It was written in the stars...A SwaSan SS - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: medhasarkar

I don't know how I missed this one...maybe I overlooked it or something...but anyway...

this SS made me feel like fairytales happen...and the prince and the princesses unite...only after a fashion...
but they do happen.

Swasan soulmates.

I remembered the lines of Prince of Persia movie...
"Some lives are connected across time by an ancient calling connecting them through the ages...DESTINY"



Thanks so much, Medha. Wow--that was a nice quote, I've seen the Prince of Persia, but missed noticing this dialogue. You certainly do have a terrific memory 😊

That quote reminded me of one by Rumi, BTW, which also really seems to fit SwaSan: When you seek love with all your heart,you shall find it's echoes across the universe.

😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi...Just finished the 3rd & final chapter. I am just lost for words to describe this story. You have written it so wonderfully.

The way you have shown Sanskaar and Swara's confession of their feelings for each other--seriously, it brought happy tears to my eyes! And their first kiss-- so sweet and dreamy!

Can I request that you try to continue this. Maybe add an epilogue or something.

Anyway, am off to read this story again. I seriously don't think I can get enough of it. After that, I plan to read your OS which you had told me, is a midquel to this one. Will comment on that later!




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Posted: 9 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: rafafan

Hi...Just finished the 3rd & final chapter. I am just lost for words to describe this story. You have written it so wonderfully.

The way you have shown Sanskaar and Swara's confession of their feelings for each other--seriously, it brought happy tears to my eyes! And their first kiss-- so sweet and dreamy!

Can I request that you try to continue this. Maybe add an epilogue or something.

Anyway, am off to read this story again. I seriously don't think I can get enough of it. After that, I plan to read your OS which you had told me, is a midquel to this one. Will comment on that later!






Thanks a lot for your encouraging comment. Glad that you are planning on reading more of my works. Look forward to your reviews. 😊

As for continuing this SS further--I don't think I would be doing that. I had already wrapped up the story as I planned it...but I already have 2 OS's which are kinda/ sorta linked to this one. One is the midquel "Their Moments together", and the other is my OS "Their future together", which could be taken as a sequel to this SS (after a year and half or so time gap from the ending of the SS). Hope you like reading them!


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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Thanks so much, Medha. Wow--that was a nice quote, I've seen the Prince of Persia, but missed noticing this dialogue. You certainly do have a terrific memory 😊

That quote reminded me of one by Rumi, BTW, which also really seems to fit SwaSan: When you seek love with all your heart,you shall find it's echoes across the universe.

😊


its there at the beginning and at the end of the movie.😆 twice.and both times sunset is happening...so dunno..maybe they were trying to show that these soulmates ride off into sunset together...or happily ever after in variation. and the rumi quote seems to be the inspiration for the prince of persiawalo😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Do write more. Really our forum is having great writers.pls a small request wenever u r updating pls pm me

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Hey...thanks for the comment. 😊 Well, this SS is concluded with the 3 parts...but I am working on some ideas for a new Fic, and hopefully should have something up by next week.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: gayu6

Do write more. Really our forum is having great writers.pls a small request wenever u r updating pls pm me



Sure yaar. Will PM you when I write more. Thanks for reading! 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: medhasarkar


its there at the beginning and at the end of the movie.😆 twice.and both times sunset is happening...so dunno..maybe they were trying to show that these soulmates ride off into sunset together...or happily ever after in variation. and the rumi quote seems to be the inspiration for the prince of persiawalo😆



😊 Well, you know if an on screen pair is magical, if many of the quotes/ poems/ songs you used to love from before, suddenly start seeming to be tailor made for that couple! This is certainly happening to me in a big way now. I have diagnosed myself with SwaSan-itis. And I don't want to get better, either!

Thanks for reading and your comments. I know how wonderfully, crisply, analytically you write, so such praise from you is tremendously encouraging.



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesomme ...!!!! 👏
ur an Awesomme writer i must say !!! 😆😊😉
do keep updating us with ur ss i really seriousllyy loved reading ur story !! 😆👍🏼
write more plz !! 😊
and yep ek humble request hai whenever u write can u PM me plzz 😃
if u can then thnk u so much in advance 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ammiey

Awesomme ...!!!! 👏

ur an Awesomme writer i must say !!! 😆😊😉
do keep updating us with ur ss i really seriousllyy loved reading ur story !! 😆👍🏼
write more plz !! 😊
and yep ek humble request hai whenever u write can u PM me plzz 😃
if u can then thnk u so much in advance 😊



Hey there. Thanks so much for reading and for your comment. 😊 I will surely PM you for my future work.

As regards continuing this SS, I'd already finished the story arc I'd planned in these 3 chapters, don't really have plans to further update this one. But I have written a midquel to this SS: in the form of my SwaSan OS "Their Moments together".

Have also written another OS, which is a kind of sequel to this SS: "Their future together". Apart from these, have also written a standalone TS: "Second chances".


All these are my completed works on SwaSan, so do read them when time permits. 😊



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum



Hey there. Thanks so much for reading and for your comment. 😊 I will surely PM you for my future work.

As regards continuing this SS, I'd already finished the story arc I'd planned in these 3 chapters, don't really have plans to further update this one. But I have written a midquel to this SS: in the form of my SwaSan OS "Their Moments together".

Have also written another OS, which is a kind of sequel to this SS: "Their future together". Apart from these, have also written a standalone TS: "Second chances".


All these are my completed works on SwaSan, so do read them when time permits. 😊



sure certainlyy 😉 btw thnk u so very muchh n if u'll write any other story then do pm me plz 😊😳
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