroom and without a pause, headed straight towards Lakshya. Both were surprised.

When Lucky felt a palm on her shoulder, he looked up reluctantly expecting Ragini, but was surprised to find Swara instead. He looked at her uncertainly. "I am done being mad at you Lucky." She said simply. Lucky looked at her puzzled, "I know mom reminded you, but she couldn't have told you to get blueberry cheesecake nah? Who knows that's my favourite?? YOU! And Mint-Chili ice-cream? Which freak on this planet likes it other than me? And who knows it? YOU. Those were your gift too" she finished with misty eyes. And then he smiled, the brightest smile he smiled in ages and he knew he didn't need to say anything, they were back, Lucky and Swags! He got up and gave her a bone crushing hug, to which she reciprocated

Sanskar smiled seeing them back, and Ragini felt outraged - so her trouble was back again! In a few minutes Lucky was seen coming towards them holding Swara's hand grinning from ear to ear. He stopped short in front of Ragini and spoke, "Ragini! We are back!!" Ragini tried smiling and then his eyes fell on Sanskar standing next to Ragini and smiling, Lakshya's smile froze; the reason for their fallout was still there, how would he be able to tell Sanskar off? They had become good friends now! He looked at Swara uncertainly and then at Sanskar - Swara just smiled and looked at him reassuringly and spoke to Sanskar, "Thank you once again for last night Sanskar! Guess now we can finally be a group" Sanskar smiled widely at that and nodded as their exchange left Lakshya and Ragini surprised

"Last night" Ragini repeated mildly looking between Sanskar and Swara, and Laksya spoke too, "So it was you? But you?" he repeated and looked at Swara in confusion. Sanskar replied on her behalf, "Does it matter guys? We both have learnt to tolerate each other now letd say!" he said smiling, and Swara smiled back at him. Though Lucky didn't have a good feeling, but he still smiled half-heartedly, at least he and Swags could be together now.

What was in that Swara, thought Ragini savagely as she noticed her Lakshya's eyes were not leaving his best friend, how did she always come back in her life when she successfully keeps her away for long enough to relax in peace. Something had to be done, she thought.

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#32
Amazing !!!
So ragini has grey shade 😲
Do update next part soon 😛
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even in this ragini is evil. she dont want laksh and swara together. Hate her. But laksh has little bit jealous as swara became friends with sanskar. Anyway finally swasan became friends😃
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Hey dear...

I have read all ur stories on KKB forum...

Loved them...

Nice story ...

Awesome updates...

Although I wanted a loud agrressive Confrontation from Swara's side making Laksh realise his mistake of ignoring his bestie...

This one is good...

Do cont soon...
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Do expose Rags if she does anything against Swara...
N plz let Laksh n Sanskar support Swara...

Rags is insecure BT she should understand
As Sanskar is her bestie so is Swara for Lucky...

She should respect their friendship ...

Welcome to the forum...
I m late but its better late than never ...😉


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Originally posted by: gayu6

even in this ragini is evil. she dont want laksh and swara together. Hate her. But laksh has little bit jealous as swara became friends with sanskar. Anyway finally swasan became friends😃



Ragini isn't evil yaar. She is just very obsessive and insecure in nature, that compels her to do things that aren't by the books. But as they say, all is fair in love and war!!!

In my fiction, no one is really evil
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Its a very beautiful n refreshing ff...loving all the characters including obsessive compulsive ragini...blueberry cheescake is my favourite too!
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So finally Swara and Sanskar became friends 😉
Would love to see how their story progresses 😳
Hmm Ragini seems a bit insecure with Swara around Lucky 😕
Very nice and beautifully written 👏
Update soon 😊
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read all the parts..
its awesome and mind blowing story..
loved it..
continue soon..
please pm me...
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Hope ragini will understand the friendship of swara and laksh...
Btw nice update...
Loved it...
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Hello lovelies! Apologies for the late update!! New joinees at work (Goddd they need so much training and have so many silly doubts!!) so as you guessed real life interventions stopped me from updating sooner!!
But here the next chapter for you and as compensation for delaying this is a slightly longer chapter :)
Happy reading!! And please don't forget to comment and tell me how you felt about the chapter!
Love,
Aafrah


Chapter 4 - Little Things That Make You

Swags was sitting with Lucky and strumming her guitar in the canteen, she had made a new tune and was playing it for Lucky, as Ragini sat there with pure malice in her heart. How much ever she tried she could never get along with this Swara, she seemed to understand her Lakhsya effortlessly, small things about Lakshya that Ragini needed to find out, Swara just knew, it came to her naturally, she just knew Lakshya, and that's what made Ragini uncomfortable. As she sat there between the friends and pretended to listen to her music and waited for Swara to leave, Swara kept fine-tuning her tune till she perfected it and once more played before Lakshya. "How's this new one Lucky?" she asked triumphantly. Lucky stuck out his tongue and replied in disapproval, "Swags you've lost your touch! It's too soft!" he spoke, carefully hiding his laughter, he was only taking her case. Swara's lips puckered, she had lost her touch? Her music wasn't good anymore? But she thought this was the best she ever made. Her head drooped in disappointment and Lucky realized he should clear the air, but before he spoke, Sanskar came down towards them. "Was that really you playing Swags?" he asked in awe. Lucky looked up at him in irritation, did he just call her "Swags"? He couldn't call her that, that nickname was patented by him! He looked at Swags in disapproval, but she was busy talking about her composition with Sanskar and didn't notice him at all. Lucky wondered what was more difficult, accommodating two rivals in the same group, or handling two newly formed BFF's in one group. Even though he couldn't place it, Swags and Sanskar's friendship bothered him. He glanced at Ragini and saw her looking at the pair with mild interest and a small smile in her face. He knew what she was thinking, but of course she was wrong! Swags and Sanskar were just friends, and nothing more. Right?

