Second Love Swasan ss part 5 page 10

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Well First of all hello all i've been a silent reader in here but truly adoring Swasan in Swaragini soo much that i thought to write on them, am neither a good writer nor good at hindi and english but still i hope to do justice to my conceupt 😆, am truly not liking all the side roles including Ragini and lakshya so nopes i will not be giving them loads of limelight here , this Ss will go mainly on SwaSan as the second chapter begins 😃, hope this will be welcomed
Second love :Swasan Ss



He stood away from the crowd and looked at how they all mis-judged Swara and she kept on shouting her truth, he did manage to get Swara on time at the badi but not before Lakshya makes his mind to marry Ragini

"Baba trust me, i would never run from my own wedding...am not lying Ragini did it all" She tried to explain her father the truth while he stood emotionless towards her

"Enough Swara how low can you steep too" she couldn't believe her ears those words belonged to the guy she loved

"Lakshya, Just once give me a chance i will prove myself right to you don't marry ragini...you will regret this step on knowing the truth"

All Lakshya did was shaking his head in a no indicating he would not listen to her and he proceeded to Ragini pulling her to the mandap ordering the pandit ji to start the mantra

Tears flew out of her eyes making her eye sight blurry as she watched her love marrying her sister, two people she loved and trusted the most on earth betrayed her, she was about to hold when two pairs of hands held her tightly, her mom and dida.

As the Pandit ji announced the Vivah ceremony is over she felt like her life leaving her if that wasn't enough

Ragini made her steps towards Sharmishta to seek for blessing when her Father stopped her

" Stop Ragini, you dont have to ...this woman is not your mother, She is only Swara's mother ...you dont have to seek blessing from her" saying so shekar pulled his daughter away

In just a single day she lost all her precious relationship, she looked at her mother all shattered and attempted to run when someone held her wrist

"Wow uncle" he clapped ..." you said sharmishta kaki is only Swara's mom but what are you???"

Looking at her son defending Swara she quickly reached towards them pulling Sanskaar away

"You don't have anything to do in their family matters sanskaar" she pulled her arms but sanskaar refused to buldge

"No maa, i can't forget that i am at fault too for swara's misfortune today, i was anyways a stranger Swara meant nothing for me but you people, You are suppose to be her father" he pointed at Shekar ..."you din't even bother to look at Swara and the bandage on her head asking her how did she get hurt" he said attracting all's attention to Swara's bandage and Ragini stood sweating watching Saanskar affecting all with his words

"Yeah Swara how did you get hurt??!" as ragini broke away from lakshya , to swara masking her expression with concern while swara flinch away refusing to look at her

" oh my God Ragini how can you be such an expert?? you really don't know how swara got hurt???" sanskaar questioned her angrily

While dadi stepped in defending her laddoo, "she can get hurt anywhere sanskaar that doesn't change the fact because of this girl my family's reputation was at stake today, and am telling you shekar if this girl stay here i am going to kill myself" she said loudly warning all

"Dadi!! trust me i din't" she again tried to defend herself , hoping for once her owns will listen to her , Her family

"Swara i lost enough because of you, i am ashame you are my daughter...and now i can not go against my mother and keeep you in my house besides thanks to you mine and sharmishta's relationship is over at this moment" his words only showed how much he despise swara

She slipped down the floor livelessly, she was always strong but at that time it was like all her strength drained away, she could clearly see how difficultly her mother controlled her own pains and tried to handle hers

Sanskaar stood emotionless towards those people all he could see was swaras tears, it was clear to him no one cared for her they all left swara dida and sharmishta crying and continued with the bidaai ceremony , in such a situation he made a decision, he wasn't sure it was the right one but still he decided to go for it

"Wait!! wait lakshya bade papa , ma mom please wait i made a decision! dunno about you people agreeing to it or not and to be honest right now its not my least concern but i wish you people here listen to it so that later you don't say i betrayed or played with your feelings"

"Sanskaar don't test my patience" durgaprasad shouted, "you dont have to create any scene here we can talk about it at home" his voiced scared all except sanskaar

"No now that all are happening here let this too, you always say that you are full of principle and justice right? then i want justice today, you always say you treated me and lakshya equally right so i want equality today!!" he was confusing all with his words

"you want to cheat all once again???" lakshya taunted looking at him with full of hatred

