Khayali Pulao's SwaSan (Pg 31: Hot Confession part2) - Page 20

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Posted: 9 years ago

tujhe kuch specifically chiyeh for me to add in it?
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: afreenaamna


tujhe kuch specifically chiyeh for me to add in it?


Kuch bhi chalega 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome one afreen...
But this not fair to stop at middle. ...and giving only precap...
Making me go crazy...
Plz update soon...
Waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
I don't know how it will come out.
I just wrote it because I wanted to see something like this...Hope you all will like it..., P1,


Sanskaar Maheshwari quickly steps out of his office and hurries to reach home.A smile spreads across his face.After all it was his wife's concert that would be airing in just half an hour.
Remembering the time he speeds up and just in the nick of time reaches home.
Sujata welcomes him and take his jacket.Then she says to him "Mari Bahu Swara ka aaj concert hai.Chori kitni famoush hai pure world main".
"Maa wo abhi world famous nahi hui.Bas India ko apne jaadu main ghair lia hai", Sanskaar says and sits on the sofa and switches on the TV.
He wonders why his Mom was speaking so loudly and the he sees Badi Maa and Ragini standing near the dinning table.
He smirks 'Mom you will never change'.
Then enters Durga Prasad with the rest of the family.He asks Sanskaar about Swara's Show and all of the family members take their seats and stares at the screen waiting for Swara to appear.
Then suddenly Sanskaar's breath catches as the host calls up "Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari" on stage with resounding applaus and cheers from thousands of audience.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

Wow awesome one afreen...

But this not fair to stop at middle. ...and giving only precap...
Making me go crazy...
Plz update soon...
Waiting...


thanks for reading..
what can i do yaar..main badi thakeli writer hoon 😆 I like making stories but writting it down is not my thing..
afreenaamna thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shanaia: that was such a sweet khayali pulao..i hope we get a scene like that..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: afreenaamna

Shanaia: that was such a sweet khayali pulao..i hope we get a scene like that..



Thanks...I'll just be posting the second part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shanaia that was so sweet 😳
Lol Sujata is too good 🤣 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
P2 Sanskaar thought again what he did to deserve such angelic beauty as Swara appeared on the stage wearing an offwhite floor-length gown the black elegant embroidery at the borders.She had a floral tiara on her head.Her long hair were open with some natural wavy locks swaying genly as she took graceful steps towards the middle of stage. Though Sanskaar never pressured Swara to remain in the relation, she persisted that she would never break such a sacred bond.They lived like the bestest of best friends.Understanding eachother without even speaking.And for Sanskaar, it was more than enough. Swara proclaimed enthusiastically "Hello Mumbaaaiii" And the audience went wild with joy. And Sujata cried "Je maari Bahu ki shaan" and Sanskaar chuckled. Swara then proceeded to sing many of her hit songs.Se moved like a godess, swiftly and elegantly changing positions, encouraging the audience with her melodius voice, singing with utmost energy and joy and the audience loved her more for that. Finally, it was time for the Starry Song of the evening. Swara said with a twinkle in her eye "Its for the person that I just discovered that I've fallen in love with.Hopes he is listening right now." With these words,Sanskaar went rigid.'So this was the reason she was not talking with me the whole week.Thats why she was always saying that she was busy.Has she fallen in love with someone else?" He did not even noticed the worried looks that Sujata,Ram Prasan ,Durga Prasad and the rest were directing at him.He just continued to look at Swara in complete shock and despair.
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Posted: 9 years ago
@shanaia wow tat was sweet hope like this will happen in show...
Plz do write part 3 too...
Wt a shocking end at part 2...
Plz cont soon...

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