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Ameesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

fantasticc story linee 👏👏

do write more plzz n PM me 😳

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Ammiey
fantasticc story linee 👏👏
do write more plzz n PM me 😳

Thank you for reading and your comment. 😊 Sure, will PM you for my next works.

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Ameesha

@Ammiey

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum

Thank you for reading and your comment. 😊 Sure, will PM you for my next works.

Anytime 😳 sure will be waiting 😊

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rafafan

@rafafan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Amazingly beautiful, as usual with all your writing. This is like chicken soup for the soul!
So blissfully touching to read about sanskaar n swara's future as a very happily married couple.
The way you explained sanskaar's concern for her, his extreme fear on seeing her unwell, him
being protective when the nurse comes to take her blood test! that part was too funny. I can imagine
sanskaar being this extremely protective and possessive husband.

last but not least, the way he tells her they are going to become parents was absolutely top class.
couldnt stop laughing.

Amazing!

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Originally posted by: rafafan
Amazingly beautiful, as usual with all your writing. This is like chicken soup for the soul!
So blissfully touching to read about sanskaar n swara's future as a very happily married couple.
The way you explained sanskaar's concern for her, his extreme fear on seeing her unwell, him
being protective when the nurse comes to take her blood test! that part was too funny. I can imagine
sanskaar being this extremely protective and possessive husband.

last but not least, the way he tells her they are going to become parents was absolutely top class.
couldnt stop laughing.

Amazing!

Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to comment. 😊

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asmuasmi

@asmuasmi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Omg this is so awesome..this is the first time i m reading ur story, n I absolutely loved it <3

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

@Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: Healer..
Omg this is so awesome..this is the first time i m reading ur story, n I absolutely loved it <3

Thanks so much for this lovely comment. 😊

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

I have gone and searched all your writing and am working my way through them all- i sense a very late night coming up as I won't be able to stop for sure 😃. I simply loved this- it made me feel seriously warm and fuzzy and I so love the way the post marriage romance is kept so passionate and romantic- something I wish our shows would learn to do! Oh and what names you chose for their kids- I heartily approve, especially the girl's name 😉😉.

Simply superb and I loved it Viji 👏👏👏

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11
I have gone and searched all your writing and am working my way through them all- i sense a very late night coming up as I won't be able to stop for sure 😃. I simply loved this- it made me feel seriously warm and fuzzy and I so love the way the post marriage romance is kept so passionate and romantic- something I wish our shows would learn to do! Oh and what names you chose for their kids- I heartily approve, especially the girl's name 😉😉.
Simply superb and I loved it Viji 👏👏👏

Hey Shruti...😊 Glad you liked this piece and also liked the post marriage romance being passionate and romantic. Well, this is SwaSan after all. They are going to have intense, mind blowing chemistry even when they are Grandparents yaar! 😊

Haha...yeah, that was an uncanny coincidence isn't it, me choosing Shruti as their daughter's name. I just wanted to make all 4 of them the "S" family. Plus, Shiv and Shruti sounded so apt for the Maheshwari clan. 😊