SwaSan TS: Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena (Updated Pt2 on Pg6) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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do continue yar..would love to read it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It sounds interesting..
plz continue 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: princessSonia

Hey Asha

Awesome plot...👍🏼

Would really love to see what happens...

Do cont soon...
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Yeh bhi koi puchne wali baat hui..of course we want you to post it soon..

Sure yar... ll post in a while...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vishi-

It sounds interesting..
plz continue 😳

Sure yar...😊
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Originally posted by: NabilaIslam

Sounds amazing

Update soon ...

Sure ll update in a while...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -damon-

do continue yar..would love to read it!

Sure yar... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note: Pls ignore if any mistakes. Thought to complete in one part but not possible... One more part is there which ll be updated tomorrow...


PART 1:

Sanskaar is trying continuously to Swara mobile but it's going unanswered. He is driving as fast as he can so that he can reach to the shop where Swara went to repair her guitar.

Finally he reached and saw her coming out of the shop he felt relieved and got down from the car to go to Swara who is on other side suddenly he saw a speeding truck approaching towards Swara

"Swara" yelled Sanskaar and ran like a crazy man before Swara could understand what's happening truck hit her and she was lying there with no movement in a pool of her blood

They say generally a person's life will flash infront of his eyes when they are going to die. But for Sanskaar it's entirely different he is not going to die and it's not his life that flashed infront of his eyes. But all the happy, sad moments and even fights flashed infront from the day they met.

For a second he felt as if his heartbeat is stopped and lungs were not taking in air. After truck hitting her how did he reach her? He don't know he ran like crazy across the street where she was lying in pool of blood with no movement

He kneeled down next to her and his hand which was shaking felt her pulse. It's like as if finally he is breathing. He whispered "Swara I will not let happen anything to you" by taking her in his arms

He drove the car as fast as he can in the busy streets ignoring all the traffic signals and finally reached hospital

He shouted doctor please save Swara I cannot live without her

Doctor: Don't worry will try our level best. Nurse take her to OT we need to operate immediately

Sanskaar kneels down and says I am really sorry Swara if I might have I reached one min before also u might have not been in this position. Please don't leave me.

He calls Dida and informs her about Swara accident also asks her to take Shomi and come to hospital . He Calls Sujatha and informs her as well. Ragini thinks not to go as she is feared about Sanskaar. So, she says to everyone that she will go to temple and pray for Swara.

Everyone reaches hospital as fast as they can. By seeing Sanskaar covered in blood scared them a lot. Everyone asked what happened. But Sanskaar is still in shock and speechless as he stood in front of Operation theater

Everyone thought to ask later as he is not in a state to answer

Doctor comes out only then Sanskaar comes out of his memories and asks "Doctor how is Swara?", doctor did not answer immediately once again Sanskaar asked how is she? Still doctor is hesitant.

Shomi: Pls doctor tell us how is my Shona?

Doctor: We can't say anything clearly, as of now she is in critical condition

Sanskaar felt shattered and he leaned against the wall as doctor continued we are monitoring her state. If she wakes up within 48 hours then she will be out of danger. If not we cannot do anything

Sanskaar felt as if his heartbeat is going to stop.

Adarsh: Sanskaar nothing will happen to Swara

Sanskaar without saying anything goes stands near a window and breaths deeply thinking what happened in the past few hours. A tear rolled down his cheek. What if anything happens to her? How will he live?

I cannot loose her. If anything happens to her my life will be empty and unbearable.

Finally everyone went home except Sanskaar, Shomi and Sujatha (She started liking Swara in these few months she also knows Sanskaar loves Swara)

Swara is shifted to ICU. Sanskaar went inside and sat beside her. Nurse tried to explain that there was no need for him to stay with her. But he is adamant and said "I will not go anywhere by leaving my wife" and he is not moving an inch

Nurse called doctor. Doctor said to let him be.

She had all sort of machines linked to her body and she is looking weak. He says pls wake up Swara I cannot see you like this. Lying on bed like this doesn't suit you plz wake up.

Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena

Bin Tere Tya Hai Jeena

Meri Dil Ki Rani Tum

Meri Kushiyon Ka Masusam

Mere Kwaabon Ke Tabeer

Mere Sapno Ki Tasveeer

Bin Tere Kaisi Yaaar

Woh Jeet Ho Ya Haar

Tere Sang Hai Sab Kuch...

Tu Naa Ho To Bekaar...

He stayed by her side by catching her hand and talking with her until he dozed off

Morning:

Everyone reached hospital. AP woke Sujatha and asked where Sanskaar is. She told he is with Swara.

AP went inside and saw him asleep beside Swara. She woke him up. He opened his eyes he is looking very tired. He saw Swara his eyes are welled up with tears. Just then doctor enters to examine so he goes out along with AP

AP: You three go home fresh up and come

Sanskaar: No maa they will go but I will stay here with Swara

AP: Sanskaar we all are here atleast you go home and change your dress

Sanskaar: No maa I can't go by leaving Swara

DP: Sanskaar doctors are examining Swara. You can't do anything by staying here. So, go home change and come back

Sanskaar: No Bade Papa I want to be here. I want to see her first if she wakes up. I won't leave her and go

Dida: Sanskaar plz go and come. Nothing will happen to Swara. If Swara was here she also wants you to go and come

By listening Swara wants him to go he agreed and left with Sujatha and Shomi

They reached home.

Sanskaar entered their room. He remembered all their memories from the day she entered the room.

He kneeled down in room and started crying again. After some time he wiped his tears and said nothing will happen to you Swara. We will be together again I have confidence. He got up went to take shower so that he can reach Swara soon and be by her side.

Like this two days passed but still there is no improvement in Swara's condition it's getting worse day by day.

Doctor: I m sorry Mr.Sanskaar I think your wife can't make it

Those words shocked him. It was his worst nightmare. He felt like as if world stopped. Without knowing he placed his hand on his chest to find whether his heart is beating or not.

Everyone are shocked and will be talking with Doctor to do something

But Sanskaar is in his own world and is not able to imagine his life without Swara. Tears are flowing from his eyes without his knowledge

Doctor: Please listen to me Miracles do happen but we can't keep hopes on that only. So, it will be better if you are prepared for worst scenario

Sanskaar shouts NO. Everyone turns to him

Sanskaar catches doctor collar and says you are not god to say that, "nothing will happen to MY SWARA I will not let her leave me at any cost."

Adarsh makes Sanskaar leave the collar of doctor and says sorry to doctor

Sanskaar leaves from there by saying "I will not let Swara leave me"

Sanskaar (St): He is not any god to say that. I cannot give up on my wife. She is my life, my love and everything to me.

He contacted the doctors whom he knows but everyone said same thing.

His world totally shattered. He kneeled down on road and started crying like he never did before and this pain is too much for him to bear.



Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg 😭 poor swara i hope she will be fine, and feeling so bad for Sanskar 😭 he loves Swara and doesnt want her to leave him. Awesome update Asha 👏 Can't wait to read the next part 👍🏼 ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Preet_12

Omg 😭 poor swara i hope she will be fine, and feeling so bad for Sanskar 😭 he loves Swara and doesnt want her to leave him. Awesome update Asha 👏 Can't wait to read the next part 👍🏼 ⭐️

Yes he loves a lot she is his life...😳
Thank u Preet...😃
ll update by tomorrow next part...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Asha122


Yes he loves a lot she is his life...😳
Thank u Preet...😃
ll update by tomorrow next part...😊


Thats great 😳 i'll wait 😳 😆

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