SwaSan TS: Bin Tere Kya Hai Jeena (Updated Pt2 on Pg6) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
Omg aashu...what an emotional update
Poor shona...she is in danger just because of her pyari behna...plzz yaar aashu usko TS mein toh jail bhijwao😡
Sansku's condition was so bad...feeling bad for him😭
Continue soon yaar🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
OMG this is spetecular! I can't tell you in words how much I loved this
Simply mind blowing! Sanskaar was crying. Swara is in pain please continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: azira07

my swasan yar make happy them yar itna emmooo kyu????

sure azi ll make them happy...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: Virmanjeevi

very emotional
eagerly waiting for the next part
update soon

Sure ll update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: Sugarbabe14

Very emotional yet write very beautifully
Loved do continue asha di
Nd do PM me
Tc
Love ishita

Thank u yar...😊
ll update soon...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: SONAL30

Omg aashu...what an emotional update

Poor shona...she is in danger just because of her pyari behna...plzz yaar aashu usko TS mein toh jail bhijwao😡
Sansku's condition was so bad...feeling bad for him😭
Continue soon yaar🤗

Sonal sending jail ll be difficult..
I ll make sure that her deeds comes infront of everyone...
ll update soon yar...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Saraa.

OMG this is spetecular! I can't tell you in words how much I loved this

Simply mind blowing! Sanskaar was crying. Swara is in pain please continue soon

Thank u so much Sara...😊
ll Continue soon...😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
loved it..bechara sanskaar!!
i hope swara jaldi theek ho jaye!
thanx for d pm!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: -damon-

loved it..bechara sanskaar!!
i hope swara jaldi theek ho jaye!
thanx for d pm!

Welcome yar...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note: Pls ignore if any mistakes. Hope u all like it... Thought to complete but got an idea so continuing it for one more part.

PART 2:

He was crying like anything but suddenly a hand on his shoulder made him turn around, it was his mother.

The rain had stopped and she did not say anything but simply hugged him. He was all wet and vulnerable, he cried on his mother's shoulder like he used to when he was a child.

"Mom I love Swara a lot. I can't live without her even for a second." His mother kept silent and just hugged him tighter. I have made a big mistake mom, I never told her I loved her. Now I have lost her before I could even tell how much I love her, how much I cared for her, how she is my life and my everything.

Sujatha pulled him away and said then go tell her.

She cupped his face looked at his eyes and continued "Go and tell her how much you love her. You still have time tell her everything in your heart, don't leave anything."

He looked at her surprised "But Mom, she is unconscious."

Sujatha: I'm sure she will hear you if you speak to her from your heart.

Sanskaar(St): His mother was right he should tell her.

He got up and went inside hospital. Everyone present their can understand his state. But without seeing anyone directly he went inside and sat beside her.

"Swara" He whispered holding her hand.

Swara I am very sorry I am really very stupid by saying so he kissed her palm.

After kavitha died I was living a very sad life and was only keen in taking revenge. But you showed me the right path. I started to be happy again. You made into a good person and also a good son. I never said this to you but you have turned my life around.

You know you are amazing. You are a great Daughter, Sister, Bahu, Bhaabi and most importantly the Best WIFE in the world. I know our marriage is fake but in my heart only u r my wife not only now but for next seven births.

He took her hand and placed it on his heart and said "Listen every beat of my heart is calling your name. Mein nahin janta ye kaise hogaya, lekin mujhe tum se pyaar hogaya. I never thought I would love again. But it happened. I love you SWARA SANSKAAR MAHESHWARI. Bahut pyaar karta hu tumse."

He placed a kiss on her forehead"Without you my life is nothing. Please don't leave me. I will take you wherever you want. I will take you to have panipuri, ice-cream even if it's night. As per ur wish you can keep AC temperature also. But please open your eyes. I cannot live without you even for a second."

Suddenly her fingers moved. It was a slight movement but he felt it. He thought he was imagining it at first so he watched her hand closely in anticipation and it moved again.

He rushed outside calling for the doctor. Everyone got frightened seeing how Sanskaar was looking for the doctor like a crazy person but the moment he said her hand was moving they all got relieved and excited.

Everyone along with doctor went inside. Doctor checked her and said Congratulations Sanskaar your wife is out of danger.