***

Lucky and Ragini were waiting at the multiplex for twenty minutes now. But there was no sign of Swags and neither Sanskar. Lucky called her impatiently, but her phone was unreachable. He huffed in irritation, what was taking Swags so long, he wondered aloud. "Call up Sanskar and ask nah!" piped Ragini from beside him. "Ragini Sanskar will come when he wants to, I am concerned about Swags"he replied back. Ragini rolled her eyes, "I meant if Swara's phone isn't reachable, then call up Sanskar and ask about her nah, he will know" - her question was innocent but it struck a chord with Lakshya, and he lashed out at her, "Yaar Ragini stop suggesting silly things, use your common sense how the hell will Sanskar know?" the moment these words escaped his mouth, he already regretted it. The big black orb of Ragini's eyes filled with tears. Lakshya gently held her shoulder and looked at her apologetically. Ragini spoke again in a shaky voice, "Lakshya I was only try to calm you. And don't you notice how these two are always together? Don't you see whats brewing Lakshya?" she asked hurt, Lucky only sighed, and before he could respond his eyes fell on two figures walking towards them from the entrance, it was Sanskar and Swara, they were laughing and Sanskar had an arm over her shoulder. Lucky looked at Ragini, she had seen them too by now, and had a "see I told you" look on her face that he detested.

***

Sanskar was sitting in the classroom, Lucky and Ragini were sitting in the row ahead of him. He kept darting impatient glances at the door, Lakshya noticed this and enquired casually, "What is it bro?", but Sanskar didn't answer and nervously glanced at Ragini, who looked quite excited about something. "Bro, what is up with you and Ragini?"he enquired again, and this time Sanskar sighed in answer, "Dude, I am in love". All air seemed to gush out of Lucky's lungs for no reason as he guessed the obvious, but still gave himself the benefit of doubt. "Aah, who is it?" he asked nonchalantly and to his surprise Ragini giggled, he looked at her annoyed and enquired, and she replied smiling, "Isn't it obvious Lakshya, that Sanskar loves Swara? They are always together, and they look so cute together!! And today, after a little bit of convincing by me, he has agreed to ask her out!" she said in all smiles! Lucky stared at them, now both grinning, but he didn't feel happy at all, he was just very irked at the news and was hell sure that Swags would reject him - she had to!

***

Swara was sitting in the caf with Sanskar, he looked a little nervous, and this seemed funny to Swara, she had never seen his confidence falter, then how did it falter now? She looked up at him questioningly with a friendly smiles, he looked distracted. "Sanskar, you know you can tell me anything right? What is bothering you?" she asked. Sanskar looked up at her, as if broken from some trance. He looked unsure and he mumbled, "Just a second Swara let me gather my thoughts" Swara nodded in understanding and sat. Her thoughts darted back to her birthday, the night she had befriended him. They had come a long way since then, they started of as enemies, then became, cordial, then friends and a few months down the line, now they were best friends. Somewhere Swaara felt guilty that maybe today Sanskar was a closer friend than Lucky. With Sanskar as a friend, she never missed Lucky, she never noticed anymore that Lucky wasn't spending time with her, or spending more time with Ragini - honestly she didn't care anymore, she knew Lucky loved Ragini and she loved him and they were happy, and she was happy for them. She would purposely stay away from them sometime and give them privacy, she would even ask Sanskar to leave them alone for a while, and usually in these times they would hang out - Swara would have so much fun with him, she realized Sanskar had a hard shell outside and was a kid inside, for people who broke his outer shell, he was a delight to be with. Swara even knew about Kavita now. Of course Ragini knew too, but Lucky had no clue, Swara had seen the depth of passion he held for Kavita, and had almost longed to see a similar passion in his eyes for her - yes, truth was Swara didn't realize when, but she had started to fall for Sanskar, maybe that's why what Lucky did or felt, didn't bother her as much any longer. True Lucky was still very important in her life, but maybe not as much as Sanskar she thought with a smile and looked at the tensed form of Sankar sitting upright and peering at her anxiously. Had it been any other man in his place, Swara would have understood he was about to propose to her, but Sanskar loved Kavita, she thought and sighed.

Sanskar looked up to see Swara lost in thoughts, he momentarily forgot his goal and stared at her mesmerising face, he had realized ever since he spent time with Swara, Kavita was becoming a distant memory slowly, he was slowly losing clarity on his memories of her, and he predominantly held onto Swara. He sighed, and spoke.

