FF: Pyaar Ke Rishtey

shreya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#421

Loved it. ...
Thanks for the pm...

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 9 years ago

#422

Simply beautiful
Poor lucky
Continue soon
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Sana

@Swasan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#423

Awesome...
Loved it...
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Preethi

@preethis

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Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Been a busy week... just read parts 31 32 33 34 & 35... awesome updates.. love the way the story is progressing. Keep up the writing.. waiting for next part...

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gayu6

@gayu6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#425

Little emotional part swaragini. Continue soon

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naran1986

@naran1986

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Posted: 9 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: bgscribe

Ragini questioned Laksh, "Laksh, you play guitar?"

"No. This belongs to Bhai. He used to sing in college and picked up guitar as well."

"Then what is this doing here?"

"When Bhai graduated, he was planning to move out and set up the business. So he gave me and said he would teach me. Due to family resistance, he left house in fury and then the accident. He grew distant from all his friends and hobbies."

Wow..I wanted the same thing to happen on show i.e Sanskaar being a musician...san some how it comes out ...either swara in a jugalbandi with ragini acts like shw has sore throat or sick and somehow pataos sanskaar to play and sing ..sanskaar does not know she knows .

If I had a good writing style I would have written this story by now but I am not very confidant...
I am really interested to see how you proceed because you are the first one in this forum to come up with this idea.
very good chapter

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Chahat Doshi

@Chahat_A_Doshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Nice

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Sharon

@Sparkler8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: naran1986

Wow..I wanted the same thing to happen on show i.e Sanskaar being a musician...san some how it comes out ...either swara in a jugalbandi with ragini acts like shw has sore throat or sick and somehow pataos sanskaar to play and sing ..sanskaar does not know she knows .

If I had a good writing style I would have written this story by now but I am not very confidant...
I am really interested to see how you proceed because you are the first one in this forum to come up with this idea.
very good chapter

Hi Naran, I think this is the first time you have commented on my FF. thanks for that.

Here Sanskaar is only vaguely interested and in reality also, most of the guys pick up guitar in college. So that's quite close to what's normal.

Would love to read your story of Sanskaar Swara jugalbandi. When I joined the forum for another show I too didn't have the confidence to write. Even the first FF I started, I couldn't complete it. This is my second FF. So please start writing. Just let your imagination flow into words.

At least start with an OS and see the response. Do pm me when you post any of your works.

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