It was written in the stars...A SwaSan SS - Page 8

Originally posted by: -Sweetzo.Tuhi-

Hey..!

I just read the whole SS and i have to say yours is the best..!

You're such an amazing writer⭐️

Please do write more...! And thanks a lot for this beautiful story 😊

Originally posted by: anu91

Hello...

Throughout the story no words from me...

Speachless...

Enjoyed reading it...

Seriously superb sanskar care and the realisation from each one if them so cute. ...last part u nailed it...

Plz do write more stories on swara sanskar

While updating any of ur stories plz pm me the updates...

Originally posted by: rafafan

Hi! Am a new member here. Was a silent reader for long time, then just recently created a login as many Fics were restricted to members. Am so unbelievably glad that I did, and got a chance to read this work of yours!

Its just awesome, amazing, splendid. I could go on and on. I have just no words to describe the beauty of your writing. I have just finished the 1st chapter and I couldnt resist dropping this comment as I want to read it again! will comment on the other parts later once I finish them.

Everything you described was so perfect. The way you have portrayed the friendship developing between swara n sanskaar. The way he slowly realizes his feelings. I loved your witty humor also--the bit where you show sanskaar as being jealous of "Varun", swara's favorite TV star!

I really loved the way you explained their emotions when sanskaar tries to keep his distance from swara. How they both feel so unhappy being apart. Felt so relieved when that got sorted out.

am gonna go back and read the chapter again! pls pls accept my buddy request and send me pms for your future work.

Originally posted by: gayu6

Forget to comment. Nice ss. I really loved the final part.Both swasan's cofession.Pls do continue😊

Originally posted by: rafafan

Just finished reading the 2nd chapter (I must have read the 1st one at least 3 times today morning!) You are brilliant writer. 👏 👏You deserve a standing ovation! Everything was so amazing.

Loved how you described swara's realization of her love, at their evening out to the ballet. Thanks for the link, I was listening to the music from Swan Lake and imagining Swara and Sanskaar sitting together watching that! So lovely, and an amazing concept that you have woven into your story.

Also, loved the confrontation scene between AP & Sanskaar, as well as between Swara--Sanskaar and Lakshya after he finds out the truth. It was so awesome, the way Swara tells Lakshya clearly she is not interested in getting back together with him. I was literally also doing 🥳 when Shomi tells Shekhar that she cannot forgive him so easily!

Really liked the way you have divided your chapters into sub chapters, each with a very intriguing title. Ok, am now going off to read the 2nd chapter again!