Gravity of Love [Swara-Sanskar, FF, updated pg.23] - Page 19

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: JazzyM

This update is a blockbuster...

You had everyone in with their agenda...it was good to see Laksh being physo, it really makes sense as he needs to 'lose it' to become a sane person...

Sanskaar with his insecurities of being a cripple could still think for others ... Laksh and Swara...that was awesome writing...

The emotional turmoil that is called Swara...beautiful...

Happy New Year dear...Muharam wishes...


Aww, a long comment 😳

Yes, Laksh might just need that - with a good wake-up call. It's never good the pent up emotions and refuse to see reason. He will have to learn that there's a lot more to life, like learning to let go.

Sanskar is a good soul. Right now, he is more focused on Swara and also, and Laksh, as he is his brother - but that doesn't mean that Sanskar's overcome his own demons. Maybe in the future, with a little help from the right person 😉

It's not easy to write Swara- but I like the challenge 😆 Glad I can portray her turmoil decently!

Ah, not a happy occasion for us - but I understand the sentiment 😳

Thank you!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu91

Awesome. ...

Loved it so much...


Thank you! And I am glad 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina-Zahra


Aww, a long comment 😳

Yes, Laksh might just need that - with a good wake-up call. It's never good the pent up emotions and refuse to see reason. He will have to learn that there's a lot more to life, like learning to let go.

Sanskar is a good soul. Right now, he is more focused on Swara and also, and Laksh, as he is his brother - but that doesn't mean that Sanskar's overcome his own demons. Maybe in the future, with a little help from the right person 😉

It's not easy to write Swara- but I like the challenge 😆 Glad I can portray her turmoil decently!

Ah, not a happy occasion for us - but I understand the sentiment 😳

Thank you!


Well said...

@bold....that's the tough part in everyone's lives but to put it down on paper, to describe the feeling,...that is really tough...but you were superb in doing it...loved the whole way the emotions were emoted.


Apologies for asking this...why isn't this a happy occasion? Ignore if it's intrusive...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: JazzyM



Well said...

@bold....that's the tough part in everyone's lives but to put it down on paper, to describe the feeling,...that is really tough...but you were superb in doing it...loved the whole way the emotions were emoted.


Apologies for asking this...why isn't this a happy occasion? Ignore if it's intrusive...



Thank you, dear 😳

Oh, don't worry, it's not intrusive in the least 😊 Just look at my signature to get a gist.

And to be very brief: In Muharram (10th), the blood of the holy prophet's [s] beloved grandson (who is, for Shia, considered the 3rd successor after his grandfather) was spilled alongside 72 of his faithfuls (18 family members), brutally so, and his womenfolk and children taken as captives and ripped off their veils. We say that if not for Hussain's [a] sacrifice on that day and the courage of his sister(s) and surviving son, Islam would have been lost as it was to us. Not all Muslims commemorate that event, I am aware, but many do.

If you don't mind, I'll pm you about it - as this probably doesn't belong here 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Amina-Zahra



Thank you, dear 😳

Oh, don't worry, it's not intrusive in the least 😊 Just look at my signature to get a gist.

And to be very brief: In Muharram (10th), the blood of the holy prophet's [s] beloved grandson (who is, for Shia, considered the 3rd successor after his grandfather) was spilled alongside 72 of his faithfuls (18 family members), brutally so, and his womenfolk and children taken as captives and ripped off their veils. We say that if not for Hussain's [a] sacrifice on that day and the courage of his sister(s) and surviving son, Islam would have been lost as it was to us. Not all Muslims commemorate that event, I am aware, but many do.

If you don't mind, I'll pm you about it - as this probably doesn't belong here 😳


Thank you for the explanation. I didn't know...From where I reside, Muharram is considered a religious day and also some sort of new year..hence my wishes...

Please do PM me when you have the time..
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Posted: 9 years ago
No problem, dear 😊 Religiously seen, it is a very important month, indeed. Has been regarded as sacred even before Islam came - hence, why it is even more horrible that 'Muslims' breached this sanctity in such a abhorrent way 😔

PM sent.

Enough of being OT 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Sanskar and Swara has same vision of future if swara choose to marry Sanskar. reading their actions, one thing is sure that their relation will not end, they may live separately for the time being but in the end will come together.
Can't wait to read more, especially Laksh stupid plan.
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Posted: 9 years ago
All the emotions are so beautifully portrayed. Love FF
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent update!

Your writing is such a treat!
I heart the nature of Swasan's relationship. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Awesome update
Sanskar and Swara has same vision of future if swara choose to marry Sanskar. reading their actions, one thing is sure that their relation will not end, they may live separately for the time being but in the end will come together.

Can't wait to read more, especially Laksh stupid plan.


Thank you, dear 😊

You are absolutely right - their relation is unlikely to end. Whether Swara recognizes it or not, whether she wants it or nor, there is a connecten between these two that goes very deep. It's not possible to break such connections without damaging yourself in the process - let's see if she will see this as clearly as we do, at some point in the story.

And lol 😆 Laksh hasn't made himself any friends - understandably 😛

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