Sanskaar was speechless with teary eyes. Swara he called her name. She tried to open her eyes slowly but to due light she closed her eyes. Again he called her Swara she opened her eyes. She scanned the total room and asked where am I? What happened to me? She felt pain all over body and head.

Sanskaar wished he could take away all her pain, hug her tight and kiss her. He wanted to tell her and show how much he loved her, but everyone was in the room. He stood at the back behind everyone and seeing her, he was grateful to God for answering his prayers and bringing back his Swara and a single tear escaped his eyes he discreetly wiped it and smiled.

Sujatha understood Sanskaar situation

Sujatha: Let Swara rest we will go out. Sanskaar will be here

Sanskaar goes near bed sits beside her and calls Swara. She opens her eyes. He takes her hand in his and says "I was very much afraid but thank god you r safe and I am very happy."

Swara: She smiles and says I thought you will be happy becos there will be no one to disturb u during night and none will quarrel with u also no one will ask you to switch off AC and all

Sanskaar: Don't joke without u I can never be happy. You know, it was the worst feeling in the world, when that truck hit you and I couldn't do anything for you, and when the doctor told us that there was no hope I felt as if my heart stopped beating. I was so scared, how would I live without you.

Swara is listening to what he is saying and there are tears in her eyes.

Sanskaar: I felt God was punishing me for not telling you how I felt. But i want to tell you now as i cant waste even a single sec.

I LOVE YOU SO MUCH SWARA. I CANT LIVE WITHOUT YOU AND DONT WANT TO LIVE WITHOUT YOU...

Now Swara is unable to hold her tears. By seeing her tears Sanskaar got tensed and thought may be she doesn't love him.

Sanskaar: Swara pls don't cry if you don't love me no problem but I can't see you...

Before he could complete he got a slap and he could just stare at her while his hands were on his cheeks (Swara slapped with her left hand as in this condition only it was somewhat better)

Sanskaar comes out of shock and asks y did u slap?

Swara: Since I am not in a good condition slap was not hard once I become proper I will beat you with broom stick

Sanskaar: Hey first tell me why do u want to beat me?

Swara: Is this any kind of place to propose where only machines and medicines are present.

Sanskaar smiles by listening to her reply

Swara: If you love me why didn't you tell me for these many days. I was dying to listen it from you.

Sanskaar: By holding his ears he says Sorry Jaan pls forgive me.

Swara(St): He is looking so cute how can I be angry. No swara you should not let him know that you are not angry. Lets see what and all he will do.

Swara: I won't give forgive so easily.

Sanskaar: Ok then I am ready to do anything so that u forgive me

Swara: Promise???

Sanskaar: Haa Promise

Swara: Are you Sure???

Sanskaar: Hello Sanskaar Maheshwari will never step back from his word. I am ready for anything.

Swara is thinking and Sanskaar is looking at her.

Swara: Ok Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari you will have to propose me that too infront of everyone

Sanskaar: What infront of everyone. Swara are u crazy? How is it possible?

Swara: I don't know that's your problem

Sanskaar: If I won't do it then?

Swara: Then I will go and stay with my maa

Sanskaar: Now where did maa come from?

Swara: I am talking about leaving home and stay with my maa if you won't propose me infront of everyone

Sanskaar: You are behaving like typical wife

Swara: What's there if it's fake marriage also marriage only and I am your wife that's it

Sanskaar felt happy listening to the word wife but immediately remembered challenge

Sanskaar: Swara you know I love u and I know u love me too then why this challenge and all. I said what's there in my heart you also say it will be enough

Swara: No chance. If you won't do as I say I will not tell what's there in my heart and I will leave to Baadi that's my final decision

Sanskaar(St): Arey Sanskaar beta kaha phaas gaya tum?? Ab kya karey???

Swara: So what's your final decision Mr. Sanskaar Maheshwari??

Before Sanskaar answers Sujatha and Shomi came inside.

Sanskaar(St): If you want Swara to be with you and listen those words from her you should do it. Please god save me and show a way to escape from this challenge.

Swara(St): Ha ha i know he wont do it. I was just annoying him. Lets see what he will do.

So will Sanskaar Propose Swara in front of everyone? Lets wait and see?

Edited by Asha122 - 10 years ago

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