"no lakshya, you already got the biggest cheat in your life forever, i will not add to it dont worry" he answered with equal sarcasm, " so tell me bade papa will you prove to the world you ain't bias towards your own blood, that me and lakshya are both same in your eyes" he questioned demanding for his rights

" Yes i will, this is Durgaprasad Maheswari's word"
Sanskaar smiled as his words echoed through the badi

He walked towards Swara pulling her up while lakshya made a fist looking at their closeness ,"Swara i know whatever is happening to you is somehow because of me, i know i can't back in the past and change whatever i did but i can help you for your future, i want you to give you what you truly deserve Swara, beautiful life, i don't deserve a girl like you for you are too good for me , but right now i see nothing i can do other than asking your hands, Will you Marry me??" He said with all's eyes stuck at them
She blinked her eyes thinking if she heard it all right
"Sanskaar!" she whispered looking at him unbelievably

"Yes Swara, don't think it to be a burden or think am doing it out of pity , i am not Swara , the last decision will be always yours!" he looked at Sharmishta asking for a nod through his eyes and was glad to find trust in there

"Swara i want you to go for it shona" dida broke her silence patting swara's head

"Sanskaar!!!!" durgaprasad screamed

"What happened bade papa???? Din't you say you will prove to the world me and lakshya are same to you? then what now?? When lakshya wanted to marry swara you agreed to everything now that i want to marry her it's a no????"
He watched Durgaprasad leaving the badi angrily without a word back followed by the rest except lakshya ragini and sujata

"Sanskaar what are you doing?????"
"Mom , am doing what's right, now if you want your son you will stay here and participate in my wedding or else you are free to leave too" he said shocking his mother

"wah!!! Seriously speaking i saw this coming a cheating proposing another cheater in marriage!" Lakshya said laughing at them

"Though cheater Lakshya Atleast he realized whats right or wrong!! what about you??? huh, where was your claimed love for me when you were marrying ragini burying my every justification down Ragini's fakeness" She din't know how but she felt her strength coming back ,maybe Sanskaar's support worked like magic for her

"Shut up Swara, you're talking about my wife!" he pulled Ragini closer to him
"Yeah!! Wife! so it be , now stay on this line and you ragini thanks you saved my life you showed me Lakshya actually never loved me had he did , he would have showed some trust but no he din't, From now i hold nl relationship with you two" saying so she turned towards her mother, "Maa i am sorry because of me baba said soo much to you! but i promise maa one or another day i will surely bring the truth out and you will be proud of me" She cried hugging her mother

"i am already proud of you shona" she whispered caressing her hairs, "Shona sanskaar is a great guy i am sure he will take good care of you!" she cupped her daughters cheeks kissing her forehead while swara nodded

She stood infront of Sanskar wiping her tears, "Sanskaar i got enough betrayals in my life , and now i can't afford for more...i will marry you yes at a condition, you promise me you will never leave me!" She said bringing her palm up

Sharmishta and dida smiled through their tears as Sanskaar place his palm in swara's one promising her he would never leave her and they both sat in the mandap


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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX:

Part 1:- Page1
Part 2:- Page 2
Part 3:-Page 5
Part 4:-Page 7
Part 5:-Page 10
Edited by Aashi_Shona - 9 years ago
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Nice start .continue soon.love it.
I was thinking why don't swara tell lakshay that he doesn't loved her enough in the serial.

And mostly how dare he mock swara.
He say that he loved swara, but he doesn't not trust her.

Yeh kesse love hai uskaa.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This was awesome..
loved it..

Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really good story yar continue it soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome Start...😊
Continue soon yar...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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U start it so well...
Loved the way how sanskar took decision...
Hw mean the family members are...swara also accepted...
Loved it...
Do cont soon...
Do pm me wen u update next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I reaaly hoped this would had happen in the serial..
I would led to a tight slap on lakysha face..
I just hate him and his so called wife..
sorry no offence to both lakysha and ragini!!
awww!!!
Swara loved to dear...
i loved the promise swara asks to sanskar..
Tust and faith can give to all the strength to fight if there are ur own people against u even if there is 1 person to support u...
somi and dida loved u...👍🏼
very nicely written👏
update soon...
plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great start..continue soon...swasan wedding <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
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AWW am blooming with excitement right now i din't know this will be received positively by you guys thank you sooo much guys 🤗

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