"Swara, when Kavita left me, I thought my soul had left my body. I was alive all the while but I wasn't living, I was living for my family, for my mother and my father but I didn't care if I dropped dead anytime, I had no reason to live one day longer. But that changed."Sanskar looked up at Swara and smiled seeing her uncertain expression before continuing, "Things changed when I befriended you on your birthday, I had a purpose now, to keep you from being upset over losing Lakshya's friendship, a purpose to fill in that gap, a purpose to be around you for your sake, because probably I was the only one who knew how hurtful it is to let go of someone close, but Swara something happned in the process, something I didn't foresee or thought would happen, but it did." Said Sanskar in a voice thick with emotions.

"Wat happened Sanskar" she asked, her voice was slightly shaking. Sanskar laughed good naturedly, and responded, "Love happened Swara, it happened again, and this time with greater force - with you!"

Swara just stared at him in delusional shock, as he stared back at her with gentle and loving eyes.

***

Lucky was sitting in the college canteen with Ragini, and he was extremely jittery, Ragini on the other hand was sitting there with baited breath, today could make or break her game. A phone rang, and both Ragini and Lakshya jerked back to present, it was Ragini's phone ringing and the caller ID flashed Sanskar name. Ragini looked at Lakshya with excitement and answered the call, Lakshya waited holding his breathe. Ragini hung up after a while and looked at him with a poker face, Lakshya was getting more agitated by the minute, and then Ragini's face flashed into a brilliant smile! "Swara has said yes!! I knew it!!!" she exclaimed in happiness and hugged Lakshya, but he had frozen, Swags had said yes to Sanskar? How could she? Didn't she hate him? Something was so not right in his life right now, Lucky could feel it, only if he could point out how.

***

Swara and Sanskar had come to her "baari", it had been sometime that they were seeing each other, Swara wanted to introduce him to her dida and mother. When her mother met Sanskar, she instantly like the young boy who seemed to really care for her daughter. Dida however scowled at him from the kitchen, he was a Marwaran after all, he couldn't be trusted! But what could she do? Shomi had taught her to not be judgemental in front of Sanskar, since Swara was happy with him. Dida sighed. First Lucky now Sanskar, whatever happened to Bengali boys from noble Bengali families she sighed. She was about to leave the kitchen and head towards the living room when she saw Sanskar enter the kitchen, she looked at him surprised. "Dida, Swara tells me you like to eat mutton?" he enquired jovially. Dida smiled, "Mutton, as in goat!! You will faint even thinking about it!!" she replied with a sarcastic smile. Sanskar laughed, "Yes dida I know, we also have a famous Rajasthani , mutton preparation called Lal Maas. Have you tried?" he asked her. Dida, being a typical Bengali, got excited hearing non-vegetarian food talk and exclaimed, "Yes yes heard about it! But never had! You don't get it in Kolkata nah!" she sighed. "Don't worry dida, next time I go to Jaipur, I will get some packed for you!" he smiled. Dida looked at him surprised, "But that is non-veg! how will you??" she asked. "Dida we don't eat non-veg, what's the harm in carrying? And if it makes my Swara's dida happy, I don't know why I shouldn't?" he replied with a smile. Dida stared at the boy, he really loved her Swara, Shomi was right! He smiled a little and offered him the plate of roshogollas she was carrying to the living room. He smiled and was about to pick one, when dida stopped him. By then Swara and Shomi had come to the kitchen too! Dida took the plate back to the fridge and unwrapped another earthen pot and picked bigger roshogollas. She came back and said, "These bigger and better roshogollas are usually reserved for Bengali guests and family, eat these!" Sanskar laughed in surprise and ate. Swara asked in a teasing voice, "But dida how did you give him these? He is not Bengali" Dida smiled and gently held Sanskar's cheek, "But he is family!" then she turned to Swara with a strict face and said, "Marwaran accepted" and they all laughed.

Swara called Lucky that night to inform him, but he wasn't picking up her calls. She was surprised, she had hardly seen Lucky in the last week. Ragini was there most of the time, but Lucky seemed busy. She wanted to meet him and give her happy news, but he wasn't ever available - today was also such a big day! She and Sanskar had gotten dida's approval, she wanted to hug him and dance and share her joy, but he was doing a bunk. She called Sanskar instead.

"Yes love?" came his voice on the second ring.

"Sanskar, do you think Lucky is purposely avoiding me? I haven't seen him whole of last week and now he isn't receiving my calls" she sounded upset. Sanskar was quiet for some time and then responded.

"Yes Swara, he is avoiding you."

"Why?" she sounded surprised.

"He is insecure of his friendship, he doesn't want to feel left out between you and me, the way you felt between him and Ragini. So I guess he is a bit jealous" said Sanskar carefully.

Swara realized he was right, after all she knew this phase more than anyone. She decided to be extra careful and sensitive towards Lucky form now on. The he thought of Sanskar, how simply he always managed to put her doubts at ease, he understood her in a way no one ever had! She spoke back on the phone.

"Sanskar?"

"Hmm?"

"I love you" she said shyly.

Sanskar sighed, and then replied, "I love you too Swara. Very much"

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